Review Response:

Strike the Blood (Chapter 20): The Jade Hero is also peaking my interest too lol.

The Highschool of the Dead would be a interesting idea, but I don't know much the franchise to write any story about it.

Silver crow (Chapter 19): Let's hear what you had in store with the Kazuki idea.

A thought did occur to me in regards to Revanna and Meetra's romance, would they be in the beginnings of their relationship by the time Aslan, Bastila, and the rest of the Jedi strike team attack Revanna? Reason being is that the Sith/Dark side can be rather possessive and if Revanna starts to shift her affections towards Aslan it might provoke Meetra into attacking him or trying to kill him so that she can have her master to herself (which is a natural reaction for Sith to have) and even if Revanna demands or orders Meetra to not kill Aslan... but you kinda see what I mean? I'll find a way around that, naturally, and coupled with Bastila's personality in KOTOR I, it would cause a rift to start forming almost from the start.

Is Traya knitting the bones of her enemies? If yes, I take back what I said...

Ok, it was mainly for the description of Caedus' armor.

Damn, that's actually a kinda sweet scene with Shawn and the three girls at the wedding XD.

Hm, Ben as a Plumber... I'll think about it, since if Ben's not going on the summer trip then he won't know about Max's past unless Max told Ben before the trip or sometime into the story.

And I believe the spiritual connection that Vish/Ajeya has is in regards to Vaatu trying to contact him. But back to the Air Nomads, while that is a very valid point, they also would lean towards exiling him since he isn't trying to change or anything (which could prompt Vish/Ajeya to find Vaatu via... whatever Vaatu does lol).

That doesn't tell me about Vish/Ajeya XD. Is he actually going to be an Avatar of Chaos and Destruction, if so then my earlier point about the Fire Nation still stands since his threat would usher Ozai to try to get rid of him to prevent his kingdom from being burned to the ground, unless I'm misunderstanding some part you said.

Can't wait to hear those other Avatar ideas that I might've inspired you for lol.

Oh yeah, none of the other Ben's have the amber color, that's a great catch.

Lol, that's kinda funny with Attia XD.

I think the richest person in Star Wars was a human named Bohhuah Mutdah, with his piggybank of several hundred trillion credits... so naturally Jinn Sage is going to have that same piggybank too, you can guess why lol.

I do like the idea of Jinn having dinner with Padme if it's in the Clone Wars era. Which actually makes me ponder on a few possibilities: if it is in the Clone Wars era, then the idea of Darth Plagueis coming into contact with Jinn Sage as Hego Damask is an infinitely huge possibility, given the numerous calls to the Hutt clans since in the Darth Plagueis novel Hego Damask has a meeting with, I believe, Gardulla the Hutt and Jinn could hear through the spacevines (grapevines) that a member of the InterGalactic Banking Clan was getting involved with a Hutt gangster.

But that would bring a dilemma of how old Jinn Sage would end up being...

I also thought about the Star Cabal and Jinn Sage being during the New Jedi Order era with Luke Skywalker.

I love all of the opening ideas for the story, especially the Vader choke style thing too. Also Spy Master Force user... kinda reminds me of a Jedi Shadow (I think I can come with something with that type...).

Also love the idea of a fancy dinner with Xizor with Savan watching =).

Well... Azula, even at a young age, was "was marked by a distinct lack of empathy. Even as a child, she reacted with hostility when outdone, a trait clearly displayed when she shoved Ty Lee to the ground after the girl bested her at gymnastics." and "From a very young age, Azula demonstrated sadistic aggression and a near total lack of remorse to friends, servants, family, and animals." So... unless the OC does something that "humbles" severely, which would have to be public type of humiliation in order for Azula to listen to a peasant.

I like the alien designs being black and gold... or rather black and amber ;).

Hm, Hex as a good guy... Nope lol.

But that is an interesting idea with Shean's ancestry being tied to the Magic realm.

I'll get back to you with the Story gauntlet part, I'm kinda rebooting it since I messed up on a few bits.

Story ideas:

Child of the Grandmaster (Star Wars): In this AU, Yoda has a child by the name of Yodan (?) and disguises his son as another member of their species.

Very much like his parents, Yoda is extremely powerful in the Force and over the century of his training he would become part of the Jedi High Council during the events of the Phantom Menace.

Star Wars Episode I: Force Knight (Star Wars): A reboot of the entire Star Wars franchise, this story follows the life of a young boy named Aryan Orion.

Alongside his master, Thea Solusar, Aryan grows in power, knowledge, and experience as they travel across the galaxy in times of peace, learning of the many diverse cultures and maintaining the presence of security and peace to the Republic.

However in the dark shadows of the galaxy, an ancient mystical group that uses the Dark side stretch their invisible fingers across the galaxy, ready to strangle the Jedi from existence.

I want to ask you guys a favor:

Most of the stories I've done have been mainly about heroes (anti-villains if you wish) but I've been mulling over the ideas of doing villain stories of any sort; DC, Marvel, Star Wars, etc. And I want your help with that, and I've gotten started (ish) with the Prince of Solaria story, but I would greatly appreciate your help.

Story Gauntlet Reboot :

So I'm rebooting this story section of the Palace, the same principles apply as from the last chapter but I meant to add more story ideas first before I created the Story Gauntlet again.

"What we have here is a little gauntlet, and the rules are pretty simple- all of the stories that I, and my readers, have suggested in the past many chapters I will make a list from each category (DC Comics, DBZ, Marvel, Star Wars, etc.) and you guys will vote and whichever gets the most votes from each category will be the ones I will focus for new stories."