Sorry for ending the story abruptly. I needed to finish it- I have a super busy summer. I wish I could've made it longer and soaked into the details. But I'm much, much better at short fanfics. . I hope you enjoyed. I'll probably redo this when I have more spare time.
Anyways, this is what I think would happen if Hohenheim never left. I just wanted to express why it was better that Hohenheim abandoned Ed and Al.
Thanks to Dfire and Mysteryriddle who've reviewed a lot. ^w^ I'm sure Mysteryriddle's version of Hohenheim-not-leaving will be far better. She told me she wouldn't screw everything up (like I did).