Dez's passage/adventure part 1
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DD woke up and walked to the queen's room. "You wish to have your daughter go through the test do you not?" the queen asked. DD nodded. "Then bring her to me and we shall send her to be tested," the queen said. DD stood up and walked to Dez's room. She shook Dez awake and told her to get ready for a fight. They then walked down to the queen's private chamber, Dez covered in Predator armor. There they found the queen without her egg sack. She was standing on a transporter. "Dez my dear granddaughter you will be tested to become a true part of this hive," the queen said. Slash then walked in. She was covered in armor including her tail armor. "Ready Dez you are going to fight for your right to be a member of this hive," Slash said. "Where are we going?" Dez asked her mother. "We are all going to the predator planet for you to fight prisoners to the death," DD said. Dez gulped and they all stood on the transporter. They were transported to an arena. Large amounts of clicking could be heard from the stands. Slash clicked back. The queen, DD, and Slash crawled up into the stands and left Dez alone on the floor. "Mom! Grandma! Aunt!" Dez cried as doors opened around her. Crazed predators and a strange alien came out of the doors. "You must kill them to live," DD cried from the crowd. "Yes mother!" Dez said drawing her swords. She charged the strange alien and shot the thing with her shoulder gun. The thing jumped out of the way. Dez then spun around and slit the throats of the three predators that were around her. As the blood fell she looked around to find all the other predators dead with holes in their stomachs. She jumped up and spread her wings. A tail whipped out under where she was and the blood from dead predators glowed showing that the only thing left alive was the strange alien. Dez looked at the stands to find everyone was looking at the alien except for Slash who was pointing at her wrist blades. Dez nodded and let out her wrist blades. She dived down and slashed at the alien. The alien jumped again and thrust his tail at Dez. Dez blocked the attack. Dez then butted the alien on the head. The alien hissed and tried to bite down on Dez's shoulder. "Try my new armor," Dez said as spikes appeared on her armor. The alien cried out as a spike protruded from his head. Dez quickly slipped away as the acid blood dripped down. DD, the queen, and Slash leapt back down to the floor and congratulated Dez. "That was excellent and you have further proved our wish to have an alliance with the predators," the queen said hugging Dez. "Thank you for the help with the training, Aunt," Dez said to Slash. "You did wonderfully," Slash said hugging Dez. "Mom how did I do?" Dez asked. "You did great, what gave you the idea to make new armor?" DD asked. "Don't be mad but I looked into the future a little and saw the armor," Dez said. "Mad why would I be mad that my little girl can see into the future?" DD responded. Clicking could be heard from the crowd. "They wish to have such armor," Slash said translating. Dez took a deep breath and started clicking back. "She can talk predator?" DD asked amazed as her daughter finished talking. "Yes mother Grandpa Scar taught me," Dez said. "Scar?" a voice came from the crowd. A predator jumped down. "You know Scar, the lost warrior?" The predator asked. "He is one of my grandpas," Dez said. "He is the father of Slash, my daughter," the queen said. "An alien and a predator together!" the predator cried. "Yes my mother is an alien while my father is a predator," Slash said. "Prove it," the predator said. Slash started making clicking sounds and the transporter in the back activated. Scar materialized and stepped up to Slash and the queen. "Lord Scar!" the predator cried. "Yes?" Scar asked. "You truly are with the alien queen?" the predator asked. "Yes and we have Slash to prove the advantage of an alliance," Scar said to the crowd. Everyone's eyes turned to Slash as she removed her helmet. The crowd gasped as her black hair flowed down changing into dreadlocks. She then removed the rest of her body armor. The crowd gasped as her skin turned from a speckled green to a glossy brown and back. She then removed her tail armor. She stood up on her tail and started doing push ups against the wall. "I am stronger than many of the unblooded warriors here," Slash said. Predators jumped down and started to challenge Slash to a fight. Slash easily defeated all of them to the amazement of the crowd. "I have the training of a predator, the acid blood of the alien and the strength of both," Slash said. The transporter started up and Spike materialized. "This is my courter Spike," Slash said walking up to Spike and hugging him. There were roars from the stands and many blooded warriors jumped down. "My sister may chose whom she wishes to have court her," DD said. "I chose to be mates with Spike," Slash said. The predators charged at Spike. A shield popped up around Slash, Spike, DD, Dez, the queen, and Scar. "As my sister said we get to choose our mates," Beth said from the transporter. "Everyone get to the transporter Beth you and I will repair this problem," DD said. Everyone nodded and rushed to the teleporter. Beth then made a small shield around the transporter. Beth then removed the shield that kept the predators at bay. "How dare you keep us from her!" the predators cried. "Beth," DD said holding out her hand. "DD," Beth replied grabbing the outstretched hand. They closed their eyes as the predators jumped at them. Suddenly a group of female predators appeared in front of the two. The female predators held up their spears and blocked the males' attack. "Why were we the greats called to this point?" the lead female asked. "These males wish to take our sister from her chosen mate that her father has approved of," DD and Beth said. "Then we must punish them," the female leader said. The males stood up and watched as the females charged them. The males had very little time to react when the wave of females hit them. They fought until the females had all of the males taken down or unconscious. "We shall return to our temple now," the females said and they disappeared. The males stared at DD and Beth and the one that originally jumped down (Who didn't get hit down because he hadn't attacked,) said, "You have the ability to summon the great ones you truly have strength beyond ours," "What is your name wise one," Beth asked. "My name is of no concern all you need to know is that I am the leader of this tribe," the predator said. "Well elder I would suggest you learn how to control your men better," Beth said. "I am still young," the leader said. "So do you think an alliance would still be a good idea we would be a part of the agreement," DD said. "Yes we will make an alliance," the leader said. "Thank you," Beth said. "Is there anyone else that would be a part of this agreement?" the elder asked. "Yes our family but there is one we wish for you to meet," DD said. Beth started muttering and the shield around the transporter dissipated and the transporter activated. Celeste materialized and stepped forward. "She is a human!" the leader cried. "She is a dark witch with the power of immortality," DD said. "A dark witch? A magic user?" the leader cried. "Yes," Celeste said. "Show me the truth to your words," the leader said. "Sure," Celeste replied. Celeste started glowing black and small black aliens appeared all around her. These little aliens went over to the dead alien and crawled all over it glowing a dark red. The strange alien opened its eyes as the little aliens disappeared. Celeste then threw up her hands and a spear popped out of thin air in front of her. Celeste grabbed the spear and threw it at the advancing alien. The spear glowed black and formed into a giant snake. The snake wrapped around the alien and swallowed him whole. The snake and the alien disappeared then. The leader stared at Celeste before quickly getting on his knee and saying, "You truly are a great magic user please forgive me for doubting that a human could be a great magic user." "You are forgiven," Celeste said. "We shall leave now," Beth said. Celeste and DD nodded and they stepped on the transporter as the other predators woke up. When they got down to the alien planet Beth and Celeste walked off. DD walked to the queen's room and had a little chat with her mother.
With Dez
Dez had watch what her mother was doing while she was waiting in her room. When her mother started heading to her room. Dez quickly opened a portal and jumped through. She landed on a small island and immediately looked up to see a giant bird. The bird had a girl in his claws. Suddenly a cannon ball hit the bird making it drop the girl. Dez flew up and caught the girl and placed her on the ground. She then heard fighting and twisted around to find a small boy fighting two creatures. Dez quickly slit the creatures' throats and withdrew her wings. The boy looked at her and smiled. He was dressed in a bright green tunic. "Hello my name is Dez what is yours?" Dez asked. "My name is Link," the boy said. They heard a cry from the platform Dez jumped from. "The girl!" Link and Dez cried jumping up to the platform. "Who are you people?" the girl asked them when they ran up to her. "We are the people who saved you," Dez said. "OK," the girl said. They all walked out of the forest and when they got to the bridge a little girl waved and called out to Link. Suddenly as the girl tried to cross the bridge the giant bird from before came and grabbed her. Dez and Link ran to the edge of the cliff and jumped. The girl caught link while Dez's wings popped out and she flew after the bird. Dez looked back to find Link was still on the cliff. She summoned her powers and gave Link the ability to fly. Link pulled away from the girl and flew off after Dez. The girl quickly ran down the cliff and onto a pirate ship. Link quickly caught up with Dez and they speed up after the bird. "Who is the little girl that bird has anyways?" Dez asked. "She is my sister!" Link cried. "Then we better save her," Dez said grabbing Link's hand and zooming forward. They caught up to the bird at a fortress. DD and Link landed and they looked back to find the pirate ship a little ways behind them. They quickly entered the fortress and ran up the stairs and found that there was the bird on the roof. Dez looked into the future as they hid behind the top of the stairs and saw that they would need a hammer to defeat this bird. She made a large hammer and gave it to Link. They rushed out and Dez started running in a circle. The bird drove its beak into the ground and got it stuck. Link ran forward and smashed the things beak as hard as he could with the hammer. The shield around the beak instantly shattered and Dez ran up and cut the things beak off. The thing fell and the girl from before and some pirates ran up the stairs. "What happened to the buzzard?" the girl asked. "We did," Dez said. "What is your names anyway?" the girl asked. "My name is Link and this is Dez," Link said. "How do you do my name is Tetra," the girl said. "Hello Tetra," Dez and Link said. "Link where is your sister?" Dez asked. Link jumped up and quickly looked around. "Where is she!"? Link cried. "Link my mother and relatives can help in the search we should go to my world and ask for help," Dez said. "Sure!" Link said. "How do you plan to get to your family?" Tetra asked. "Simple, we shall teleport," Dez said. "You should go now Tetra," Dez said. Dez then opened up a portal and grabbed Link and jumped in.
DD looked into Dez's room as they got through. "Dez why did you bring the hero of time here?" DD asked. "He is the legendary hero of time!" Dez cried. "I feel like I know you," Link said pointing at DD. "You should dear I knew you back many years ago when we saved the legendary kingdom," DD said. "You mean to say I am the great hero of the legendary kingdom!" Link cried. "Yes and it appears you will need my families help yet again," DD said. "I shall summon the necessary people," DD said. In a few minutes Celeste, Lari, Chi, Lloyd, Kratos, Inu and Shessy came through the door. "We are going to help a hero of time save his world yet again," DD said. "So this is the legendary Link," Celeste said. "We are going to help this little human shrimp!" Shessy and Inu cried. "You really think you can get rid of my new family so quickly," Chi said. "Another elf like creature body for Link," Lari said. "Thank you Mom!" Dez cried. "Thank you everyone," Dez said. "First Link's new body must be trained," DD said. "Can we do the training in my world?" Link asked. "Sure," DD said. Dez made a portal and they all jumped in. They landed on the sea and they all took to wing. DD carrying Inu and Shessy and Lari being carried by Au-Un Celeste floating on a black cloud. They flew straight to a Rito village. "Hello," DD said to the Ritos as they landed. "Hello we have heard of you your name is Link yes?" the chief asked. "I am Link," Link said stepping forward. "Who are your companions?" the chief asked. "My name is Dez this is my mother, DD, my fathers, Inu and Shessy, my aunt, Chi, her mate, Lloyd, and his father, Kratos, and this is my mother's friends Lari and Celeste" Dez said. "Why do you wish to come here?" the chief asked. "We wish to train at the peak," DD said. "The great dragon lord is angry and will not allow anyone up to the peak," the chief said. "I can speak dragon so I can find out what the problem is," DD said. "Thank you great one," the chief said bowing. DD spread her wings and she and the others flew off toward the top. They got to the top and DD started to talk in the dragon tongue. "What is wrong great dragon lord?" DD asked. "Something is on my tail," the dragon lord said. "Then we must destroy it," DD said. DD turned around and told the others what she had learned. They floated down to a section lower than the peak with a door in it. They entered and Dez threw a shield around them. They entered an area below the peak. There they found a scorpion creature hanging on to the dragon lord's tail. Lari charged up a magic spell while Lloyd and Kratos drew their swords. Celeste charged her magic while Link, Chi, DD, Dez, Shessy, and Inu drew their swords. As Lari and Celeste released their magic the others attacked. They cut the creature into little bits. They then flew back up after Link picked up a heart container. "Thank you great ones," the dragon lord said. "We shall now go to the great duka tree," DD said. They all flew off in a southern direction. They flew onto island with a giant tree growing in the middle. They flew in through the top and landed on a lily pad. "Who is here?" a voice said. "It is I great duka tree," DD said. "DD!" the tree cried. "Yes you know of the current problem we shall go to the forbidden woods and shall take what we need from there then we shall be on out way," DD said. They flew over to the evil looking tree and they flew straight into it. They landed when they saw a giant plant in the middle of the room. "We will take care of this creature," Celeste, Kratos, Link, and Chi said. "I am going too," Dez said. Link nodded and the five walked up to the plant. Celeste, and Kratos charged up fire magic while Chi summoned Efreet. Link and Dez drew their swords. Efreet cut half the roots holding the plant up while the fireballs cut the rest of them down. Dez and Link cut the tender inside up into little pieces. Link picked up the heart container and grew slightly stronger. They walked back outside. Suddenly a little Rito flew over to them holding two gems. "These are the pearls of the goddesses," the Rito said. "There is one missing," DD said. "We could not find the last one," the messenger said. "Then it must still be held by its owner," DD said. "We will be going to buy bombs," Dez said. "How does she know?" Link asked. "We can see into the future," DD said. They took wing again and flew to Windfall Island. They landed behind the bomb shop. Dez and Link crawled in the backspace and found the pirates from before taking bombs. Tetra looked up from where she was standing and saw the top of Link's head. She told the pirates they would wait for morning to leave. The pirates jumped up and down and left the shop. Dez and Link crawled back out and told the others what they had seen. They walked in through the front of the bomb shop and picked up some bombs. They then flew to the island they found Link on. They flew to the back and through their bombs at a wall in the back. The wall shattered and they flew in to find a giant fish. The fish and DD talked and the fish gave DD another pearl. "We will now unlock the tower of the gods," DD said. They each took one of the pearls and flew off in a different direction. Dez and Link together with Lari. DD, Inu, Shessy and Celeste. Finally Chi, Kratos, Lloyd. They each had a pearl and flew off to three different islands. They each placed their gem in the hands of the statue on the island. They then quickly flew away as the statues exploded and three mini goddesses shot light in a triangle and the lights met and a giant tower flew up from the sea. They all flew to the tower and flew in. They flew straight up to a room with three doors they split into groups again and each went through the doors and led the small statue from within to the inner room. The statues awakened a portal in the middle. DD materialized a bow and they stepped onto the portal. They ran up the stairs DD shooting the live statues along the way. They entered a room and a voice came from the walls. Suddenly two hands came from the wall along with a head. "Everyone take care of the hands I got the head!" DD cried. DD handed Link some bombs. "When the head comes down throw one in its mouth," DD whispered to Link. Suddenly the head's eyes opened and DD shot the eyes with her bow. The head fell down and Link threw a bomb in its mouth. This continued for two more times then the hands and head returned to the walls and Link picked up the heart container. They then flew up to the top of the tower and they rang the bell at the top. They then flew to the bottom of the tower and found a glowing circle in the water. DD dived in and everyone followed her. They landed in a small pool by a castle. DD walked up the stairs everyone following her. They entered the castle and found a lot of monsters frozen. They walked a bit farther in and found a statue of Link, "I truly am the legendary hero!" Link cried. Everyone heard scrapping and looked down to find DD pushing some triangular slabs into a print on the floor. When she got all the slabs in the floor pattern a scrapping could be heard and everyone jumped as the statue of Link moved back. DD walked back up to the others and walked down the stairs. The others followed her. There in the middle of the room was a sword. "Link that is the master sword, go take it," DD said. Link nodded and walked up to the sword. He drew it and a light shown from it. Suddenly all the frozen monsters above came to life. Everyone ran up and started to fight the reawakened monsters. Celeste was taking the armor off some as Lari guarded her. Inu and Shessy were taking out the disarmored ones. Dez and Link were taking out the rest on the floor while DD took out the ones on the upper floor. When they had taken all the monsters out the energy fields blocking the doors disappeared. They walked outside and tried to fly over to the grassy meadow but were thrown back by a force field. "Ganon put a shield up," DD said. "We will have to go back to the forsaken fortress to save your sister, Link," Dez said. They took off again in the direction of the fortress. They flew up to where they faced the bird and they smashed down to a spiral staircase. They ran down the staircase and found a bunch of girls in a cage. "Aryll!" Link cried. Suddenly Dez twisted around and Tetra and her pirates were behind them. "We can handle this," Tetra said. The pirates came forward and freed the girls. "We have business with the master of this fortress," DD said. "This Ganon character you were talking about?" Link asked hugging his sister. "Yes," Dez said. The pirate came up to Aryll and Link and picked Aryll up. "Brother!" Aryll cried. Link simply smiled as the pirates quickly ran out the door. They all then flew up to the highest part of the fortress. There they saw a man. Link drew the master sword and charged the man. The man quickly spun around and knocked Link into Dez. DD, Lari, Celeste, Kratos, and Chi threw a shield around everyone. Suddenly Tetra came from the outside and jumped at Ganon. Ganon caught her and said something. Suddenly Lloyd jumped out and slashed at Ganon's arm. Ganon released Tetra and Lloyd grabbed her. They all then quickly flew off and as Ganon looked out the window the dragon lord flew down and breathed fire straight at Ganon. Dez led them as they flew to the tower of the gods. They flew down to the castle and the statue moved back out of the way. They quickly ran down the stairs and found a man where the sword was before. "I am the king of Hyrule," the man said. He said some things to Link and Tetra and then Tetra transformed into a young girl. "Zelda!" DD cried. "My name is Tetra I can't be Zelda!" Zelda cried. "Mother these windows they show the original sages?" Dez asked from the water surrounding the area. "Yes these are some of the original sages," DD said. "You knew the original sages!" the king cried. "Yes I also know that the legendary hero died and was reborn in the form of the new Link," DD said. "This boy is the legendary hero!" the king cried. "Yes," Lari said. "Then you must give the master sword back its power to destroy evil," the king said. "Zelda you must stay here," Celeste said. "We have enough people we have to protect," Inu and Shessy said. "She won't be found here," Lloyd and Kratos said. "If my mate wishes it then you must stay here," Chi said. "OK," Zelda said. Everyone but Zelda walked out and back to the upper world. They flew off to an island that had a giant stone in front of it. Dez went up to the stone and lifted it up. She threw it and everyone watched as it made it all the way to Dragon Island. "That's my girl," Inu said. "Our girl," Shessy said bonking Inu. "Where did everyone go?" Inu asked looking around. "Papas!" Dez cried from the entrance of a hole that was behind where the statue was. They ran inside and found a slab of rock with directions on it. Chi, Dez, and DD moved together and a spark of energy came from between them. After a few minutes Dez turned to Link holding the wind baton. "This will allow you to break this barrio," Dez said. Link nodded and played the baton in the directions the stone slap showed. A spirit of a zora appeared. "I am the sage of earth," the zora said. "We are here to bring you back," Chi said. "Thank you but you first must destroy the being that killed me," the sage said. "Sure!" Inu cried thinking of killing something. The all walked through the dungeon Inu killing all the pigs and floating skulls. Then they made it to a room with a lot of coffins in it. Inu stepped up to a coffin and the lid fell off. A zombie came out and its eyes lit up and Inu froze. The zombie quickly walked up to Inu and latched on to him and started biting him. DD's eyes glowed red and she drew her sword and slashed at the zombie cutting it in half. DD then helped Inu up and sheathed her sword. They flew threw the rest of the dungeon until they got to a room with Poes dancing around. "Link, Inu, Shessy, Celeste, Lari, Chi, Dez, and Lloyd will fight this one," DD said. They nodded and walked up to the dancing Poes. The Poes noticed them and all jumped into a mask. The mask turned into a giant Poe. They all ran around it and fired at it with magic and physical attacks. When it fell on its back Dez ran up to it and picked it up and threw it at the spike columns that surrounded the room. It split into the little Poes again and they quickly slaughtered the little Poes. The mask tried to run up the wall but a shaft of light hit it and it shattered. Link picked up the heart container. Dez, Lari, Chi, and DD then walked in a circle with the zora sage's spirit in the middle. Slowly the sage's body appeared. They then flew off to a large island with a small island next to it. They flew onto the large island and a voice came from the fountain in the middle. A small child popped up from the fountain in the middle. She had a doll that looked like a fairy. She talked to DD and DD held out her bow. The fairy child blessed the bow with the power of ice and fire. They flew to an island with a dragonhead that was sending frozen air out. DD shot it with a fire arrow and the ice melted. They quickly flew in. They went through the area and found iron boots for Link. They then all walked down a hole and found monsters frozen in ice.
Yes again have to end!