kuondokana of Simba

by Mafanikio

It had been many weeks since the outlanders had joined the pride landers as one. the pride had been living happily till a Lion arrives at the Pride Lands claiming to be Simba's long lost brother Kuvutia. Kuvutia brain washes most of the pride against Simba. Follow Simba as he and Nala save the Pride Lands from a murder for the umpteenth time.

21. Announcement

Hey guys, sorry for the late upload, I've been taking care a lot more while writing. Will explain further down.

All Hail King Scar

So, Simba made it, and that's good, but that other rouge could still cause trouble. He's an issue, that's for sure.

Starzinmieyez

Keep going with this, but maybe try to be a little more descriptive? And I just thought I'd let you know that it's "minutes", not "minutes".

Thankyou for pointing that one out. I admit to my poor spelling and the fact that I have got into a bad habit in uploading as fast as possible without thinking as much as I meant to and not thinking as much about the quality of the content. Thank you, when I saw your review, I made me think about what I'm doing more and yes I need to be more descriptive. Thanks again.

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Overall announcement.

After writing this story for some time, I came to realise this needed to be planned a lot more and written more slowly and carefully, only recently I realised that my content is not the best I can do so I decided to finish this story when it hits its ending. After that I'm planning on doing a re write of this story. Some parts of the plot may be slightly different, but I will improve it as much as my ability can. As for Chapter 1, it totally sucks, I've noticed that most of the views are on chapter 1, so this could mean that people are not interested and also to do with that chapter 1 has not sent and form of spark in the brain that would keep the reader reading. Chapter one should have in my head is Simba walking though is kingdom, description of his stride, how amazing and kingly his appearance is (Hope you get what I mean). I will also start editing some of the chapters to make them better so if you see the story looking different then that Is why. Their will not be as frequent uploads anymore sorry, I want my content a little better.

I did a chapter called trailer, but found my self not really following it (followed a bit of it) so that may be taken down.

Also I would like to announce that I will be also working on a Christmas Lion King story in time for Christmas for you all.

I'm sorry there is not a chapter 21, there will not be for a few weeks sorry.

See ya around, feel free to ask anything and suggest anything thank you for your patience ;)