Alright, thank you for all those who have been patience with me on posting chapters. I realize I have be neglecting my fanfictions due that writers block and procrastnation. NO more I say, I will band together to stop such a thing and hope for the best in this. I can not believe that this is my longest fanfiction up to date and i am quite proud of myself for not giving up on this and continuing such a thing. Maybe after this i will become a better write or at least better than what I am now. Okay, OKay so i talk to much, here is your next chapter.
Ps. I finally got that new laptop but its used and its a macbook. It is taking getting used to using such a system since im so used to using hp and dell laptops as well as toshiba.
P.S.S How would you rate my fanfiction on a scale of 1-10 and why? Also do you think im making the characters non realistic and cheesy? Is my character a mary sue? Please feel free to give me your opinions via reviews or pms.
"P.O.V 3rd person:br /Kateesha followed after Sesshomaru's foot prints in the snow. There was no way that he was just going to snub her like that and walk away like he was innocent. Once she a caught up to him there were pretty far into the little forrest near the shrine. "Sesshomaru!...Stop!" She yelled after him. He stopped walking but he didn't turn to look at her at all. She walked closer and made to reach for his arm but put in back down to her side. "Why are you walking away from me? After everything? You promised you wouldn't hurt me." She spoke softly and anyone listening on could tell that she was hurt.
"It was then that he decided to turn towards her. "You should not be out here following after me nor should you be bringing up stupid promises." He said coldly and she shivered from the ice in his voice. He couldn't be cutting her off like this, not after they had be separated so long only to be reunited with him again. "If you think that I will leave you to do something stupid because i got hurt or allow you to try pushing me away again then you have truly lost it. I am not going anywhere, we have had this argument before. I am a big girl and I can handle myself." She argued back as she tried to stay calm about all of this. He moved closer to her and backed her up against the tree behind her. "You can take care of yourself? But you were taken by a demon and tortured yet you say you can handle yourself. You are not safe without me and i can not fight demons and find the items while trying to keep you safe. I am strong but even I know my own limits. Stay out of it and stay home where you belong."
"She looked at him shocked. "I am not some damsel in distress! I won't be that girl! I know I'm not as strong as those other men. I know i don't even have a change to even defend myself and I know i don't have powers. I hate being useless! I hate having people worrying about me, especially you!" By now she had let the tears she had be holding back flow as she hugged herself and looked down in shame. "I don't want you to be hurt because i was hurt, I love you okay?! There I fucking said it, I love you! And I'm tired of beating around the issue and not talking about it. " She moved away and turned towards the house. "You can say all you want to me but the fact is, is that I love you. I don't know you would ever love me back or even love me at all and only think of me as a possession but I am not going anywhere. I am not some frail thing that can break so easily." She sighed. "You don't have to give me an answer right away, you can think about it. You know where to find me." Then she walked off like that was the end of their conversation.
She had had not expected him to come after her, fact she planned on it. Sesshomaru was not the type to make any rash moves and would seriously think about it but she knew he still had to hurry. She did not tell the others what she knew or what happened when she was taken. During her time away she had learn things about herself and about others, she was a better person for it and felt that she was due for a lesson in life. Although, she could have done the lesson without the pain but beggars can't be choosers. She had walked into her little, cozy house and drew a bath. She knew where the Tree of Life stood and so did the others, including the enemy now. That was the easier part to find but the Mirror of Time had proven to be impossible to find since there had not be any record of such a thing to ever exist rather in fairy tails or history records.
She allowed herself to relax into the freshly drawn bath with her head against the back of the tub. Bathing like this always helped her think more clearly. She looked up at the white bubbles from her bubble bath and was instantly reminded of that other demon. He was the reason she escaped as well as the man reason she wasn't killed. She owned him big time for that and yet she couldn't help but wonder why he would do such a thing and try to help her. She was the enemy yet he didn't seem so bad, in fact he seemed reluctant to do anything bad at all. He seemed to just want to be left alone for the most part and be happy. If that was such the case, then why did he get mixed up with those evil twins who clearly was taking orders from someone else. Some other powerful demon was pulling the strings and she had yet to try to figure any of this shit out.
"After a few days of quiet she had to tell her companion what she knew. She had gathered them around, even Sesshomaru who had continue to avoid everyone since their talk. She had told them what the enemy knew and who was involved but told them that it had to be someone else involved but she did not hear a name nor did she hear anyone different than those three demons while she was held captive. They were not happy that they knew where the tree was or the fact that she took so long to tell them but they agree that it was better they hear it now than not at all.
Sado thought about something,"You know the only ice demon's i have ever met where from the north like the mountains and they preferred being alone most of the time. If we can find out where the ice demons had lived previously we can go there and try to find way to fight against them. As for the twin demons you mentioned, Rune and Sune. They might me poison demons like Sesshomaru is. Their poison might be strong though since Sesshomaru's mom only had that trait. As for whoever could be behind this, i know we have to find out who that this." Inuyasha pointed out, "It seems whoever is behind this knew how to keep her away from us and in fact hide her scent from use so we had a harder time tracking her. "
Kagome frowned in thought." I've got it, i had hidden a black book of demons here at the shrine before we were sent back here. It has details of every demon and their abilities of the ones we had incountered. Now, if only i can remember the system that I used to remember where I put it." She trailed off sheepishly. "I fat load of help that is Kagome. You can't even remember that." Inuyasha pointed out which even I knew was a mistake. It urned him a smack on his arm. I giggled. "I bet you wished those sacred beads still worked, don't you?" Inuyasha grumbled, "Yea, yea. I'm sorry, jeez. So touchy." He rubbed his arm.
Thats it for today's chapter. Please remember to continue to read and REVIEW this story as it is still active and i want people to be entertained and interested becuase if i dont think people like this i tend to just give up and discontinue or delete it as a whole.
