"So, after the game tomorrow you think you can hang out at B-dubs?"
"Sure, as long as you're paying."
"Yeah, no problem. You'd own me a meal another time though."
Donovan chuckled as he trudged the empty snowy streets with his hands shoves in his pockets.
"I can drive us. I know you're car isn't the best when it comes to snow."
"Yeah, sure. Hey- I'll see you soon okay?
"Right, see ya." Donovan nodded looking down at the phone.
Joey Joestar-call ended.
He opened the door to their dormitory and pulled the keys from his pocket and entered their room. He felt a chill rush through him. He narrowed his eyes and flipped on the light. There was no light. Donovan slowly, stepped in and shut the door. He heard movement down the hall toward their bedrooms. He took the hockey stick from the wall beside the door. He'd use this as a defense against the intruder. He slowly crept his way to the side of the hall readying his stick. He saw a body in the doorway. He whirled around the corner to whack them but a hand caught his stick while another moved to punch him across the face. Donovan staggered but regathered himself. He's a hockey player, so fights were common. He ripped the stick away from him ans blocked the next assault His stick snapped from the powerful punch. He looked up to try to see his attacker. He couldn't see much, but giant shadowy serpent slithered toward him.
Donovan jumped back and pulled out Bat Country to defend himself. The black stand spun out and caught the jaws. His Stand hissed and rattled while coiling around Bat Country's arms. His claws dug into the Stand's skin.
The other opened its mouth and shot a thick web. It shocked him and Bat Country faded. Donovan couldn't move. The shock left him in a state of paralysis. His vision flashed, blurred, then faded to black.
The attacker hoovered over him, and slipped his phone, wallet, and any form of ID before slipping out of the Dormitory quickly once he recognized Joestar's car pulling in.
This was a little rushed but it was a story I was thinking on doing for a little while. Again, this was a preview so I wouldn't give a lot of details on this story, there than it being another universe in the Jojo franchise.
I just want to know if it sounds pretty good