Hey guys, sorry I meant to post this earlier but I lost the file so I had to rewrite it :-( But hey I got it written so no worries :-D
Okay so a couple of things. There will be no new update next weekend as I have a few exams coming up and school takes top priority so just an FYI. Second, I have never actually taken any fighting classes. I've only had a three week segment of self defense for gym class. However, I have two mean ass older brothers, this fight, is kind of based on one I've had with one of them, so it's kind of utilitarian, I was like nine when this happen soo... anywho :-D
I asked this last time but i want to hear more of your opinions: would you guys be interested in a Kirishima/Yokozawa spin off of this story. I had originally planned to add some chapters here in this story, but I think that will make this to long. So I was thinking about writing a new story with them as the leads, maybe something called The Tutor. What do you think?
I do not own Sekaiichi Hatsukoi.
Onodera was turning towards Yokozawa when Yokozawa's fist connected with the side of his face. Onodera stumbled back due to the blow. The blow had taken him by surprise but Onodera still remembered his karate lessons from when he was seven.
Yokozawa was coming towards Onoderd, swinging a haymaker punch, when Onodera blocked the blow. He then quickly grabbed Yokozawa's biceps, pulling Yokozawa towards him, and brought his knee up, striking Yokozawa in the gut.
"Argh," Yokozawa gasped as he stumbled backwards, clutching his abdomen.
"What the hell is your problem," Onodera yelled.
"YOU ARE YOU FUCKING BASTARD! IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT," Yokozawa screamed. With that, he charged Onodera, keeping low and ramming his shoulder into Onodera's chest. He propelled Onodera all the way back several steps, until Onodera's back slammed against the fence that was nearby. Yokozawa balled his fist and started to repeatedly punch Onodera's abdomen with short, weak uppercut punches.
They weren't really painful, but they kept hitting the same general area and Onodera knew that they would definitely leave a bruise there. Onodera had lost his footing when Yokozawa had pushed him back, and was having a hard time regaining it. Once he did though, Onodera drew back his right foot until it hit the fence and then kicked Yokozawa's shin with all his strength.
"AHHH," Yokozawa yelled as he stumbled backwards, grasping his shin. Yokozawa looked up at Onodera, glaring with so much rage that if looks could kill, would have left Onodera very, very dead. Yokozawa was breathing hard through his bared, gritted teeth. "You have a fucking fiancée… she's pregnant… and your still leading HIM ON? I WON'T LET YOU HURT HIM!"
With that, Yokozawa sprung up and attempted a wild haymaker. Onodera sidestepped the punch, causing Yokozawa's punch to connect with the fence. Seeing his chance, Onodera quickly grabbed the arm Yokozawa punched with and pinned it behind Yokozawa's back, and pushed Yokozawa into the fence and held him there.
Yokozawa kept trying to reach back with his left hand and grab Onodera, "Yokozawa, calm down! Otherwise, I'm going to break your arm!" Already, Yokozawa could feel pain shooting through his arm, causing him to abruptly stop struggling. "Good, now can you please explain to me why you attacked me," Onodera asked, while loosening the hold he had on Yokozawa's arm.
Unfortunately, that was exactly what Yokozawa was waiting for. Yokozawa brought up his left arm, and using the wall to propel himself, he spun and struck near Onodera's eye with his elbow.
"Ow, fu…" Onodera hissed as he squeezed his eyes shut and grasped his left eye. Now Onodera was pissed, up until then, he had just been trying to defend himself without actually hurting Yokozawa. Now he was done with that!
Onodera opened is eyes just in time to see Yokozawa gearing up for another punch. Onodera bent over, causing Yokozawa to miss and bend over Onodera's back. Onodera quickly stood up and slammed Yokozawa into the concrete. With that he climbed on top of Yokozawa and started wailing on Yokozawa. Yokozawa just had enough time to raise his arms and cover his face before Onodera started his assault.
Onodera let his fists rain down on Yokozawa's arms, chest, stomach, and bits of his face that were exposed. After about three punches, Yokozawa realized that he had either cracked or broken two ribs. Neither man realized that they had drawn a crowd…
That is until the police showed up. "This is the police, please step away from each other and put your hands in the air," cried one of the cops. Onodera either chose to ignore them or didn't hear them and Yokozawa was otherwise occupied.
The cops looked at each other before moving forward to pull Onodera off of Yokozawa. "Calm down," shouted the other officer, as Onodera struggled to continue slugging Yokozawa. Both officers were struggling to get Onodera under control, when the officer who had just yelled, notice Yokozawa coming at Onodera. "Whoa, whoa, whoa," he yelled as he grabbed Yokozawa and pushed Yokozawa to the ground, pinning Yokozawa's arms behind his back and slapping a pair of handcuffs on him. The cop who was still with Onodera, slammed Onodera against the police car and quickly grabbed one arm of Onodera's at a time to place the cuffs on him as well. "You're under arrest," cried the officer who was man-handling Yokozawa.
"THIS IS ALL YOUR FUCKING FAULT," screamed Yokozawa.
"MY FAULT!? YOU'RE THE ONE WHO ATTACKED ME!" Onodera screamed right back at him.
"HE'LL NEVER MOVE ON FROM YOU BECAUSE YOU WON'T LET HIM AND YOU STILL ARE SCREWING WITH YOUR FIANCEE!"
"I'M NOT DOING ANYTHING TO HIM!"
"Ohhh, shut up both of you," yelled both officers. They wrestled Yokozawa and Onodera into the back of the police car.
The officer who had handled Onodera turned to his partner once, they were done, "My guy had a split eyebrow and some bruises. You think we should take them to the hospital before we book them?"
"Yea your guy was on top of mine and looked like he been slugging him for a while, no telling how many broken bones my guy has," the partner answered. "What the hell do you think they were arguing about?"
"The 119 caller just said that they had started fighting about eight minutes before she placed the call and we got here what six to seven minutes later… Maybe they were fighting over a girl."
"Yea but they both kept mentioning a he… you don't think…"
"Let just get them checked out at the hospital and then book 'em."
It was late evening and Yokozawa and Onodera were locked in separate holding cells, both charged with assault and being public nuisances. Onodera had walked away from the fight with merely a split eyebrow, one cracked rib and a few bruises. Yokozawa though, had not been so lucky. He had a dislocated shoulder, three broken ribs, a black eye, a broken nose, and seven stitches for a cut on his forehead. Although Onodera was shorter than him and weighed about 20 to 30kg less than Yokozawa, Onodera still packed quite a punch.
Both men had refused to say anything to one another or the officers when they were released from the hospital. However, the cops still did get the gist of how the fight started and progressed as a little girl and her mother were passing through the area had witnessed the fight and called the cops.
The only good news for Yokozawa was that Onodera wouldn't press charges against him as Onodera didn't want any record of himself associated with such an incident. So that still left the nuisances charge for both men.
It was funny, earlier, all Yokozawa had felt was rage, but now he just realized how incredibly and exceptionally tired he was with… well everything. "God, when the company finds out about this, there's no telling how it will affect my career. Especially since I was the one who instigated the fight! They'll probably demote me because I couldn't control my emotions and acted so irresponsibly. I suppose it was unfair of me to jump to conclusions about him and his fiancée, his fiancée could be screwing somebody else just like how he's screwing with Masamune," Yokozawa thought as he looked over at Onodera. "… He's still a bastard though." Yokozawa winced as he tried to shift his sitting position. His fight with Onodera had literally left everything hurting. Even breathing really hurt.
Onodera, meanwhile, was trying to figure out just what he would say to his parents when they found out about this incident. They would definitely demand a reason for why Yokozawa attacked him, and there was no way in hell Onodera was going to tell them that it was because Yokozawa thought he was screwing with another man and that his fiancée... "God, they'd… I don't even know what Mom would do," Onodera thought. Maybe they wouldn't find out since he wouldn't be pressing charges, maybe all he had to do was avoid seeing them until his split eyebrow and bruises healed. "Yea right… there's a reason why An's trying to avoid anything related to our parents… they have extensive reach!" Onodera leaned his head back and banged it against the jail cell's wall. This was a shitty end, to a completely shitty day.
"Yokozawa Takafumi," called a cop.
Yokozawa slowly, and clearly painfully rose to his feet, "Yes," he replied his breathing labored.
"Your bail's been posted," replied the cop as he opened Yokozawa's cell door.
"I haven't asked any judges for bail yet."
"No, but bail can be given even without a request from the person charged, if the crime isn't very grave. You've just have a really good friend, now let's go," the cop sighed. Yokozawa quickly followed, not even glancing back to see the sullen face of Onodera as he watched them leave.
Yokozawa closed his eyes and sighed as he exited the police station. It was well past eleven at night by then. "Takafumi… what the hell were you thinking," asked a familiar voice, "AH CHOO."
Yokozawa opened his eyes to see Takano standing next to his car. "Should have known it was you," Yokozawa sighed. "What find a judge who's a fan of yours and ask them to accept a bail request?"
"You know me to well…" There was an awkward pause then before Takano continued. "You forgot your cell phone at my apartment and I was running to return it to you but, by the time I got there you were being placed in the back of a police vehicle… Takafumi… what happened?"
"I really don't… want to talk about this with you."
Takano nodded his head. "I saw Onodera was also in the police car. And here you are looking like shit. I saw the police report… did you really start the fight?"
"If you read the police report then you already know," Yokozawa bit back.
"…Did you maybe start the fight because… because of our conversation from earlier?"
"No," Yokozawa answered to quickly. Both Takano and Yokozawa knew then that he was lying. "…His fiancée might be pregnant."
Takano's stunned eyes widened at the news. He was clearly trying to absorb the news and regain his ability to speak. After several moments though, he did, "And you… think that the reason I rejected you… was because of Onodera?"
"Well, what else can it be? You always look like your mooning over him! Even though he's done nothing but hurt you! I'm the one who has always, always been there for you! After everything I've done for you!"
"After everything you've done for me… is exactly the reason why I can't be with… you."
It was Yokozawa's turn to be stunned, "What?"
"Takafumi, you were there for me in a very dark period of my life. You supported me, help me, and even saved my life, but… I've moved on from that time… You never have." Yokozawa stood there shocked. "Takafumi… relationships… are supposed to be a give and take. But you never let me give because… I think in the back of your mind… all you see is that kid on the bathroom floor next the bottle pills and I think, that's all you'll ever be able to see me as. That kid, not the man I am today. I want… to support someone and in turn have them support me, I want that equal give and take. I didn't reject you because of Onodera… I rejected you because we have way too much history to ever have a healthy relationship. As it is now, it probably is still unhealthy for the both of us."
Yokozawa just stood there, nothing about the beat down from Onodera could compare to the beat down his heart had just experienced. He had given everything… and because he'd given everything they couldn't be together, "WHAT THE FUCK KIND OF REASON IS THAT," Yokozawa thought.
"I'm sorry, Yokozawa," Takano whispered.
Yokozawa was crying then. "No matter what though, you're not going to have that type of relationship with Onodera," Yokozawa whispered.
"I know," Takano replied softly, "He's already got that with his fiancée."
"I think I'd like to be alone, now," Yokozawa breathed. Takano nodded as Yokozawa turned and ran away, as if trying to flee his broken heart.
I love how everyone automatically assumed or hoped Onodera would get hurt. Guys, he round house kicked Takano in the manga, I think its safe to think he took some sort of fighting class when he was younger, how long he stuck with it though is anyone's guess. Now I know what your thinking, Kirishima took Yokozawa down no problem, but Kirishima is slightly taller than Yokozawa and weighs about the same. Also I think Kirishima took his martial arts class than what I have put here for Onodera, making there fight a much more, "bitch please," type of fight. You know this was another thing I had changed my mind on. Originally I had planned on Onodera fighting Takano, not Yokozawa, but the more I thought about it, the more I thought no that won't fit with everything i want to happen. So this served as a way to tie up the Yokozawa/ Takano side of things, there part is over and done with. Yokozawa will show up a couple more times but it will and won't be similar to how he is in the manga after his rejection. Now it's just Onodera and An :-D
Just in case you missed it last chapter, no Takano and Onodera haven't figured it out yet of who they are to one another. That will happen at the end of the world tour/ end of the story, so hang in there.
Shout outs :-D
KlarolineAmpora: I am so glad you enjoy this story and I hope this chapter delivered. I really wanted this to seem like a slap in the face for Yokozawa because we know what he's done for Takano and because of that he can't be with him, que sad violins. An will return :-D so hang in there.
EmpressMinea: Things are going to keep on rolling between An and Onodera now so :-D No Takano and Onodera haven't figured it out yet, that won't be until the end of the story, so hang in there all will be revealed :-D
AngstyYaoiFangirl: Sorry, just a split eyebrow and some bruises for Onodera, no hospitalization :-S However, I think I did put in a lot of angst for Yokozawa because we know what he's done for Takano and that is the very reason he can't be with Takano -,_,- There will be angst for Onodera though, I promise.
Windying: Yea Yokozawa landed a few punches but nothing really substantial. He just got his ass kicked mostly :-D
Jade Rojo: Thank you for being so understanding. Again, I hadn't initially planned on the pregnancy but changed my mind. I promise though, it does lead to and end of sorts. Hang in there :-D
Levinya: First, I am so sorry I misspell your name, I did go back and fix it. You know sometimes, I just get to typing to fast and editing to quickly that i miss stuff, sorry that it was your name this time, I will do better though. You made me smile though about the world of pain. However, I always planned on Onodera basically winning the fight, he first just kind of fought defensively but after having his olive branch basically spit on... that went out the window :-D Thank you for your support.
SaySaeri: Its just one of the things you either love or hate about Yokozawa. Especially since it either leads to misunderstanding for him or just a rock and a hard place. He's gotta work on that :-D
DarkPrincess758: Oh, no, no, no your last review, I didn't think was rude at all! You were expressing your honest opinion and I always applaud that so no worries :-D I have a pretty good track record for completing stories, there's only one that's still incomplete because I'm taking a break from it and rethinking some things, but I'm the type who, once I start something, I must complete it, so hang in there :-D
Visitor: I'm glad you enjoy the real life elements of this story, since I am a realist, and I do try to reflect that in my writing even in some of my more out there stories. So thank you. As far as An goes, I thought about putting in a pregnancy test, but for what I want to happen it wouldn't work so I'm just leaving that ambiguous, but thanks for the idea of how to explain that part :-D
Animebaconlover: Yea I'm fine since my accident, just getting sued, but thank god for libel insurance :-D I'm glad you like the idea for the spin off, I'm still thinking it through, but I will be sure to let everyone know once I've got the details ironed out in my head. As far as An goes, omg you are so close to hitting it on the money :-D Not saying anymore. Yokozawa always jumps to conclusions, it's one of the things you either love or hate about him. This chapter though, was really an angst for Yokozawa, he gets rejected, gets the crap kicked out of him, winds up in jail, and gets rejected again in the course of a few hours. It like way to kick a man when he's down. I'm glad you like how this is a slice of life story, that is really what I was going for so to see people enjoying that, makes me very happy :-D
tchaillya: It's really a wait and see ;-D As far as Takano and Onodera go though, that will come near the end, it just may not go as you expect :-D Don't worry all will be revealed :-D
asSweetAsSwirlix: I know, I think in the manga she just barely appears in total on fifteen pages of the entire manga for her three appearances. I'm glad though that you like her realism, I'm one of those people who hates one dimensional characters so I try to make things a little more 3-dimensional, whether that actually works though is another story. So thank you for your approval of An, means I'm doing something right :-D And thank you for your encouragement about myself, I don't actually have any kids, and I don't plan to for a while, but it's nice to know that it is okay to admit the more dislikable aspects of myself and still be accepted. My selfishness is going to be something I have to work on if I ever have a kid. And yup, Sex Ed guys, at least have something to protect yourself with, preferably a condom :-D
Cisowa: I was so happy to see that you updated, it made my day :-D I totally understand though, about how busy college can be though. Sometimes, it's like your cruising and others like your drowning, its a real sink or swim. Hang in there though :-D