Chapter 21: A Shinobi's Doubt!
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto or its characters! Only Takahashi, Jeri, Juliet, Rose, and Lori. Though Jeri and her family are also owned by Erin! She helped me come up with them!
I'll show you.
- Shisui Uchiha
Chapter 21
"So you're telling me that we are in New Orleans, Louisiana, America?" Minato questions in disbelief and wonder making sure he had all the facts right.
"Hai!" Jeri exclaims showing that she is speaking the truth, since her body language says so as well as her verbal language. She knew a good amount of Japanese from anime, but she couldn't write it or read it. Inabi glares at Jeri. There was no way the redhead was an Uchiha, her eyes were green, not black. Her hair was maroon-red, not black. Now she's telling them they are in a different dimension?
"But we are supposed to be dead." Kushina says absent mindedly looking at her best friend Mikoto.
"Wait... If your supposed to be dead, doesn't that mean your spirits? I mean you did appear around midnight on a renactment of Halloween when the gate between the world of the dead and the world of the living is at its weakest." Lori asks slightly intrigued with Jeri nodding.
"Yeah that's right! I forgot about that... But shouldn't we not be able to see them?" Jeri asks to which Lori looks to Minato.
Lori studies each and every one of the newcomers thoroughly before speaking. "Well... Maybe their chakra is strong enough that they can be seen as if they were living? Plus the reenactment might have created a 'time warp' so to speak. Tricking the universe into thinking it was Halloween, October 31st."
Jeri nods knowingly. "That would be true, I mean they are ninja and there is such thing as time warps with spirits."
"I think this is a whole lot of bullshit!" Exclaims Inabi pointing an accusing finger at Jeri and Lori. "They speak of spirits as if they know about it. They speak of chakra as if they know a whole lot and accusing us of still being dead? I won't have it!"
Jeri holds her hands close to her best in fear. She wasn't going to back down though... Not after seeing Lori never backing down from anyone. She would catch up to her sister. "Well we have been living with ninja for about two weeks!"
"There have been spirit sighting all over the world, don't forget that." Lori says knowingly as she smirks slightly her eyes never wavering.
"I don't know which one to kill first, you red-head, or your black-haired friend." Inabi growls out obviously very pissed.
"Making a lot of assumptions here." Lori says seriously. She was no friend of Jeri's. Nor would she ever be.
"That's it, you're both dead!" Inabi yells as he rushes towards the two girls.
A sensation of warmth that had filled Lori's stomach and spread over her, it was on her skin. Just like the last time. The feeling traveled through her body. From her head to the tips of her toes. The tingling rippled underneath her skin. This was the same feeling she felt before when Mikoto and Kushina had hit her earlier with kitchen utensils, but she never really noticed it all that much. Especialy since she was too afraid of the women at the time to take notice, but now that she was clam, even with her heart racing and blood pumping, she felt calm. She felt exilerated At the same time though. It was as if the prospect of a fight made her eager.
Tobirama sensed something in Lori's chakra... It was rather active. Like her body was responding to the danger around it. He could feel her chakra moulding rapidly in her body.
Lori was ready to fight, the problem was Inabi was coming in way to fast for her eyes to follow. Shisui rushes towards the girl's within chakra lacing his feet, he didn't want them getting hurt, and if he had to fight one of his own clansmen then so be it.
Tobirama was closest to the girl's and as such moves in front of Lori and Jeri easily and literally bitch slaps Inabi to the left side of the room like he was hitting a fly. "I always wanted to do that... And that, dear brother's, is how you defeate an Uchiha with style." Tobirama smirks towards Hashirama and Itama. Itama grins and has stars of admiration in his eyes while Hahsirama looks on with half lidded eyes of disaproval.
"Big brother Tobirama is so cool! He saved Onee-san and Jeri-san!" Itama grins like the little child he is with Hahsirama's forehead creasing with not only worry but sadness and the ridiculousness of Itama admiring Tobi-kin for hitting an Uchiha.
"Itama... Why is you don't have a problem with Jeri and her family, but you do with the other Uchiha's?" Hahsirama asks sadly.
"Because I know them! They are good Uchiha's!" Itama cries out. "Plus Lori-onee-san, is a Senju! I'm sure of it!"
"Well gee, thanks..." Shisui responds dejectedly. His eyes reflected sadness.
Jeri sighs out in relief as Lori feels a heavy weight in her chest. It was as if she lost the chance to fight which made her feel weird. Tobirama looks over his shoulder at the coal-haired girl. "Aren't you going to say thank you? I did just save your life." He smirks at Lori knowing he was right.
Jeri smiles. "Thank you Tobirama!" He gave her a stern look indicating that she should address him wit's more respect. "Oh, um, Tobirama-sama..." Jeri corrects and laughs a little bit at her mistake. Tobirama then looks to Lori expectantly.
"Gehen Sie sich selbst ficken Sie weißhaarige bchweinehund, Tobirama-Sama." Lori merely stated in German with a smirk knowing that no one knows what she just said. For all they know she could be saying thank you. Really though she was saying (Go fuck yourself you white-haired bastard, Tobirama-sama.)
Tobirama was starting to get the feeling hat she didn't say thank you in German. He would have to get her to stop speaking German and Speak either Japanese or English.
"Stop speaking German." Tobirama orders slightly growing slightly annoyed with how Lori will at times speak another language and them not being able to translate. It peaked his interest though, at what she could possibly be saying. He would have to find a way to translate.
Lori put a hand over her heart in fake astonishment. "You're telling me not to speak my own language? Do you see me telling you not to speak Japanese...?"
"We barely speak Japanese around you woman." Tobirama argues lightly, but sternly as he would anyone.
"Yet when you do I don't care. It's one of our God Given rights is it not Jeri? That people are endowed with the right to govern themselves according to their written consent?" Lori argues back to Tobirama but asks the question to Lori who thinks deeply before looking it up.
When she finds out she looks up from her phone to Lori. "Your right. And- I see where you're going with this!" Jeri then laughs knowing Tobirama is about to be owned big time.
Lori looks to up Tobirama and takes a relaxing breath before speaking. "Which means that the right to govern ourselves means that I own myself, and I can speak in my native tounge, whether you like it or not. Face it Tobirama, you don't know this world, it's laws, or history. So your not going to win his battle with no knowledge, your not going to winning at all. I've actually done extensive research on America and other countries." Lori firmly lays down the law with no smirk on her face, instead a serious look. Her usually stern features were more defined now than ever. Tobirama glares fiercely, stern, yet flustered. "You lose Tobirama."
Tobirama's eye twitches just slightly.
Hashirama grins micheviously and decides to tease his bany brother. "Ooooh, Tobi-kun, Lori-san is already winning battles against you in intellect! I never thought I'd see the day my baby brother was bested in his own expertise, specially not by a teenage woman..."
Tobirama felt slight heat on his face from his elder brother's purposeful teasing with a woman standing up to him and practically owning him in an argument. He was supposed to be he best when it came to intellectual arguing!
Lori grabbs Jeri's hand as best she could since Hashirama's sleeves were way too long for her shorter arms, and drags her over to Msears and Izuna as Jeri sits down comfortably beside Izuna while Lori takes a seat on the ground to Madara's left, between Jeri and his own legs. "What brings you here?" Madara asks gruffly, obviously bored out of his mind.
"I know Tobirama hates you two, so if I come over here he will not come after because he knows that once he opens his mouth towards you two he won't stop, a fight will erupt, and then he faces Juliet's wrath. Something no one wants to face." Lori acknowledges with slight satisfaction at her deduction. Madara snorts.
"You find it fun to irritate the Senju." Madara accuses with slight amusement in his deep voice. Lori nods.
"Yes I do. It's quite entertaining to say the least." Acknowledges Lori who smirks at Tobirama's direction. Turning her attention to her above right, she sees Madara looking down at her. Lori wasn't going to admit it, but Madara was intimating.
"You're quiet the anti-hero character aren't you?" Jeri asks prolong her chin up on her palm.
Lori smirks pridefully in response. "Damn straight."
Kushina studies Tobirama as he has the slightest hint of a blush upon his face and seems to be either in shock or embarrassed. Tobirama folds his arms across his chest and walks out of the room to get a glass of water.
"So do you think we will go back to the world of the dead once the moon completely vanishes?" Minato asks the girl's who nod in response.
"That's what we believe. Now we are just hypothesizing, we don't know for sure, Yondaime-sama." Jeri affirms with a Dad but cheerful look. The Yondaime looks puzzled at how the red head knew of his title. If they weren't in their world, then she wouldn't know who he was... Right?
"How did you know my title?" Minato asks with slight suspicion lacing an undertone in his voice. He wasn't going to make any moves, nor lift a kunai, but he was ready to put an end to a fight if need be to defend Kushina, his beloved wife, and those around him.
"Well..." Jeri began searching for an explanation as to how she knew. If she didn't find a good excuse she was so fucked!
At this moment Lori joined the conversation bored out of her wits. Her eyes wearing that heavy lidded expression justifying how bored she was, her dark eyes becoming dull as she spaces out. "Maybe because it's written on the back of your jacket?"
Minato blinks before looking and realizing he was brought back in what he had died in. His short-sleeved long white haori over his normal attire, closed in the front by a thin, orange rope. The haori was decorated by red flame-like motifs on the edges, with the kanji for "Fourth Hokage" written vertically down the back.
"Oh! Your right! Sorry about that..." Minato apologizes sheepishly while rubbing the back of his head with a small smile on his face, probably out of both embarrassment and he thought it was a bit funny.
Lori frowned feeling a headache comin on. Her temples throbbed with each electrical impulse coming from her brain and her nerves. Something felt like it was trying to surface but she couldn't place it. She knew she saw that familiar face once, the smile, the laugh, the rubbing of the back of the head.
Damnit! Just what is trying to get through?! Thought a now pissed off Lori. And who the hell was that girl?! What's her name... Mizuna! Mizuna that's right! Do I know her from somewhere...? And those women, the one with blue hair and the other wig black hair... from those, thoughts, memories... obviously the one with blue hair dyed it. Though it looked more of an aqua blue dye.
"Wait a minute, Lori, I didn't know you could read kanji?" Jeri voices her question to the blackette who nods.
"I can't. I just took a wild guess." Admits Lori to which she gets a few stares basically screaming 'are you serious'.
"Well that was one good guess." Kushina remarks entergetically. Lori nods in thanks, not wanting to piss off these two women.
"Well that was one good guess." Kushina remarks entergetically. Lori nods in thanks, not wanting to piss off these two women.
Mikoto noticed that Shisui kept staring at the messy, raven haired girl. As far as she knew he had never 'stared' at a girl before. If he ever did have a crush or take a love interest she would have been the first to know because she was like a mother more than an aunt to Shisui, he practically lived at their house in the Uchiha compound. Suddenly it hit Mikoto like a ton of bricks as she grinned like a feline.
"Oh Shisui-kun~!" Mikoto sang cheerfully with a slight knowing and planning undertone to her voice. Shisui's attention snaps to his aunt with a slight blush grazing his cheeks, only light enough to where you had to really know him to know it was a blush. Shisui only hoped that he hadn't been caught. He knew he hadn't been caught by the raven haired teen, or at least he hoped. He knew he was lying to himself when he thought he thought of her as a sister, but he couldn't get involved with her. Who knew how long they would stay here? How long before they went back? No matter how much he wanted to, he wouldn't do that to her. For it would crush her when they had to leave, when he left her.
"Hm? Yes Mikoto-san?"
Mikoto giggles more to herself as she waves Shisui over and he quickly makes his way over to her. When he reached her spot near her husband on a big reclining chair he leaned down and she cupped her hand over her mouth so those who could read lips, like the Uchiha, didn't know what she was whispering in his ear. She was whispering so lightly that even Fugaku couldn't hear her.
Shisui's irises shrank with each word as his eyes nearly popped out of their sockets as Mikoto began to explain what she thought she knew, ways to help, plans, and even ask personal questions. When she was done she leaned back to inspect her nephew's face with an evil in a good playful way, smile.
"N-no! It's not like that, really. It's not what you think..." Shisui tries to convince Mikoto otherwise as she smirks that smug Uchiha smirk wth a hint of Mikoto added to it, making it seem playful instead of prideful.
"Oh really Shisui-kun? That's not how I see it... And is that a blush on your face?" Mikoto teased with great joy as she giggles to herself at Shisui's now heated face.
"If you don't, I will~!" Mikoto grins.
"Y-you... You wouldn't dare..." Shisui stammers his face feeling hot from embarrassment, nerves, and the possibility of what Mikoto was about to do. "Please don't..."
Lori yawns as she was getting tired and hot from the thick shirt that she was wearing mixed with the body heat of Jeri, Izuna, and Madara sitting so close to her. Standing up she feels the short amount of wind rushing against her hot and red face which seemed to cool her off a bit as she begins to make her way out of the living room and up the stairs.
Fugaku and the other Uchiha's not counting Izuna and Madara, watch as Lori begins to leave. Unfortunately Mikoto and Kushina notice her red face.
"Are you alright?" Mikoto and Kushina ask at the same time out of motherly instinct. It wasn't their job to look after and love heir kids, and since Kushina didn't get to her next choices were Shisui, Itachi, Itama, Jeri, and Lori. She would treat them like she would Naruto.
Lori stops and faces them slightly. "Yes. I'm just going to change."
Hashirama frowns slightly. Her breathing was slightly off, her face was red. Either she was embarrassed about something, nervous, or was burning up. They were out late in the cold so maybe Shen caught fever?
"Are you hot?" Hashirama asks innocently.
Lori stares at him for a second realizing what he just said in two ways. "Yes. I'm going to change." Her voice didn't deviate from her usual tone as she honestly didn't care.
Jeri gets up sharply and looks at Lori accusingly. "You Don't have anything short sleeved."
Shisui looks to be deep in thought before an idea hits him. It would be cute too~
With a single hand sign with only his first two digits up he erased his existence in the living room and flickered to another part of the house. Preferably his room.
Lori nods while most in the room raise an eyebrow. Even guys had short sleeved shirts. Did Lori just not like them? Was she cold natured? "I'll just roll the sleeves up."
"Well, I guess wearing a guys shirt with super long sleeves and..." Jeri reaches over and feels the fabric of the shirt to find it was very thick. Honestly how did Lori survive one night in that? "The fabric being so thick, it would get pretty hot. Honestly I'm surprised it took you this long to get burned up."
Jeri suddenly felt rather off. The air that is. Something in her gut told her something or someone was going to pop up out of nowhere beside Lori. It was a tugging sensation, like her nerves and body was trying to tell her 'hey something is coming up over there'. It was strange but she didn't mind it. In fact she figured it would be best to move Lori.
Grabbing Lori lightly by the shoulders she moved her beside herself and stared at the spot where her stomach told her something would be appearing. "What is it?" Lori asks with a raised eyebrow.
Right after exactly three seconds something appeared. Shunshin no Shisui. He grins cheerfully holding a high collared black Uchiha shirt with the obvious red and white fan sewed on the back. He looks to Lori and holds it out patiently with a chuckle as he rubbed the back of his head with one hand. The scene of what Shisui was doing both surprised and caused Lori's temples to throb even more. The intense pounding in her ears from the headache almost too much to take.
"Heheh... Here you go." Shisui chuckles as Lori tentively accepts the unique shirt of Shisui's. Honestly for some reason her head wasnt the only thing throbbing... Her heart was. It was thumping faster in her chest for unknown reasons. It brought a slightly darker blush to her cheeks than she already had from the heat stroke that was looming over her.
"Gracias." Lori replies so softly Shisui's ears had to strain to hear it as Lori looks away to the side. His heart beat a little faster knowing that he had this reaction on the normally stoic or relaxed girl causing him to grin so big that everyone knew something was up with the young Uchiha. As Lori quickly scurried off upstiars Fugaku turned to his wife to see she had stars in her eyes and a blush on her cheeks as she held her hands over her heart and squealed much like Kushina.
"Your playing match maker aren't you?" Fugaku asks with knowing how Mikoto was with pairing people up. Hell she did it to Itachi and Izumi.
Mikoto just giggles in response with a cat like grinnanswering Fugaku's question. Minato sweat drops as he sees his wife doing the same and chuckles silently hoping that things go according to their plan.
"Oh, Shisui likes a girl huh?" Yashiro teases before becoming serious. "She isn't an Uchiha. You know that, her chakra isn't similar to ours or the Senju's." Yashiro notes disapproval written in his tone and on his face. Shisui was never one to get angry, he was usually pretty chill unless someone mentioned hurting his loved ones or Village, but this irrritated him to no end.
"Just because she's not Uchiha doesn't mean anything. Your way to obsessed with our lineage, you won't let anyone in if they don't have Uchiha blood. Why do you think the Village never changed? It was because most the Uchiha's wouldn't change. And if you say anything bad about Lori..." Shisui growls at the older Uchiha Witt had his onyx eyes daring him to say anything to justify himself.
"Besides, when I stopped the coup there were no more Uchiha women left. At least in our dimension. So therefore Shisui could be with her if he wanted, even if there were other Uchiha women." Itachi adds matter of factly with a hint of anger towards Yashiro. Mainly for being so obsessed with heritage and then for saying that his best friend couldn't be with someone he cared for.
"But what about Jeri? Shisui could be with her." Yashiro tried to say.
Shisui and Itachi send cold glares at him. "From what I can see Shisui likes Lori, not Jeri." Itachi says with a hidden undertone.
"Besides I see Jeri as a friend." Shisui acknowledges.
What everyone didn't know was that Lori ask hidden behind a wall with her back leaning against it, listening to the conversation in shock. Her heart was beating faster and faster much to her annoyance but it brought warmth to her chest and mad enough her face heat up. She decided she would splash cold water on her face in the bathroom.
As Lori came down stairs from changing and splashing her face with cold water she sighs with contentment. Her hair was still a slightly spiky black mess, her makeup was taken off, she wore Shisui's shirt with some grey sweat pants, and the fake cat ears and tail were gone.
Once in the living room Jeri grins at her cheekily making Lori think she was hiding what she overheard in the hall. Lori knew he would have to play everything off as not knowing anything, the problem was if anyone knew she had been listening. Considering they were ninja at least one of them knew.
"So... Who wants Dango?" Jeri asks hopefully as Shen had some leftover from the other day. Jeri had a sweet tooth, Lori usually did too but sometimes she didn't, not to mention there were a lot of Uchihas.
Immediately everyone's eyes turned to her eagerly. "Dango? Where?" Itachi asks rather hastily, it seems he didn't play when someone mentioned sweets, specially dango.
"Uh... The kitchen." Jeri answers as it seems that all the inhabitants of the living room migrate to the kitchen in search of the lovely dish that is dango.
"What's dango?" Lori asks seriously which gets some attention of disbelief. Shisui stares at Lori like she was an alien from outer space.
"You don't know what dango is?!"
Jeri sighs. "She's from Germany, remember? They don't have Japanese food over there. Or at least it's not dominant. Though she looks to be more Japanese... With the black hair, black eyes, and the big, sname-shaped eyes."
Shisui, Lori, Minato, Kushina, Mikoto, Fugaku andnhe test of the uchiha except for Madara and Izuna felt shivers run down their spines at the mention of snakes. For the ninja it was because they were reminded of a Orochimaru at the mention of snake. For Lori it was because she hates snakes. Shisui quickly shook it off and turned to Lori. "I shall teach you the way of the Japanese."
Lori stares at him quietly laughing inside. Honestly even if everyone spoke japanese in this house, they hadn't Japanese characteristics, but the young looked more American.
"Kokode wa ikutsu ka no dangodesu. Sono hontōni amakute hagotae no aru, watashi wa anata ga sore o konomu to omoimasu." (Here is some dango. It's really sweet and chewy, I think you'll like it.) Shisui says in Japanese as he hands Lori a stick of three white dango covered in a delectable golden sauce. Lori take some the dango and decided that if she isn't talked to in Japanese, she will talk to them in German.
"Sie sind komisch." (You are weird.) Taking a bite of the dango she found it sweet and chewy. It was like a dumpling, and she could see why people liked them so much in this household. She slowly finished her stick of dango, not wanting others to know how much she enjoyed it. Afterwards she leaned against one of the walls and watched at everyone talked amounts themselves and ate the delicious sweets Jeri had prepared. Closing her eyes she knew that they would be wanting her to check in with them soon or they would come by, if she failed then she was dead. No questions about it.
Shisui snuck a glance in the teen's direction. He knew he should stay away, and truth be told he would only act like a brother with her for now, until he talked with Itachi and Mikoto that is. He would have to see their opinions on taking a chance what with them possibly going back home one day and not knowing when that day would come.
After eating some dango Jeri starts to think about what Lori had said earlier about not remembering her parents and, curiosity getting the best of her. She decided to ask Lori outright, rather than pry. "Lori? When you said you didn't remember your parents, what do you remember?" Lori stares at the kitchen floor with a look of concentration in her night colored irises. Focus eminent in her gaze. Shisui looks at the slightly younger teen with regard. Curiousity and sadness enveloping his soul.
When Lori answers, she answers so softly that her voice is barely being carried throughout the kitchen. "Nothing."
It was deadly silent in the kitchen. No one knew what to say or do in this situation. Say sorry and know there is nothing you can do to help? No. Finally, Mikoto spoke. Her motherly instincts taking hold as she showed a mother's compassion. "What do you mean, Lori-chan?" Her soft voice caring and sweet. Lori looks at the woman with a soft gaze talong the place of her usual cold one, Mikoto reminded her of someone she once knew.
"I only have memories from the age of eight onward." Lori confesses with a sad undertone that she quickly tries to hide. This was always a touchy subject for her after all. Mikoto and Kushina regard Lori with solemn an so shameful eyes.
"Maybe... We hit her too hard..." Kushina mumbles obviously ashamed of her earlier actions. Mikoto nods slowly feeling guilty for Lori's memory loss.
Lori shook her head. "No. It's been this way for a majority of my life." Lori declares calmly, finally getting a hold on herself. Hahsirama, as a doctor and scientist on the side, his curiosity was peaked. Maybe he could run some tests? With Juliet's help, of course as he was not able to use a hospital's equipment in this world by himself.
"Hmmm... Repressed memories? Amnesia perhaps? May I run some tests on you, Lori?" Hahsirama asks eagerly unaware that he was scaring the poor girl beyond belief.
A frightened look replaced the usually calm one the messy haired teens usually wore. Her dark eyes glistening with painfully agonizing and fearful memories. Her milky-white skin became increasingly pale before taking on a blue tint. When she spoke her voice was barely above a whisper, with obvious fear lacing her voice. "Needles...?!"
Quickly she hid behind Shisui, him feeling Lori's hands holding fistfuls of the back of his shirt. When she next spoke her voice was like that of a scared dog that was cornered and now ready to attack to get free. "Hell no! Not again! I will bite your hand off!"
Momentarily stunned, everyone stood frozen. No one expected the usually clam and composed Lori to react like that. Shisui, after finding that Lori wasn't going to be letting him go for even a second just to face her, done his best to calm and console her by trying to hold her with his arms facing his back as he held her as best he could. His hands rubbed her back and arms soothingly even though it hurt like hell for him to move his arms like that behind his back he ignored it for her sake. What may have shocked Shisui the most, was that Lori was shaking, trembling like a leaf in the wind.
Clearly Hahsirama had not anticipated Lori having a trypanophobia, an extreme fear of needles and injections.
"Lori..." Minato said suspiciously andvery much aware of how Lori must be feeling. "Hahsirama-sama didn't say anything about needles..."
Hahsirama frowns feeling responsible for Lori sudden behavioral switch. She could clearly see her behind Shisui frightened like a little child. Then again compared to him she was a child, she was only about 15.
"I promise the tests will not include needles or injections of any kind. You have my word as the First Hokage." Hahsirama vows seeing only distrust in her onyx eyes.
"No." Lori affirms immediately after Hahsirama's vow.
Shisui couldn't help but try to look back at her, he could only turn his head to the side to see her though and it hurt like hell but he wasn't going to complain.
"Lori, I'll stay with you during the tests, so don't worry. Everything will be fine." Shisui offers with a kind smile that would make the fan girl's swoon. Unfortunately it only served to make the object of his affection even more tense.
I figured it would be Tobirama-like to bitch slap an Uchiha for any reason and look cool about it.
Q1: Thoughts when tobirama bitch slapped Inabi for attacking the girl's? And doing it with style? By the way why does Itama think Tobirama is cool for doing that? Also should I type the scenes beside these questions?
Q2: Who thought it was funny when Lori secretly cusses Tobirama out in German after he protected her and Jeri from Inabi? Will thy ever learn to translate, or at least with google translate or siri?
Q3: Any idea what Mikoto was whispering in his ear that made Shisui's irises shrink with each word as his eyes nearly popped out of their sockets?
Q4: Hello ShiOri fans! Do you think that Shisui should take a chance on Lori? Or should he keep his distance and only act as a brother?
Q5: What did Shisui try to convince his aunt of? What did Mikoto know and threaten to do if Shisui didn't?
Q6: Moments that were funny, cute, cool or romantic and sweet? Please give detail on why you think this and what you think the characters are feeling!
Q7: Was Lori unconsciously using a jutsu that would make her skin rock hard when a threat presented itself? Such as when Kushina and Mikoto hit her with kitchen utensils out of rage last chapter? Or when Inabi came at her? What do you think?
Q8: Is anything revealed about Jeri in this chapter?
Q9: What type of character are some of the ninja and the girls? (You don't have to do everyone, only those you are sure of) Options: The Anti-Hero (Neutral), Hero (Good), Evil, Loner, the brain mechanic, second in command, cheerleader, ditz, idealist, double agent, triple agent, and nurturer.
Q10: Who are they that Lori is worried about? Why would she be dead and what does she have to accomplish? Why does she have a fear of needles and injections?
Please add your own opinions and two cents, if you think I should do something next chapter please tell me!