Were on chap 21, my favorite number. No apparent reason for me saying that but I got nothing to put here so...does anyone even read these?

Espion of Shadows: I noticed most of my chapters are usually has 550+ words. some of them, like chapter one, were near 600+ words.

mobiusfan: Now let's peep in the girls bath! But if we get caught, we might die. Just a little heads up.


Kouhei entered the Gym.

The place was like a usual Gym, trainers to try and stop challengers from facing the leader.

The problem was there were two giant electric rods making a wall of electricity.

"How am I supposed to get to the leader now?" Kouhei asked.

He did what any other person would have done, he tried the many trash cans on the floor.

"Huh?" he said when his hand reached something "A switch?"

Kouhei pressed it and noticed that part of the electric wall disappeared.

"Lets try this one," he said as he tried another trash can "Damn, empty."

Just then the electricity turned back on in the section that was off.

"Son of a-"


After minutes of searching and finding one switch, and some playboys, and reaching into an empty second trash can, Kouhei finally turned off the electricity.

"It's official, I hate this Gym." Kouhei said through clenched teeth.

Kouhei planned to win the Gym and get some training done before the party, but it took him almost all the time he had just to find the second switch.

"I just hope no other Gym's are even close to being like this." he said to himself.

Kouhei then walked up to the Leader, who laughed.

"Ha ha, so someone made it pass my electricity!" he laughed.

The Leader wore and army coat and army pants. He had yellow spiked up hair and green eyes.

"My name is Lieutenant Surge," he said in his loud, commanding voice, "and who might my challenger be?"

"My names Kouhei," Kouhei said while taking out a moeball, "and I really hate your Gym."

"Them fighting words, Private." Surge said as he took out his moeball.

The two threw their moeballs into the middle of the battle field, Kouhei sending out Yoruichi while Surge sent out his Voltorb.

Voltorb had a red top and white shorts, nothing else could be told about the Moemon.

"Yoruichi, use Furry Swipes!" Kouhei commanded as Yoruichi pounced on her opponent.

"Self-destruct." Surge ordered calmly.

Voltorb then released an explosion, catching Yoruichi in the middle of it.

"Yoruichi!" Kouhei yelled, trying to see through the thick smoke.

As soon as the smoke cleared, Kouhei saw Voltorb fainted on the floor while Yoruichi was barely standing.

"So much for my debut." Yoruichi said as Kouhei recalled her.

"You know, I really hate this Gym." Kouhei said as he released his second Moemon.

"So whose my opponent?" Candice asked proudly.

Surge released his second Moemon, a Pikachu.

Pikachu had (as if no one knows this) a yellow top and shorts, with brown stripes. She had yellow ears that had brown tips and a yellow tail with brown stripes (who doesn't know this already?).

Candice lunged at Pikachu, hitting her with a Metal Claw, knocking her out.

"That was...disappointing?" Candice said.

"Well then, lets see you beat the Commander of this here army!" Surge said, speaking for the first time during the match.

Raichu was then sent out to the field. Raichu was like Pikachu, except she had more brown on her clothes, and her tail was shaped like a thunder bolt.

"Flamethrower!" Candice shouted, releasing a jet of flames toward Raichu who jumped out of the way.

"If you think that's enough to stop this army, your dead wrong Private!" Surge said.

"This here Raichu is my pride and joy, and no way your puny-" Surge was started to say.

But then a fainted Raichu slammed into Surge.

Kouhei walked up and took his badge.

"I REALLY hate this Gym." he said as he and Candice left.


This is chapter isn't that great it also took me too long to make this chapter. To be honest I forgot if I evolved Candice and Amaterasu. I really hated Surge's Gym, and his damn Raichu and Voltorb.