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Daya And acp saw abhijeet shivering ...both run towards him ...
Daya : Abhii ...
Acp : Jeet ...Beta ...
Daya : Dad ...Abhi dekho kya hua ...
Acp : Isko bhukhar hai ...Mein ...dr ko call karta hu ...wait ...
Daya : Abhi ...Ankhe kholo plzz abhi ...
Abhijeet Murmur : Da..daya ...mein ...sorry hoon
Daya : Nhi nhi ...sorry mein hoon yrr ...family ek karne chakar mein kitna hurt kiya tumko ...
acp : Daya dr ...aa rhe hai ...
Daya : Kaun se dr ...
Acp : Salunkhe ko bulaya hai itni raat mein wahi hai ...
Daya (nodded) : Jii ..thik hai ...Pani ki patti rakta hoon mein ...iske sar mein
Roop (came inside ) : Mein le aayi hoon ...
Daya : Aap pareshan na ho ...Mein dekh lunga ...Aap kyu bekaar mein apni neend barbad kar rhi hai ...to Acp ...Aap bhi jaye sir ...Kyu abhi apka officer khud ko bhi sambhal paa rha hai ...apko information dena tho dur ankhe bhi nhi khol sakta hai ...abhi ...jaye ap dono ...raat bahut hai ...
Acp : Daya Kya Bakwas hai Haan ...dekh rhe ho kitni Tabiyat khrab hai aur tum humko jane ko bol rhe ho ...
Daya : haan Bol rha hoon ...Kyu Aap ko kya ...uski tabiyat se haan
Roop : Humko Bahut hai uski tabiyat hai samjhe hato daya ...
Daya : Nhi bilkul nhi ...Acha hai Aap dono ka jab dil karta hai uske ...pass aa jao jab dil kare chhod do ...Kyu ...haan ...Koi nhi hai woh Aap ka ...Sirf ek officer hai ...(in mid abhijeet cough in his uncounsiousses state...roop run towards him) ...Hate Aap ...Dur rhe ...
Roop (slaped ) : Daya Bass bahut hui Batameeze ...tumhari ...Agar mein tumhare liye isko ...Jane ko Bol sakti hu tho ...Tumko ...bhi thappad Mar sakti hoon iske liye ...Beta hai mera jaise tum ho ...Sagi ...Chachi hoon ...Koi sauteli (step)...Maa.. .nhi..beta hai mera ...(she start caring abhijeet )
Daya : Bahut jaldi yaad aaya Maa Apko ki aap iss insaan (pointed towards abhijeet ) Sagi hai ...Koi Sauteli nhi ...
Roop : (in tears) : Andhi ho gayi thi ...Logo ki bekaar bato mein aa gayi ...thi ...Daya sit otherside of bed ...rubbing his hand as he was shivering badly ...
Acp silently ..standing with down head ...Door bell rings ...
Acp : Mein dekhta hoon
Sal : Kya hua Boss ..
Acp : chal jaldi Upar yrr abhijeet ..
Sal : Kya hua Abhijeet ko ..
Acp : tu chal ...
Inside Abhijeet's room dr salunkhe check ...
Sal : Sardi hui hai ...Aur ...Jada der bheegne ki wajah se ...Bhukhar hua hai ...Sar dard bhi hai ...Bas ek baat ...Iska BP bahut high hai Iss age mein aisa Bp High tabhi hota hai Jab koi Insaan Mentally Stressed ho ...Kuch bhi karo ...Par relax karo Isse ...Nhi tho
Daya : Nhi tho kya uncle
Sal : Nhi tho yeh depression mein slip kar jayega ...
Acp : What ! ! ! ...
Sal : Haan Yeh lo ...meds le aayo ...Yrr aise react mat karo ...Depression mein Slip kar jayega ...na ki kar gaya hai ...Samjhe ...
Roop : Hum dhyan rakhenge ...
Sal : Jii thik hai ...Mein chalta hoon ...
Acp : Chal ...
Sal : Acp ...bas kar yrr ...ab ...Uss bache ko azad karde ...saza se ...
Acp : Mein koi saza nhi de rha hoon
Sal : De rhe ho Acp ...mujhse jooth bol sakte ho par apne aap se poocho ...kya nhi de rhe ussko saza ...Yrr Woh teri saza shayad apni ...akhri himmat mein ...kaat rha hai ...
Acp (shivered) : Kya bol rha hai ...
Sal : Jo kuch bol rha hoon soch ke bol rha hoon baki ...tu khud samjhdaar hai ...he went
Acp closed the door went back to ...his sons room ...
Daya was busy in rubbing ...his hand ...roop was putting wet cloth in his head ...Acp ...looked at his sons sleepy face ...who is now pale ...tired ...
Daya (in tears) : Abhi plzz ankhe khol do ...mein in logo ke liye tujhe takleef di jin logo ne tujhe...pareshaan dekh ke ...koi farq nhi padta ...uth ja yrr
Roop : Daya usko sirf bhukhar hai ...thik ho jayega ...lo paani pio
Daya : nhi mujhe kuch nhi pina ...
Roop : Daya ...he drinks as has no courage to deny this tone of his mother ...feel sleepy ...and slept beside abhijeet
Roop : Sorry daya beta par ...tum bhi bimar pad jaate aise ...aur na jane kya -kya gusse mein bol dete acp sahab ko ...i M sorry ...
Acp enters : roop ...
Roop : Bahut kuch kho diya hai humne jii ...kabhi apni bewakoofi se tho kabhi apke gusse se ...Abb aur nhi...
Acp : Humko Phir se sab phele jaisa karna hoga ...Par kaise ...
Roop : Pata n par karna tho hoga ...Kaise ...Abhi mein bhi nhi janti philhaal ap bhi aram karle beshak ..couch pe karle ...
Acp nodded ...rest on couch ...
Next morning...
Abhijeet : open his eyes ... slowly ..feel pressure ...on his hand ...looked ...at his hand ...found ...daya ..is holding his hand ...in sleeoing condition ...he was shocked ...As daya was not talking to him ...both had a fight ...for more shock and amazement ...Roop was beside him ...so ...his fatherly figure at couch ...He was looking all faces silently ...feeling blessedto have such family ...but he remeberd this family ...and ppl doesn't belongs to him ...he was ...curse for this family as per his thinking ...
Tujhse Naaraaz Nahiin Zindagi
Hairaan Hoon Main
O Hairaan Huun Main
Roop : Also open her eyes ...Found ...Abhijeet already awake ... : Aree Jeet ...Tum jagaye ...she touch his head ...Hmm abb bhi Fever hai ...(abhijeeet looked at her in perplexed look Roop understand but ignore) ...Kya karte ho ..haan ...Bheeg kaise gaye tum ...Poocha kuch ...
Abhijeet : Sorry ...aage se nhi hogi ..meri wajah se pareshani...
Pareshaan hoon main
O pareshaan hoon main
Tujhse naaraz nahiin zindagi
Hairaan hoon main
Roop : Looked at him in pain ...
Acp : Bilkul ...honi bhi nhi chahiye pareshani tumhari wajah se kisi ko ...Are ...(Roop looked at him in shocked) ...
O hairaan huun main
Tere masum sawaalon se
pareshaan hoon main
O pareshaan hoon main
Roop (interept) : Aree aap utha gaye chale aap mein nasta laga do ...
Acp : Nhi ruko ...
Roop : Aap aye plz...Outside ... Kya KAr rhe hai ...Aap aise kyu bola Usse
Acp (anger) : Yeh acha hai woh bakwas kare tho sunlo ...aur kuch na bolo ...kya bol rha tha (imitating abhijeet) Sorry ...My foot ...uska sorry ...Bewakuf ladka ...
Roop : Zakham bahut gehere hai ...jii...aur phir ...apno ke diye hua hai ...Aur aap hi soche woh kaise na ...Shock ho...jisne itne dard diya ...zindagi mein ...dard nhi dard ko ...zindagi ...bana diya ...uske samne khade hoke ...concern dikha rhi hoon ...woh kya kare ..na jane kaise shant hai ..app ya mein hote ...tho na jane kya kar dete ...
Jeene ke liye sochaa hi nahi
Dard sambhaalane honge
Jeene ke liye sochaa hi nahi
Dard sambhalane honge
Daya : Kyu ki woh abhijeet hai Maa ...(both looked at him ) ...mein aur aap nhi ...uska har dard uska rha hai humesa ...Uss ne aaj tak ...Dad ke samne ...Kabhi badepapa Ka naam leke ek asoo nhi bahay ...Kyu ek Kya usse yaad nhi aati ...Kya usse ...Apne papa se pyaar nhi ...ya usse yaad nhi uske papa ...aisa nhi tha kyu ki woh janta tha ...usse apko dukh hota hai ...Woh akele baith ke rota tha ...Humesa roya hai ...
Muskuraaye to muskuraane ke
Karz utarne honge
Acp : Kya bol rhe ho daya woh strong tha ...nhi roya kyu ki mein ne kabhi usko kami mehsoos nhi hone di ...
Ho muskurauun kabhii to lagataa hai
Jaise honthon pe karz rakha hai
Daya : Usse ne kabhi apko ...yeh mehsoos nhi hone diya ki woh apne dad ko miss karta hai ...(to Roop ...)...pane kitni Asani se bol diya ...Ki woh mere aur dad ke bich aa rha hai ...par Mom ussne kabhi ...bhi mere aur dad ke bich ane ka socha nhi n ...Ussne kabhi bhi Dad ko Father's day pe kuch nhi diya ...in fact usne wish bhi humesa mere baad kiya unko ...(acp stunt yes he is right abhijeet never gave any gift to him never wish him first ... he was shocked to now the ...maturity level of his elder son ...)...Uss ne...itna dur jake ...study karne ka iss liye bola taki dad mere college aur mere upar focus kar ...iss liye n ki woh mujh se achi study ...aur college mein padhe ...
Zindagi tere gam ne hamein
Rishte naye samajhaye
Roop : Kya bol rha hai Tu ...
Daya : sach woh sach ...jo bahut phele pata hona chahiye tha ...Par usne nhi bataya ...Apko kya lagta hai woh apka plan nhi samjha tha Maa ...woh samjh gaya tha ki ...Aap usko ...Crime psycology...Mujhe ...Bussiness course ...Jo Apne bachpan ...se itna mature tha ...kya woh nhi samjha hoga ...samjha tha maa ...bilkul ...samjha tha ...Kabhi bola nhi ...
Roop and acp ...in disbelief ...remember Abhijeet Childhood ...roop remember his caring son ...who never ...disobey her..(pov) Koi Haq tho nhi dikhaya Hum par tumne Abhijeet ...Phir bhi joothe ilzamm sunte gaye ...
Mile jo hamein dhoop mein mile
Chaanv ke thande saaye
Daya : Maa ...Mein Apse poochta hoon ...Kabhi Haq jataya ...Jaise mein karta tha ...nhi Kyu ki ...woh ...janta tha ...samjhta tha ...Aap hi n samjhe kabhi mere bhai ko ...Aur sirf ...Aap ki wajah se woh iss ...Kadar bikhar gaya hai ...sirf aapki
Roop was ...Feeling Loss of words ...
Hairaan Hoon Main
O Pareshaan hoon main
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Rhia Dubey