A Flaming Heart and A Striking Soul ch 21
Hey Peoples!
I don't know what to say right now, so please read the chapter
This chapter might be shorter too.
Anyway. Please Enjoy!
Last Time: After defeating a giant spider monster, Ferb and the others head east to get out of the Luminous Forest. Here is what happens.
After a while of traveling east, Phineas and the gang finally make it out of the Luminous Forest and find themselves in a large field, lush with varieties of flowers. By the time they did, it was sunset, with the sky being a pinkish-orange with there already being signs of stars coming out. It was quite a sight. A familiar sight in Phineas's eyes, as it looked almost exactly like in his dream.
"So, should we set up camp or something?" Isabella asked. "I don't know Isabella. I think it's still a bit early, we can still walk a while longer" Phineas replied. "I agree with him. We've spent quite a lot of time as it is" Ferb said. "Well, if we're going to keep walking, we should go to this place called Dream Garden" Isabella suggested, holding the map. "Alright then, off to Dream Garden!" Phineas said, taking a few steps in that direction.
"Wait" Ferb said, stopping his brother. Phineas stopped and turned to his brother. "If that's the sunset, why is it in the east?" Ferb asked. Phineas's eyes grew wider in realization. "He's right, the sun's supposed to set in the west" Isabella pointed out. "It could be the sun rising" Baljeet said. "No, it's clearly setting, but in the east" Ferb stated. "Maybe it's cause we're in a different world or something" Buford said. "It can't be, I've seen the sun set when we were in the canyon. It was setting in the west then" Phineas stated. Everyone continued to think.
"Umm, guys?" Isabella said. The others turned to her. "Why's the sky turning green?" Isabella asked nervously looking at the sky. Everyone turned to the sky. Sure enough, it was turning green, with weird, huge, dark-rainbow colored clouds forming above them. The flowers started disappearing too. Everything was vanishing, leaving behind nothing but weeds and dirt. Everyone watched this in shock.
"What is happening?" Baljeet asked. "I don't know" Phineas said, worried about it like everyone else. After a few more moments, the area was completely changed into a nearly barren field, covered in suspicious and weird looking weeds.
Everyone looked around in confusion, as they didn't know where they are or what'll happen next.
Yay! Complete :D
I thought adding a cliffhanger here would give me a bit of time to think of the next chapter.
I also liked adding an unexpected twist to it too, but I know it can also lead to conflict with understanding the story if the author isn't careful.
But, I am, so I think it went well.
Anyway, Please be patient as I think of the next chapter. Bye!