The Land Before Time Advance Season 1 RETYPED (K+ Fanfiction Rating)
Disclaimers
See Original Version of 'Welcome to the Great Valley'
Chapter 11: Ruby's Reunion: To Hanging Rock
The Official Opening
-Ruby's Dreamscape, 1:00AM-
At Ruby's Dreamscape, while she was sleeping, her dreamscape is null purple in the background as Ruby sees two figures of her species but bigger
"Mom, Dad?" Ruby asked as she goes to the figure "Is that you?"
"Yes, Ruby" Ruby's Mother said to her daughter "It's us" and it reveals Ruby's Mother, a pink oviraptor like her, and Ruby's Father, a purple oviraptor
"What are you doing here?" Ruby asked her parents
"We need you to visit Hanging Rock before 3:00PM Afternoon" Ruby's Father gives her a mission personalized for herself "We foresaw that Red Claw is going to Hanging Rock as Dr. Doofenshmirtz waged him to kill us"
"We need you, Ruby" Ruby's Mother begged "I need you"
-Ruby's Cave, Same Time-
At Ruby's Cave, where she was sleeping, she was mumbling her voice to her parents in her dream. After their request
"Yes, Mom, Dad" Ruby accpeted "I'll go" and she go back to sleep ready for another adventure ahead of her
(FanBoy752: What the derp, again, my USB is broken forever. So I put in 'RETYPED' in the title to recognize that I rewrite the story than the original. In this Chapter, Ruby and Terra journey to Hanging Rock to visit her parents before Red Claw waged to attack them
Happy Valentine's Day on Feb 14. Here's Act 1)
Act 1
-Zero-to-Hero Headquarters, 9:00AM-
At Zero-to-Hero Headquarters, Team Dinopals and Team Phineas gather for a short meeting
"Okay, before we go back to adventuring" Littlefoot announced to the teams "We have an announcement from Ruby, What are you gonna say?"
"I'm going to Hanging Rock" Ruby announced "My family told me to go" shocking the teams in expression
"What?" Everyone asked to Ruby
"My family told me that" Ruby explained the reason "Red Claw is going to kill my family and they need me to go to Hanging Rock" and everyone gone into curiosity
"I feel the same thing too" Littlefoot reacted to Ruby in unison
"So do I..." Chomper said
"Me too" Isabella raised her hand and side-noted "Only in my Timeline Spoiler"
"We hope" Phineas said worriedly "You may have good luck, Ruby. After all, the Mysterious Beyond is dangerous the last time we been there unauthorized"
"Oh come on, Phineas" Terra said in sarcasm and said to Ruby "I'll go"
"You do, Terra?" Ruby asked in confusion
"Relax, remember of what I said to become a hero when I was 12" Terra said to her in unison, she thought for a second and realized
"Well, it is what you said" Ruby said calmly "You may go with me"
-Eastern Valley Wall, 10:00AM-
At the Eastern Valley Wall, Ruby and Terra have packed a lot of things in their bags
"I guess we'll need substitution from other time" Terra informed to two teams "Just for when if we are in trouble"
"Okay" Littlefoot accepted
"We'll form and you guys may leave outside the Great Valley" Phineas now gives permission to them
"This means we don't have time" Ruby said and she checks the countdown timer in her ValleyBook "4 hours left before Red Claw goes to Hanging Rock"
"Come on Ruby" Terra said confidently "Let's go"
"Goodbye, Ruby and Terra" Littlefoot and Phineas wave goodbye to Ruby and Terra as they prepare their bags
"Bye" Ruby and Terra waved goodbye to the teams
"BYE!" Everyone waved goodbye to Ruby and Terra as they left for a few minutes
After a few minutes, Chomper sniffed something blood-lust and raw from the hidden canyon and that makes Phineas worried of something
"Guys, I'm worried about them" Phineas said worriedly as Chomper sniffs Red Claw's scent
"Yeah, I smell that Red Claw is as furious as the last time we meet" Chomper informed Red Claw's next move and that make Littlefoot to bust-a-move
"Team Phineas" Littlefoot called to the team "It's a 3-man mission and we are substituting Ruby and Terra to Hanging Rock" and someone barged in the scene unexpectedly
"I'll go" a familiar voice said and they turned behind, it was Candace's Girlfriend, Jeremy
"Jeremy?" Phineas asked "What are you doing here?"
"Well" Jeremy said "I kinda have troubles at Candace and I have to help you guys with my guitar" and that gives Team Dinopals a surprise
"Whoa" Cera asked in excitement "you got something?"
"Yes" Phineas agreed and revealed "Jeremy strums a lean-meaning piece of brass" and he opens his guitar case, it was Soul-Rocker
Soul-Rocker
Weapon Type: Guitar (Interchangeable Weapon)
User: Jeremy Johnson
Element: Music (Special Element)
Appearance: Black Guitar with Silver-Gold Brass Strings
"Yep" Jeremy agreed and he pops up his guitar "Soul-Rocker"
"You're in" Phineas accepted his effort and he joins Jeremy to his team
"Team Dinopals ROLL" Littlefoot calls his catchphrase "Cera, Petrie, you're with me"
"Team Phineas ROLL" Phineas calls his team cheer and turned to Ferb "Ferb, let's go with Jeremy"
And they follow Ruby and Terra's Path to Hanging Rock 200 meters away from Ruby and Terra
"Good luck, Littlefoot/Phineas" Everyone cheered their respective team name
After they are gone, Isabella has an idea to Chomper
"C'mon Chomper" Isabella said to him "Let's go private" and they unknowingly enter the valley for a reason
-Road to the Mysterious Forest, 12:00PM-
At the Road to the Mysterious Forest, the forest burnt with charred trees and bones of dinosaurs lying around here like it is a graveyard. Ruby and Terra are going here with no fear
"Terra" Ruby said to him "I've been thinking" Terra tuned to her
"What is it?" Terra asked to her
"About your sister" Ruby continued "Weren't you two
"That was a long time ago" Terra explained "It's nothing to know" and he checks her bag because it is lunch time
Ruby actually has some survival kits while Terra actually has treasures of his relic. So they actually have Spaghetti for lunch
While Ruby and Terra stopped for a lunch, Team Phineas and Dinopals are walking in a different direction do that Phineas' GPS finds Hanging Rock easier than them
"Are you sure you're GPS leads us to Red Claw, Phineas?" Jeremy asked to Phineas "It seems we're in the canyon with green skies"
"Oh relax" Phineas answered while looking at his GPS "I'm sure we can make it" while they are moving on, they saw a small camp
It is not Ruby and Terra but an enemy from outsiders of The Great Valley. They saw the thieves' camp as they are about to find out
Act 2
-Same Location, 12:05PM-
At the place with tents, Littlefoot, Phineas, Ferb, Cera, Petrie, and Jeremy are observing it before they can pass through
"There's gotta be a way to go to Hanging Rock without the thieves ripping our woot-woots" Cera informed them as they have no plan to sneak into the enemies and Petrie flies high
"I can fly high" Petrie said to them "They won't notice me that I'm a flyer" and he flies above the camp if they are enemies
When the camp is with enemies, Petrie gives his Glowing Wind to signal the heroes that there are enemies
"Yep there are enemies here" Phineas said to everyone as he prepares his first sword
"Let's get ready to battle" Littlefoot commanded to everyone while saying to Jeremy "Stay out of our battle, we don't want you to get hurt"
"No, it's cool, Littefoot" Jeremy reacted normally as his guitar changed into a magician staff "Because my guitar can turn into any weapon, this makes the battle a sweet ride"
"Alright" Cera said in unison "Let's get to fighting" and they charged to the enemies in the camp
At the camp, thieves are slow cooking a roast chicken badly
"Slow cook it" a thief said to the other
"I am cooking it slowly" he confirmed and announced to the other thieves "Let's find more enemies to-"
"ATTACK" Team Dinopals and Team Phineas shouted as they attack the 5-man thieves
They attack the thieves but they called to the men 'Enemies', the heroes confused of what they're doing but they are surrounded with the 20-man band thieves for the call
"Jeremy" Phineas called him "Dust of disappearing, its brown bag with red strings"
"No need, Phineas" Jeremy answered and he cast his power "Smokescreen!" he cast the smokescreen to give enemies a blind vision
While the thieves are unable to see clearly they Team Phineas invents a getaway vehicle to escape from the thieves. They drive away from the thieves while the smokescreen is diminishing. After the smoke disappears, the thieves no longer see Team Dinopals and Team Phineas as they driving away without ever noticing the thieves
"Great escape, guys" Petrie cheered as their vehicle is a sedan
"Well, at least I know what were going to go today" Phineas said with his catchphrase "To Hanging Rock" and they drive to Hanging Rock, along the way, Ferb realized something
"Hey, where's Perry?" Ferb asked as they know that Perry isn't on their side
-Mysterious Forest, 12:25PM-
Ruby and Terra finally reached Mysterious Forest. But along the way, a bag opens as Perry pops out and exits the bag. He then looks at his wristwatch communicator to give Major Monogram a mission
"Good afternoon, Agent P" Major Monogram greeted to him loudly, he hushes him knowing that he is with company "Oh sorry, you might wanna turn down the volume to prevent hearing from the public" and Perry turns down the volume to half-way by sliding his rim of the watch, after the volume is half-way, he can speak loudly while half-loud through Perry's communicator
"Anyway, Dr. Doofenshmirtz pays a visit to Red Claw's cave" Major Monogram gives the information "They are co-op each other to invade Hanging Rock while capturing Ruby's Family. We need you to glide to their cave to get more information" and then Perry prepares his glider to fly
"Good luck, Agent P" Monogram gives good luck to Perry as he is gliding away "Monogram Out"
After Perry left from the oviraptors, they are walking through the forest until they heard a rustle on the bush
"What's that?" Ruby asked to him worriedly
"It's just the bush rustling" Terra said to her as they prepare for battle "Let's prepare" the bush than rustles the word
"Rustle, rustle, rustle" a voice evilly said and they pop out, it was Screech and Thud "We are the mean-eating Velociraptors, Screech and Thud"
"I knew it was you" Terra introduced to Screech and Thud "I am Terra Samson, at your good service"
"We are here to pick you up" Screech said to them
"Our master says so" Thud continued and they declined
"You, idiots" Ruby said in sarcasm "Do you think we're too foolish enough to feel into your trap?" and then the velociraptor growl evilly, ready to attack her but Terra grabbed her hand to escape
"Let's RUN" Terra shouted to her as they run away from the velociraptors
"Hey" Screech angrily said to Thud "Don't let them get away" and they chase Ruby and Terra through the wind-whirling path of the forest
At Team Dinopals and Phineas, they finally made their destination as they bump into the villains
"We're here" Petrie cheered but suddenly Ruby hops above the car while Terra slides below the car
"Screech and Thud" Terra warned them and they turned confused
"What?" Phineas asked in confusion as the velociraptors are behind them
"Team Dinopals" Thud evilly shouted and they looked behind
They scream in distress as they are about to get pounced by them. And alas, they got pounced by velociraptors
-Red Claw's Cave, 1:00PM-
Doofenshmirtz is with Red Claw
At Red Claw's Cave, Perry is about to land a surprise attack but Red Claw recently roars unexpected. Making him about to plummeting to the ground, Dr. Doofenshmirtz immediately traps him with his Platypus Net
"Ah gotcha, Perry the Platypus" Dr. Doofenshmirtz taunted to him as he put the platypus he caught in his Escape-proof Box "Good thing Red Claw's menacing roar startled you upon flight"
"It's worst" Red Claw evilly said to Perry "But it's worth it!" and the start exiting the cave and to Hanging Rock
-Road to Oblivion Canyon, 1:05PM-
(FanBoy752: Oblivion Canyon is actually a dark cave in the Land Before Time Original Movie in 1988. I bet this is where Cera first found the supposed-dead Sharptooth)
At the Road to Oblivion Canyon, they head to the clean rock path to go to Secluded Canyon which is the walls of Hanging Rock. While along the way, Dr. Doofenshmirtz turned to his nemesis in evilness
"We are going to Hanging Rock to see if we can conquer the royal family's base" Dr. Doof explained the trip and reveals three Protable Inators on his bag "If possible what's my Inator is? well, it is my three Inators that I fail to defeat Team Dinopals. For you see, I met those guys but they are unbeatable to attack them- even they are puny and small, they are still unbeatable" and Red Claw sniffs something usual from the clear rock path to Secluded Canyon
"Let's go" Red Claw evilly said to Doof "My senses are smelling victory upon visiting Secluded Canyon. Hanging Rock is the remote base of the Royal Family, we're now going East"
"Onward to Hanging Rock" Dr. Doofenshmirtz said and he asked to the readers "Guess who will suffer the pain?" and they reached the Mysterious Forest
-The Mystrious Forest, 1:05PM-
While Team Dinopals (Cera, Littlefoot, and Petrie) and Team Phineas (Phineas, Ferb, and Jeremy) are limp from the velociraptors pouncing them before ending Act 1, someone used
"Battle Bomb" A female voice shouted as they explode Screech and Thud at least 50 meters away from them and they regain control to drive out of the velociraptors' sight while they are limp
"Thanks for using the bomb, Cer-" Littlefoot thanked when he turned to someone familiar and in surprise "Candace?" everyone gasped as Phineas and Ferb's sister, Candace, is on-board
"What are you doing here?" Jeremy asked her in confusion
"Well, I kinda have troubles finding you, Jeremy" Candace explained "That's why I search you outside the valley because I kinda miss you"
"Well, we are not visiting outside the valley longer than you think about it" Jeremy said to her in clever "The Mysterious Beyond is dangerous as explained to Bron from the golden book"
The Treasures of the Great Valley: Treasure Edition
Page 45 - The Mysterious Forest (Section: Quote)
"I somehow foresaw the path, one leads sorrow and pain while the other leads to freedom. I must choose" -Bron
"But thanks anyway, you're hired" Phineas thanked his sister as he hired her to their team
While they are diving, Petrie realized something
"Hey, Where's Ruby and Terra?" Petrie asked to them because they lost them "I mean they head left before Screech and Thud attacked us"
-Secluded Canyon, 1:10PM-
Ruby and Terra fled as fast as they could from Screech and Thud until they head to Secluded Canyon. In Secluded Canyon, Ruby and Terra grew tired because of 10 minutes of running away from Screech and Thud
"Oh, running away from Screech and Thud makes me tired" Ruby said while walking very tired "I feel so weak, So weak I feel" and she almost collapsed as Terra is on her side while wrapping his arm to her neck to prevent her from falling
"Don't give up yet, Ruby" Terra encouraged her "At least we have snacks to reset our energy" and they rest on a nearby rock to rest and talking about topics
"Thanks for the offer, Terra" Ruby thanked him as he opens her bag for something edible and special "Can you check my bag if I have sweet bubbles?" and he finally found Ruby's Grapes
"Here it is" Terra called as he shows the Sweet Bubbles to her, making her mildly smiled from his founding "I guess you are happy because of doing things for you"
"Oh no, Terra" Ruby said to him and confessed "It's just, I feel in love with you ever since we save your valley from the rogue knight" they smile at each other as he splits the grapes to her. he counts the number of bubbles which is 14 and he gives her a half of it, making it 7 each
"You know..." Terra discussed her about living with commoners "The royal family can have permission to live with a commoner, right?"
"Yeah, such like that" Ruby said and asked "Do you think we should do this anytime? Anytime we should do this?"
"Well, if your parents approve so" Terra gives the condition to her and she giggled to his impression
At the same place, Team Phineas and Team Dinopals are literally out of the forest and to Hanging Rock. But the song Candace is tuning in, makes Littlefoot annoyed of something
(FanBoy752: Real-World Celebrity but indirect appearance, Plus breaking the fourth wall)
"Is that Justin Bieber I hear, Candace?" Littlefoot asked to her in annoyance because this Fanfiction doesn't have real-world celebrities onscreen
"Oh sorry" Candace apologized as she turned off her MP3 Player "I just got that literally tuned the real-world experience"
"Oh please" Littlefoor said with this Fanfiction rule "No real-world celebrities' things or songs mentioned or tuning, Candace. We're on camera"
"Pfft" Candce scoffed "Now we're talking" and they head to Hanging Rock which is actually 500 meters away from them, for Ruby and Terra, 200 meters away from the place
(FanBoy752: They finally reached Hanging Rock but will they protect this place alive? It's all a what-if note but Goodbye, see you soon with 3100 words complete)