A/N: okay so that was a cheap way to try and bring some people out into the world of reviews.. which failed miserably by the way... Its just hard for me to not hear back from the reader... I guess I better start getting used to it, and maybe if Angel Lies is huge I will love these days when I get reviews from only 1 percent of my readers..
New Angel Lies news! Proof has been accepted! It is going to take about 9 days to get it up at Amazon and 6 weeks to hit bookstores around the country! At least that's what they told me.. I think they were a little mad about my unwillingness to release the last proof for a change they felt was minor but major to me.
Signed copies are available now at it's website Angel-Lies dot com! And they are even offering the 4 extra proofs, soon to be collectors Items! The web guy said he was even making an Angel Lies MMORPG to play at the site. It looks like Super Nintendo graphics but I can't wait to play! Anyways check it out!
Also, I just wanted to take the time to say Fuck Lord Byron and Aquafag for tagging up Ravens review board with their informative responses to her call to arms for fanfickers everywhere. The Fuck you goes to any other FanFic Nazi that wants to spend all day reading the rules and regulations, I don't follow any of them... even the plagiarism.. This site is a Fan site.. Of course we will plagiarize.. These fucks act like we're trying to sell this stuff... but anyways.... of course I can't end the Evil Edward Twitters.. I'm just as addicted writing as I'm sure you are at reading it... I must say that he is not just going to fall head over heels for her... He's going to progress.. and he might have one more girl before her... I'm SORRY.. It just fits the story line... Lol...
Well off to another tweet..
That bastard M, talking about my life like he has control over it... I hope Lord Byron finds this and reports it like the
straight out bitch crew member he is... come on! the guy is writing Fan fics for Sonic the Hedgehog... but until then.. back to the story..
The game was going fine and everyone was doing a marvelous job. We had her amazed and somewhat disturbed by our power and our speed but surprisingly she fit in pretty nicely with our lot, which made me feel a slight bit of regret that I hadn't met her through different circumstances.
I gave Alice the signal and she started her part in our grand play. Bella's shock was perfection. I could hear their minds as they crossed over the field. Her mate was not interested in playing these games, unsure of why we had a problem with a human anyway. The other member of her Coven, was very interested in playing a part. They decided he would be the lead and I could hear him going over the correct lines in his head. There was something I didnt expect as the three entered the clearing. The new mate, James, was looking for something, or better yet, smelling for something.
When the show began I was covering Bella much like Alice's vision had shown but something felt wrong. There was definitely something different about the reactions I was getting from this James.
He sniffed the air tracing scent after scent, leaving the ladies without a second thought but scrutinizing all of the men, starting with Carlisle and ending with my own. I followed his memory to the scent he searched for.
He was with Victoria, talking and hugging, and although his senses, which he regarded above all, read nothing, her reactions and eyes left him to believe there was something else going on. So he left the two to plan out their participation in our game. He followed her scent which ended at the river where she jumped in after our... "reaquaintance". He stopped and took a big whiff of the contaminated air following the scent around and visualizing the scene as it played out until he found the effect of such work, the pond of little Edwards. He was convinced Victoria was not a willing participant, and the fury consumed him. He wanted his shot at her violator and he would play along just to get close enough to smell him out.
The moment he realized it was me he didn't hesitate moving to strike. I rushed into a defensive position, holding my own while we ripped roars at each other. He wanted to rip my head off and throw it at my body, but he knew that battle would not be allowed and my brothers would stop him before he had a chance. His mind worked quickly, almost too fast to trace but in the end I saw his new goal at revenge, he would kill Bella.
I blocked all of his attempts but it wasn't over, he wanted revenge, and he would wait. Even if it took him forever, he would wait for her to be alone and then swoop in and take her. His plans were gruesome. Once he had her, he planned on videotaping while he broke both of her legs and as she cried out for mercy, he would rape her, every which way, sending me the video. What a sick Fuck? It actually bothered me that he planned on hurting her. I wasn't sure why.
The rest of the vampires thought he was just playing into his role and continued on their course, but he made it hard to continue and Carlisle decided to figure things out at the house. I knew he wouldn't give her up in sacrifice, he loved humans too much, but when he found out I was the cause of all of this, Carlisle would probably be willing to allow my head to come off. Yeah right, he needed me to make my office rounds and make sure no one suspects anything at the hospital. Emmett, Alice and I headed to the jeep dragging Bella along. I spoke quickly using our fast speech which humans could hardly understand and explained the situation to the two of them. I decided at that moment I was not going to let it happen. I was going to take care of her, and even though I didn't feel for her like she felt about me, I did care about her and would keep her safe.