Hey guys, I just wanted to let you know about recent developments of the earlier story.

If you're like me, you probably skip all chapters you already read and go straight to the new chapters. I'm telling you now that I have gone back over the past 4 days and redone ALL of the first chapters. Like, 1-12.

I feel so much better! If you want to, I suggest you go back and read this story from the beginning. I added things and took things out. I made everything flow smoother, or at least tried to.

There's more movement now, and lots more descriptions of the surroundings.

Go check it out :D

And also, I plan to continue this story as our heroes enter adulthood and live on their own. I might skip a couple years but we won't miss much :D.

In short, this story isn't ending anytime soon.

Thank you all for your reviews, they make me so happy!

Unless you want me to spiral into depression, review some more! :D

Woo!