A/N
Okaii I'm healthy fer once lmao...ikr...i didn't think it was possible either ^^
I am alwaiis obsessed with music but now more than ever, just b/c like yeahz….I have been real busy with my hair…I know that sounds really weird lmao..but I has been tryin to get it the waii I want it fer a few daiis..and I finally yayz fer that..Im babysitting my brother this summer..so im occupied with that allot…..wow this authors note ish pointless…..lmao yall enjoy it ^^
So now…here ish the chapter..maybe ;P
O...haha I just remembered…ok, I am really trying to develop characters… two of the characters in particular in my story are Christians, they have a conversation about their beliefs…so please don't find it offensive….you might not even want to read it…but it is just something the character would say...I mean no disrespect by anything I put everyone is entitled to their beliefs. And the characters have there…yes I agree with what they say…but you don't have to…so I really don't want any angry reviews or jack ass replies okay? It was simply for the characters…and I'm not trying to shove beliefs down anyone's throats…. And things like that won't be in every chapter….it was simply for conversation… So I got that covered…. Now no one should be angry
Also…when I write most of this…it's like midnight and over...so I'm really tired…but my best ideas (yesh upsidedown ones lmao kass/tori/whoever yoo are now) xD come during this time...so I write then…plus its harder to get distracted….but I make allot of like errors…like I put form instead of from…and my spell check doesn't pick it up… I go through it….but sometimes I don't pick things like that up..so please excuse any of those thank yoo……now…..here is the chapter ^^
Vince made his way to dry land…and did as most of the other campers had done
Confessional: Vince: Never again…….will I do anything like this….
~*~*~*~*Audrey, Ami, Zach ~*~*~*~*~*~
Zach: Look at Grace sitting there, she looks miserable.
Ami; Well…shouldn't she be?
Zach: What?
Ami: Well…I mean, she didn't even compete, she could have cost it for her team...she should feel bad
Zach: I guess you're right….
Ami: I am, and your sister would be kind of warped if she didn't feel regret for this…her being upset shows that she wishes she made a different decision
Zach: Yeah, I wish she had to...I just still don't understand what's with her…not even two days on this mountain…and she's acting like a different person
Ami: I guess that's just what happens….
Zach: It doesn't seem like it's happened to any one else…
Ami: Well give it time...and maybe
Audrey: You guys, I think I'm out…..
Ami: Me too…..
Zach: Seriously?
Ami: Yeah, it's freezing
Audrey: It can't be good for the body
Zach: Alright, get on shore…and warm up
Ami: O believe me
Ami&& Audrey: we will
~*~*~*~*~*~*Karma && Brock~*~*~*~*
Karma: You out yet?
Brock: I don't thinks so
Karma: You look pretty cold….
Brock: I'm fine; you however look like pitiful, shivering and all
Karma: Talk for yourself, it looks like your being electrocuted
Brock: You sound like it
Karma: So do you smart one
Brock: Regardless, I'm staying
Karma: You won't last much longer, you'll be out soon
Brock: You wish
Karma: I know
Brock: Fat chance of me being out before you
Karma: Slim chance of me giving up that easily
Brock: You talk allot of smack, but it's not going to get you any where
Karma: I don't need my smack to get you out of this challenge; the water will take care of that for me
Brock: Whatever….
Confessional: Karma: (smirks) I knew I had him at whatever, no way was he going to stay in any longer his mind was on the cold cold cold cold cold cold cold cold water again, mine was on the tattoo shop…some sound strategy I had
While Ami and Audrey were swimming up, they were met by Brock, who did the same as them; dried off, got dressed and sat down.
Confessional: Ami: That challenge was brutal…honestly I have no idea who will win…Kassie is crazy enough to, But Jon seems like he's used to things like this…so I have no idea
Confessional: Audrey: Who do I think will win? I guess My money would be on Zach, He's so busy thinking about Grace, he's not even concentrating on how cold the water is…I think He'll make it far.
Confessional: Brock:……………… That challenged sucked
Chris: Only a few more campers left…who can stand the cold for long enough to win this challenge for there team.
Millie: I don't have what it takes…..
Millie again like the others, got out of the water, dried and dresses, then took a seat.
Confessional: Millie: I'm so ready to go paint now.. I have so many ideas, and all new perspectives…that was an odd challenge… I hope I never have to do anything like that again…
~*~*~*~Time lapse~*~*~*
(At this point all the campers are so cold...they aren't moving any more so the water is extremely still)
~*~*~*~*~Lena&&Jon~*~*~**~*~*~
Jon: I wonder what time it is…. We'eve had to be in here for atleas'un'our
Lena: Yeah, It feel like it's been five…..
Jon: I reckon that's a bout right
Lena: Yeah…
Jon: I wish Chris didn't have these dang lights on
Lena: Umm….why?
Jon: You can't see the stars, them mountain stars are the purt-ee-ist thang at this time…
Lena: Only you would know that
Jon: ...Well other than you
Lena smiled some, but then her face grew serious again.
Lena: Jon…I think I'm out
Jon: O, Alright, go get warm
Lena: I'm planning on it…Jon don't stay in to long….You don't have anything to prove, you won the last challenge for us
Jon: I'll get out before I freeze to death, don't worry
Lena: Alright…I'm out then
Lena swam to shore, and dried off then she got in her clothes and sat, watching Jon shivering in the water.
Confessional: Lena: I really think Jon's going to win this challenge, it's almost like he enjoys it or something, either way my moneys on him.
~*~*~*~*~ Terry, Kassie, Dean~*~*~*~*~*~
Terry: What did you do to her?
Dean: Nothing I swear
Terry: Yeah right
Kassie: No he really didn't
Terry: Well then what happened?
Dean: I was just trying to keep her from drowning
Kassie: Dean, it's not your fault…
Dean: I feel like it was….
Terry: Yeah, Kabran seems uptight like that
Kassie: She has a reason to be, and it's not her fault!
Dean: What's the reason…? I don't understand…
Kassie: I….can't say…..sorry
Dean: Well I'm going to find out…
(Dean starts to swim up to shore but Kassie stops him)
Kassie: No...She's not ready yet…don't scare her anymore
Dean: Am I scary???
Terry: Well….
Kassie: No you're not scary… Kabran just…uum…gets scared easily
Dean: I've noticed….
~*~*~ Leilani~*~*~*~
(thinking)
I'm going to win this challenge…..I can win this challenge…this is nothing for me, I'll show my team, and everyone at home that I can win this…It'll be a piece of cake anyway…
So let's see, who my competition…is…
Hmm….Dean's itching to talk to Kabran, and Kassie will have to have to talk to Kabran before he can, so they're out.
Alicia will be out soon enough, she can't be used to this kind of cold…the only thing keeping her in is looking good for Hunter.
Huh, once Zach mulls over what's happened he'll realize he needs to talk to Grace, which will be soon enough.
Karma, soon enough the cold will kick in, whatever he little strategy is, it will ware of soon enough.
Terry, he's nothing without Jon, so he'll bow out soon enough….
Hmm that brings me to Jon….he's been dealing fine with this; even having Lena quit didn't phase him. I think he's my only competition, but I'll be able to beat him… I've set my mind to it, he's just going on tolerance, which will wear out.
~*~*~*Karma~*~*~*
(Thinking)
Tattoo shop…It will all be worth it…tattooing people on the east coast… Vince piercing people…the business will be amazing, and the money.
But the artwork will be even better...people will come from all over to have tattoos done by me.
I might even get a TV. Show…
I wonder what my novelty tattoo will be…. Like a course edged cross…maybe a free flowing shaped thing…kind of like water…
Hmmm…water
(Karma looked around)
This water I'm in is pretty cold…. Everyone on shore looks so nice and warm….. Maybe I should go join them…
No! I can't do that….. but I think I need to…I'm actually extremely cold...I can hardly move…..or feel myself moving I'm so numb.
Maybe going to shore would be a good idea…
No what's an even better idea…. Tattoo specials…yeah just think about tattoo's….cold, cold…tat….water……
I'm out…
Karma: I'm out….
Chris: This brings the wild boars an even higher chance...of….failure!...heheh…
Chef: Of course...it's still anybodies game…
Chris: Dude seriously……the Copper heads won the last challenge, and they have farm boy… there isn't any way that the Wild Boards are gonna win
Chef: I don't know...the angry brother looks pretty concentrated, and the skater doesn't look like she's ready for another loss
Chris: I'm telling you the Copper Heads are gonna win
Chef: You wanna bet
Chris: Alright, If the Wild Boars win, I'll eat that crap you feed the campers for a day.
Chef: And if the copper heads win?
Chris: If the copper heads win…. You have to stop acting creepy…
Chef: Fool I'm not acting…wait are you implying that I'm creepy? HUH?? ARE YOU!?!
Confessional: Chris: Whoa….seriously that was close...haha Chef looked like he was about to blow a gasket….funny stuff…..I just hope he buys it that I was kidding
Chris: Ummm…heheh…no I was just kidding…dude seriously…calm down…
Confessional: Chef: I heard some of these campers were gonna get Chris back for this challenge…and I want in on it…. No way that fools gonna get away with calling me creepy….I am not CREEPY!
Chef: (fake laugh) hahaha…alright...well then Chris if the copper heads win…what do I have to do?
Chris: O…how about you compete in the next competition with the campers
Chef: And no moneys involved?
Chris: Umm…of course money is involved….. Fifty bucks sound about right?
Chef: Fifty it is
Chef: (Holds out hand)
Chris: (shakes hand)
Chef: (laughs evilly)
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~On Shore~*~*~*~*~*~*~
~*~*~Asher && Alexandra~*~*~
(Hushed tones)
Asher: So…..how are we planning on getting Chris back….
Alexandra: Um...what do you mean ...get Chris back? Haha…funny idea though
Asher: Yeah right…look I'm not upset or anything…please…I mean I want to help…
Alexandra: Alright….well I was thinking of using an element we're both good with…
Asher: Haha...burn baby burn
Alexandra: Yeah…the only thing is I can't decide what to fry; I'm stuck between all his hair care products...or his teeth whitener
Asher: How about we blow up the whole trailer?
Alexandra: Brilliant!
Asher: (smiles some) I try…..
Alexandra: The only thing now is…..How we distract him…I mean we'll all be going to bed after this challenge; his trailer won't be available for vandalizing…
~*~*~*~Chef && Chris~*~*~*~
Chris: (takes last sip of hot chocolate)
Chef: (Overhears Alexandra and Asher) Hmm...I hear some kids plotting against you...let me set them straight and get us some more hot chocolate
Chris: Alright…but remember we need them alive for the show…
Chef: Fool….I'm not going to kill them
Chef: (Takes mugs and heads over to Alexandra and Asher)
~*~*~*~* Alexandra, Chef, && Asher ~*~*~*~*~
Asher: That is an imposition...hhmm we'll think of something
Chef: (walks up) Come to the kitchen now….I won't have you plotting against my co-host…..(whispers) without me…
Alexandra && Asher ( follow Chef into kitchen)
*~*~*~*~Millie, Ami, && Karma ~*~*~*~*~
Ami: I'm still cold…..
Karma: At least you're not shivering anymore….
Millie: It's still no where near as bad as it was right? We should be happy
Karma: How can we be happy when we know we were so close to winning this challenge…
Ami: O please…the rest of the people in could go for another hour… we weren't any where close to winning
Millie: She's right….
Karma: Millie you don't have much room to be talking, we both lasted longer than you
Ami: Whoa harsh much...she was just putting her input in
Millie: Yeah seriously
Karma: Well your input wasn't needed
Millie: Well to bad, deal with the fact that I did…or go sit some where else
Ami: Haha awesome girl...tell it like it is
Karma: ...whatever….
~*~*~*~Vince, Jamie && Brock ~*~*~*~
Jamie: Ha…I can finally feel my hands again….
Brock: (irritated/angry) Good for you….
Vince: Look man...just because my sister psyched you out, doesn't mean you should be al angry
Brock: She didn't psyche me out…I was tired of the challenge
Vince: Sure….
Jamie: Well it doesn't really matter now…we're all out, and we just need to focus on what's at hand
Vince: And that would be….?
Jamie: Well I'm not sure…but it's not arguing over why we got out of the water.
Brock: Ok…fine
Vince: Whatever
~*~*~*~Kabran && Hunter~*~*~*~
Hunter: You okay KK?
Kabran: Hunter, I just…the first thing that popped into my head when he touched me was pain, and blood, and my…step…dad
Hunter: I know, and it's not your fault
Kabran: But I mean….I know he has to be confused…and it seems like…I was just being rude…But… I couldn't help feeling what I did….and I mean…it's just...but...ugh
Hunter: You shouldn't feel bad for having the emotions you did, and truthfully how could you trust the guy…I mean I'm not saying you can't but… It hasn't even been two days here…so you have every reason to feel the way you did….
Kabran: Any normal girl would have flirted and… smiled and been nice…. I was harsh and cold… and...I hate…it…I hate the way I act... I hate myself for it…
Hunter: Don't say that Kabran…if you should hate anyone its Frank your no good *beep* of a step dad…he's the reason you feel this way… don't beat yourself up over it….
Kabran: Yeah you're right...he does that for me enough huh? (Smiles weakly)
Hunter: (frowns)
Kabran: Hunter ….Thanks for the pep talk….
Hunter: Anytime KK
Hunter: (Holds Kabran's hand) {replaces hug}
~*~*~*~ Patrick, Tyler && Alex ~*~*~*~*~
Alex: I'm real glad I signed up for this show….
Patrick: Um…you are?
Tyler: and why….?
Alex: I had never swam in a river, drove a tractor, just things I wasn't sure if I'd be able to do when I had cancer…not knowing if I'd live or not...but now I know I'll get to do some things no one else had you know…I small adventure I guess….meep
Patrick: Wow….cancer?
Alex: Yeah…I've had it a few times….
Tyler: I'm sorry to hear that…must have been tough on you….
Alex: Yeah it was….sometimes I just wanted to die….I even tried to kill myself….a few times...I failed every time though...that's when I realized I was meant to live longer…. And for something…and that's when god found me…. It was a Friday night…I was so sick…crying and cutting…I was sick mentally and physically…. And god called me to him...I confessed my sins to him, and I felt a warmth and safety Id never felt before…and I knew god would never leave me… I was saved that Sunday and Baptized… I've been living life for him ever since…
Tyler: That's an awesome testimony…mines not quite as grand…but still…. I had been raised in a Christian family, I always resented it…. I thought my family was just pushing it on me… and I wanted to rebel against it….just like I wanted to rebel against everything. My parents didn't approve of my style…my screaming, my friends…and I slowly slipped away from god….I had been saved when I was young…but never really understood it… and I just did it for my parents….So I had completely grown away from my family and god...I had dreads in my hair, I swore constantly, I didn't care… and then God called me back to him… like he promises he will…once you know god in your heart…he'll never let you slip away after that...he's the shepherd….if a sheep strays from the path...like I did….he'll guide you back…and he did. After that I cut my hair pretty short… I started singing for god…. I got back into church, made amends with my family….and now I realize how stupid I was for straying away from god…
Patrick: I don't really know about god…. I mean how can you pray to something that's not there? You can't see?
Alex: I see god work wonders in my life every day… I feel him like the wind on a summer day. Allot of times God does something...and I don't realize it till later...but sure enough I see the mark he made, sooner or later…
Patrick: Alright…that's just luck , or Karma… and I don't mean the chick…plus if there was a god...he'd answer prayers…but he doesn't…and you can't say that god answers every prayer you pray…because some things just don't go the way you want now do they?
Alex: That's why my mum stopped having faith in god…because she thought god didn't answer her prayers…I believed her for a while…. I mean, she kept praying for me to get better…and for this and that… And sometimes it takes god a while to answer our prayers…not because it's hard for him…but because he knows when and what is supposed to happen...but with time he answers all prayers… and Accidents happen for a reason….everything does….god has a purpose for everything on this earth….and even if we don't realize he's answered our prayer…doesn't mean he hasn't sometimes we're blind to the fact he has, and sometimes he answers our prayers in a way we never imagined….
Patrick: Alright…. If god is so great then how come the people in the church are so "snoody"… and "stuck" up
Tyler: Obviously not everyone is like that…take me and Alex for example…
Patrick: But the bulk of Christians are…it's a turn off…If they know the "love of god" how can they be so "judgmental"?
Alex: We're all only human…we're sinners and from time to time we will all be judgmental…but god forgives us all of those sins…he died on the cross just so that when we sinned we'd be forgiven that's why its not about living life good, one sin weighs more than a thousand good things times a million that you could ever accomplish…god knew this though and that's why he sent his son Jesus Christ to die for us… so that'd no matter what sin we commit we can be forgiven… and sure enough we are…however the reason allot of Church people are "snoody" is because they think highly of themselves...they think because they are Christians they are better than everyone else but that's not true…..we're all just filthy rags and not worthy of god…but he loves us any way...the only way we can be worthy in any fashion to him, is when we have him in our heart…but allot of Christians make the same mistake others do…and get arrogant …try to live life by good deeds…and it is a turn off….being all "judgmental" and "princessy"
Patrick: Okay, you're entitled to your beliefs and me mine…personally… Madi is my only Goddess….I love her with everything I am…
Alex: And you're entitled to yours….
Tyler: It's probably best we leave it at that.
Patrick: Probably….
A/N OKaii so everyone… this ish all imma right fer now…sowwies, hope yoo all enjoyed this chapter..please please please review I feel like no one ish reading this and I need imput..i have been tyring to realleh incorporate everyone's character..if I haven't im sowwies….and I will try n fix it..but if yoo dunt message meh ro leave a comment how will I know?!??! Lolz so thnx yall