here's the newest update, i wrote this yesterday at work. tell me what you think!
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The 4 teens had been sitting in silence for over 20 minutes. They were all lost in their own world. Ruby and Jack had been watching the teens silently.
DING DONG!
The teens all jumped and looked toward the front door. They gulped nervously. Ruby walked up to the front door and answered it. The Danforth's, Cross/ Strife, Nielson families and police were all standing outside in the rain. Ruby quickly ushered everyone into the house. Quickly the families rushed inside the house. The Nielson's rushed over to their daughter and threw their arms around her. Matt and Jamie rushed over to the guys and started firing questions at them.
Matt grabbed Troy's shoulder and started shaking him, "what's going on?"
Troy pushed Matt's arms off his shoulder, "calm down, did you parents tell you what's going on?
Jamie shook her head, "our mom just started screaming at us to get dress and get our asses outside. What's going on guys? Why is the Nielson's hugging Kelsi like she should be dead?"
Zeke sighed, "Jason's in trouble…..your uncle came up to them on their date."
Jamie's eyes widen, "you're kidding me. At the lake?" The guys looked at her in question. She blushed, "Jason asked me to help him set up a romantic date for Kelsi. He wanted to surprise her."
Chad glanced at Kelsi and frowned, looking at Jamie, "do you think Jase is okay?"
Jamie looked at the ground in worry, "I don't know. I hope so."
Matt glared at them angrily, "of course Jase is okay! He's a fucking Cross!"
Zeke gave Matt a grim smile, "you're right, Jase is okay."
Kelsi pulled away from her parents and wiped her eyes. Sharron looked at her daughter in worry. Taking her hand she squeezed it, "you okay baby?"
Kelsi sniffled, nodding her head sadly. Tim frowned, "don't lie baby."
Kelsi didn't stop the tears from falling down her face, "I worried about Jason."
Sharron's heart broke; pulling Kelsi to her chest she rubbed her daughter's back. "Baby it's going to be okay, Jason is a smart boy and fast. His uncle isn't going to be able to catch him."
Burying her face in her mom's chest, her voice came out shuffled. "Are you sure?"
Tim nodded his head, "when has your mom been wrong?"
Kelsi laughed against her mom's chest, pulling away. "Never, you're always right."
Sharron smiled at her daughter, "see, mother knows everything." Looking at her husband, "clothes."
Tim handed the clothes over to Sharron, smiling at his daughter, "see never question your mother."
Kelsi smiled at her dad. Taking the clothes from her mom, "I take it I'm changing into these?"
Sharron nodded her head, "if you want to find Jason then I suggest you do that."
Kelsi jumped to her feet and ran upstairs. The teens looked at her in surprise. Zack walked up to them, "what's got her excited?"
Tim smiled, "we just said change if you want to find Jason and she took off."
Zack chuckled, "we better get going soon. Jenny is getting very worried."
Tim nodded his head, "did we figure out want parents are going with each teen."
Zack nodded his head, "Jack is taking his son and Matt, Jonathan and I are taking Chad and Kelsi. You're going to take Zeke and Jamie, unless you want to have Kelsi with you."
Tim nodded his head, "I'll feel better if Kelsi was with me."
Zack nodded his head, "that's fine; Jamie can go with me and Chad."
Tim glanced at his wife, "what about the women?"
Zack smiled at Sharron, "they're going to stay here. Once we get Jason we're going to head back here and warm up. The storm is getting very strong out there."
Tim nodded his head worried. "We should leave once Kelsi is back down here."
Zack glanced at Jonathan, "you going to have Chad change into those clothes you brought."
Jonathan nodded his head; looking at his son he tossed him a bag, "get changed into these. Once you're ready we'll head out."
Chad nodded his head, catching the bag he stood up and went upstairs. Zack nodded his head at Tim and Sharron and walked over to Jenny who was talking to the police officers. The officers talking to her were the ones that came the first time. Officer Irwin and Anderson had grim faces. Jenny frowned at them, "my son's girlfriend said that he has a gun, is it going to be safe for the children to be out there?"
Officer Irwin exchanged looks with Officer Anderson. Sighing Irwin scratched his head. "Probably not. It's getting stronger out there and if we lose a child that can make these worst."
Anderson nodded his head, "are you sure you want the kids out there?"
Jenny sighed, "They know the woods like the back of their hands. They'll know where Jason is. They want to do this, I can't stop them."
Anderson nodded his head, "then we'll put an officer in each group. How many groups do you have?"
Zack walked up to him, "we have 3 groups."
Irwin nodded his head, backing up he started talking into his walkie talkie. Anderson looked down at his watch, "we need to get going, we have the lake on lockdown, and once we get there we'll get everyone in order."
Zack nodded his head, "we're just waiting for 2 teens to change and then we'll head out." The officers nodded their heads, moving away. Zack looked at Jenny in worry, "you staying here?"
Jenny shook her head, "I'm going."
Zack frowned, "I don't think that's a good idea sweetheart. It's better if you stay here."
Jenny looked at Zack in disbelief, "you're telling me stay here when I'm son is in the woods with his crazy uncle chasing after him!" everyone in the house got silent and looked at Jenny.
Zack put his hands in front of him and spoke softly, "Jen, there's nothing you can do about it. I'll feel better knowing that you're here safe while we're out there looking for him."
Jenny shook her head angrily, "no! my baby boy needs me!"
Zack looked at her tenderly, "baby please let me do this. Let me find out our son. It's getting bad out there." Jenny fell to the floor and sobbed. Zack knelt down and pulled her into a hug. Mumbling into her hair, "we're going to find him and he's going to be safe. I need to know you're safe as well."
Jenny nodded her head. Zack kissed the top of her head. Kelsi and Chad walked down the stairs fully dressed. Kelsi walked up to Jenny, "mom are you okay?"
Jenny looked up teary eyed. Seeing Kelsi looking at her in worry, she gave her a teary smile, "hey baby." Sniffing she pulled away and stood up. wiping her eyes she nodded her head, "I'm fine I'm just worried about Jason."
Kelsi nodded her head, "I am too."
Zack stood up and smiled at them, "we need to go."
Kelsi and Jenny nodded their heads. Kelsi walked up to Jenny and gave her a hug. Jenny closed her eyes and pulled Kelsi tighter to her. The teens got up silently and headed toward the front door. The father's all shared a kiss and a hug with their wives. Jenny pulled away and smiled at her, "bring my baby boy back."
Kelsi gave her a smile, "I plan to." Pulling away from Jenny she hurried over to the gang.
Zack gave Jenny a smile, "we'll be back soon. I love you."
Jenny gave him a watery smile, "love you too." They leaned in and shared a quick kiss. Pulling away he followed the group out of the house and out to the cars. The mom's watched their children and husbands leave, praying that they were going to be safe.
JASON….
Jason dodged into between the trees.
BANG! BANG! BANG!
Joe shot his gun at him. Stopping he yelled at Jason, "just take your fucking punishment!"
Jason flipped him off, "fuck you asshole!" he jumped in between a tree as Joe shot at him again.
BANG!
Joe growled out in anger. He ran after Jason. Jason looked over his shoulder and yelled out, "come on old man, can't keep up?" Jason heard Joe curse at him, he chuckled to himself. Making a sharp turn he jogged down a hill that lead toward the river. His eyes widen when he saw the level of the water. Not looking where he was going he slipped and fell into the freezing water. The tide of the river yanked him hard toward the center of the river. Jason's head came above the water, gasping for air he looked around. The water sent a cold shock through his body. Jason looked around wildly, he struggled against the water. Seeing his uncle, Jason dove underwater.
Joe looked around; he swore he saw his nephew come down this way. Cursing he headed back into the woods. Jason's head sprang to the top of the water. His teeth started chattering. Jason started swimming toward the bank of the river. His body started freezing over. His muscles clenched up, making it hard for him to swim. Jason's injured shoulder started burning and spreading through his body. His cast was now soggy and weighing him down. He struggled against the current. The current picked up, seeing a fallen tree coming up he swam in that direction. As soon as his body got close to it he threw his arms around it. His body slammed hard against the tree, he let out a grunt. Using his remaining strength he pulled himself on three and crawled on it to the bank. Rolling over he fell onto the bank. Jason fought for consciousness, his thoughts went to Kelsi. He prayed she made it safely to Zeke's house. Closing his eyes everything went black.
THE GANG….
LOCATION: PARKING LOT TO THE LAKE
TIME: AROUND 12 TO 12:30 IN THE MORNING.
Zack pulled up to the parking lot behind the cops. His eyes widen when he saw his truck. Parking his vehicle he opened his door and rushed out to his burnt truck. There was an officer writing down information, Zack looked at the officer in shock, "that's my fucking truck!"
The officer looked up at him and squinted, "your car?"
Zack's eye twitched, "yes, my truck. My stepson was driving it."
The officer looked back down at his notes, "sorry about your truck."
Zack's face went red; his body started shaking from anger. Officer Irwin rushed in between the two. Looking at the young officer, "this is Mr. Strife. His son is the one in the forest with his uncle chasing him."
The officer paled. Putting his notebook away he looked at Zack nervously, "sorry sir, I'm officer Ramirez, please forgive me."
Zack glared at Officer Irwin, "please tell me this idiot isn't going to be helping us."
Officer Ramirez flinched when he said that. Giving Zack an apologetic look, Officer Irwin nodded his head, "he's one of our best, please excuse him right now. He's going to be helping out in one of the groups."
Zack walked up to Irwin and poked him on the chest, "he better not be in my group or he's going to regret it!" Turning around Zack stomped over to where the kids were watching. The gang all gathered around Officer Anderson.
Officer Anderson cupped his hands over his mouth and yelled out, "WE'RE GOING TO BE MOVING IN THREE DIFFERENT AREAS. YOU WILL HAVE 2 OFFICERS WITH EACH GROUP. AT ANY POINT YOU SEE THE ARMED SUSPECT FIND COVER AND DO NOT MOVE FROM THAT COVER!" he watched them each nod their heads in understanding. Satisfied he started calling out names, "WITH OFFICER IRWIN AND SANDERS WILL BE JACK, TROY AND MATT. WITH MYSELF AND GUNNER WILL BE ZACK, JONATHAN, CHAD AND JAMIE, WITH RAMIREZ AND THUEMMLER WILL BE TIM, KELSI AND ZEKE." Everyone got into their groups.
Irwin stepped forward and clapped his hands together to get their attention. Yelling out to them, "WE HAVE RECEIVED A FLOOD WARNING. THE RIVER IS STARTING TO RISE, AT ANY POINT YOU'RE NEAR THE RIVER BE CAREFUL. DON'T STRAY FROM YOUR GROUP AND LIKE WHAT OFFICER ANDERSON IF YOU SEE THE ARMED SUSPECT DON'T TRY TO BE A HERO. FIND COVER. EVERYONE GOT IT?"
The group nodded their heads. Officer Anderson cupped his hands over his mouth, "WHAT GROUP IS GOING WHERE?"
Chad stepped forward, "TROY'S GROUP WILL GO TO THE CLIFF, MY GROUP WILL WALK THE RIVER AND ZEKE'S GROUP WILL HEAD TOWARD OUR FORT. THOSE ARE THE THREE PLACES JASON WOULD HEAD TOWARD!"
Officer Irwin nodded his head, looking at the other Officers, "IF YOU SEE ANYTHING CALL ON THE WALKIES! BE CAREFUL OUT THERE. WE KNOW THAT THE SUSPECT IS ARMED, WE DON'T KNOW IF HE WAS ANY OTHER WEAPONS!"
The officers nodded their heads. Splitting into their groups they all walked into the woods as group. Hitting their first trail they split into 3 groups going in 3 different directions.
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