(A/N the Next update should be this weekend. And I'm gonna use spaces to talk this time, because I had three reviewers at once. o.O
iluvninjas, Yes I read them xD It's addictive really. Strangely, this story is really popular in Malaysia. Which is really cool, because I love Malaysia. And yes their back after 1 day, defying the classic laws of Mary Sue-ism, in which you stay there forever and forget all about your family. I hope you weren't disappointed, but fear not, thee story isn't over yet ;)
Guest, I'm glad you think it's getting better, I was hoping it was. I think you can really see the difference since I'm a newbie at Fanfiction writing, but whatever... I do have more story planned, both for this and other stories. I'm thinking of writing a story for Jessica called "Jessica in Narnia".
Guest 2 / DemoniaDew702, I'm glad I have you 'suspensed'. I hoped to have that effect on people xD And you'll see what happened soon enough since this 'arc', or whatever it is, is over soon enough. Sadly for your suspense, I've been hit with inspiration and I've added a lot more to the current plot then I meant to originally. And who says no one has been brutally murdered? ;) It could still happen... *hint hint*)
Let's talk more about Jessica. Nah, just kidding. Let's head back to the current plot.
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Underground
"No no no no no-"
"What's wrong Ave did you hurt yourself in the fall?"
"…I'm scared of the dark"
"Of course you are"
"What's that's supposed to mean?"
"You look like the type"
"…Great, even fictional characters think that I look the scared type, well I'll prove my bravery to you in a glorious way, I won't be defeated by mere fears, I'll- Ow" Ave had tried to stand up and had hit her head. Apparently this place was rocky too.
"We'll have to find a way out of here" muttered Nami.
"What if I text Rose to come and rescue us?"
"What's texting?"
"Ummm… you know the snail phone, but then different?"
"How so?"
The following explanation was rather tedious, so we'll skip to Rose
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The Thousand Sunny
In the middle of their strategy meeting, Rose came across an unpleasant thought. "What if the dock master is involved with all of this?"
"Why would he?" asked Usopp reasonably surprised, "he just brought us cookies."
Indeed, the dock master had just brought them all cookies for their meeting.
"Well, he didn't try to stop the assault on the Sunny…" muttered Rose, who couldn't help but remember what Ave had told her previously, in Chapter 14, '"Why do I feel like this is too convenient?" Rose had whispered to Ave. "Because secretly" Ave had whispered back, "He's totally evil. But we aren't supposed to know that yet."
"You couldn't expect a civilian to stand up against a crowd" reasoned Robin.
"Well, that's true, but how did he know we had a strategy meeting anyway?" Rose pressed on, while trying to contain a yawn.
"…Maybe he just made cookies and wanted to share them?" replied Chopper drowsily, swaying on his feet.
"…Yeah….But…" Rose attempted to say more, but her voice didn't agree with her. Suddenly, her head hurt, it seemed as if she fell down. Her eyes felt as if they were going to close themselves, no matter how much she tried to remain conscious. Then her world turned black.
Well, that wasn't ominous at all…
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The Dock House
The Dock Master calmly sipped his tea as he checked his watch. He would give it another half hour before he would instruct his men to collect the crew.
Just thinking about his evil plans caused him to laugh madly. Because he's evil. And insane.
…Just to make it clear, this guy is evil…
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The jungle
Zoro and Luffy rand through the thick jungle at a breakneck speed, but they stopped in their tracks when they saw their path was blocked. By a giant lizardish creature. *cough* Godzilla *cough*
"We don't have time for any of this crap" shouted Zoro in frustration, because he was stressed from worry over their crewmates, worry for the Sunny, annoyance for having the task of carrying a sleeping girl and just not in the mood for some random creature.
Hell, even Luffy didn't stop to admire the 'cool creature'. Instead he said, "Josh, let's go over it."
And before Zoro knew it, Luffy had stretched his arms and they were flying.
"NOT AGAIN?!"
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Underground
While she tried to explain what texting was Ave had, ironically, gotten a text from Rose. Seeing that it was about a cover, she quickly texted her mom about some sleepover at Ter's place.
Then, she and Nami agreed to text Rose for help, but it seemed that Ave's battery was too low. Or dead.
"Nooooooo" cried Ave dramatically and, even though they couldn't see a single thing, Nami knew that Ave had sank to her knees dramatically.
"Why is your battery so dead anyway, you said that if you only texted, the battery could last for days?"
"…..Okay, I'll confess. I might have played Ayakashi. A lot."
"Aya-what?"
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The Dock House
The dock master finally stopped his evil laughing and opened his desk drawer. It held a ruddy walky-talkie. "Hello units" said the Dock Master in a way that a psychopath would greet bunnies, "It's time to start phase 3"
Then he continues laughing manically, in a slightly different was then before. Because he's evil.
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The Thousand Sunny
Zoro and Ter crashed into the ship, while Luffy landed on his feet. That woke Ter up. "What the hell?" she said, clearly annoyed, while Zoro reacted more rationally, when he yelled "When will you stop doing that?!"
Of course Luffy just laughed.
Well at least the ship was fine. "Hey guys!" called Luffy, "we're back"
There was a complete silence.
Then there wasn't a complete silence, since Brook ran up from his hiding place and yelled, "The dock master drugged everyone. He's a marine."
*Insert dramatic music*
*Okay stop now*
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Underground
After feeling along, they discovered that the cave was more of a hallway, so Nami and Ave did the smart thing. They decided to move along it.
When they finally reached an end, they saw a door. A white shining door.
"Please don't tell me that's another portal?"
"Another what?"
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This should've probably been cleared up before, but the story's timeline followed events, rather than time.
…Maybe I should've mentioned that earlier.
Anyway, they all left at the same day, but the only ones that returned that day was the, rather panicked, architect group. When Godzilla appeared, Zoro and Luffy fought their bad guys and Ave and Nami tried to escape and fell. When they beat the attackers on sunny, Ter woke up to a campfire and Ave explained what texting was. When the emergency meeting was called, Ter's group was asleep and Ave's group found what looked like a magical portal.
So when Luffy, Zoro and Ter arrived, they were hours too late to stop the Dock Master from kidnapping their friends. And Ave and Nami had literally walked right into the lion's den.
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Don't you love that moment when everything makes sense?