OMG guys! Thank you all for your ideas! Some of you want Jack and Elsa to have sex, and if you want I'll make a oneshot in the future, but it wouldn't be in this story because I don't want the rating changed.


Jack's P.O.V

Elsa and the girls were planning something, I knew it. But I don't know what.

In the middle of the night, the boys woke me up.

"Jack! Jack! Something happened! GET YOUR FREAKING BUTT OUT OF THE BED!" Miles shouted in my ear.

"What?" I ask, rubbing the sleep off my eyes.

"The girls are hurt!" Nemo says.

"Like broken leg hurt?" I ask, becoming worried.

"I don't know! All I know is, is that Jamie ran in here, shouted that the girls were hurt, and ran out!" Nemo replies.

"Okay, let me go brush my hair and we'll go." I say. I needed to look good while I was the knight in shining armor!

"Elsa could be hurt," Stitch adds.

"Holy... Crab! MOVE IT BOYS! COME ON!" I shout, running out of the cabin.


Finally, we reached the cabin after I constantly yelled at the boys, saying that my grandma runs faster then them.

I don't know if you can run when you're dead, but Elsa could be hurt!

"This is spooky," Nemo says.

"C'mon," I push open the door, and sharply took an intake of breath at what I saw.

All the girls were huddled around Elsa, sobbing.

"Jack!" Sophie calls.

"What happened?" I ask.

"A-A man came in here, and h-he had a gun, and-" Rhiannon broke off in sobs.

My eyes began to mist up, and I pushed a girl- What was her name? Natalie? Natasha?- aside, and saw Elsa.

She was sprawled on the cabin floor, and she was shot.

"Elsa?" I sat down next to her. I grabbed her hand.

"Elsa, please don't be de-" I suddenly get cut off by Elsa jumping up and screaming, "boo!"

I jumped up also, screaming like a girl, pushing kids away. I suddenly realized I had been pranked.

"Wait a minute... Elsa?" I turn, and she and the girls were laughing while the boys pouted.

"Aww! Jack, you do care!" Elsa says in a baby voice.

"Well-I-Uh," I stutter, looking for an excuse.

"HE LOVES HER! HE LOVES HER!" Bianca and Nicole shriek, everyone joining in. Even the boys.

I look at the new boy in my cabin, Peter, and the new girl in Elsa's cabin, Wendy.

"Oh yeah, Peter? What about how you feel for Wendy?" I smirk.

"I-I don't know what you're talking about." Peter's face was redder than his hair. Everyone was silent.

"Aw, is little Peter scared to admit that-"

"Jack!" Elsa scolded.

"I sorry! Pwease don't be mad!" I made a puppy dog face.

"Out you go boys, out," Elsa says, pushing us out.

"Wait, where's Jamie?" I ask.

"BOO!" Jamie jumps out, screaming, causing me to scream like a girl, and more laughter.


As I snuggled in my bed, I thought to myself.

If anyone killed Elsa, I don't know what I would do.

I would shave their hair in the night.

No, I would murder them back.

Wait, I would commit suicide so I can be with Elsa in heaven.

I don't know what I would do. I'm unpredictable.

But nobody would hurt my girl like that.


Question: Do you think that Jack did care when Elsa was shot, more than a friend? Why?

BONUS QUESTION: Do you think I should make a oneshot in the future, of Jelsa sex? (It won't be in this story, it's a whole other thing!)