Chapter 21

No Not Loren!

Recap: Eddie was in the bathroom and he heard Loren scream.


Eddie ran out of the bathroom to find Loren lying on the floor. Eddie ran to her and bent down to her level.

Eddie: LO! Are You Ok?

Loren: Eddie… p-please call a-an ambulance i-I can't move…

Eddie: *Crying* You Got it Lo You're Going To Be Fine

Eddie called an ambulance, About 15 minutes later they arrived.

Paramedic: Ok Mr. Duran, you need to back away.

Eddie backed away and watched as Loren was having chest compressions.

Paramedic 1: Clear!

Paramedic 2: She's Not Responding!

Paramedic 1: We need to do CPR!

Paramedic 2: Hurry she's flat lining!

Eddie starts curling up in the corner crying into his knees .

Paramedic 1: Come on damnit! Breathe!

Paramedic 2: What's Happening!

Paramedic 1: She's going into some type of Shock!

Paramedic 2: … Mr. Duran?

Eddie: * Crying* Y-Yes?

Paramedic 2: We've lost her…. I'm sorry

Eddie* Getting angry* No! She's Not DEAD!

Eddie got up and pushed through the Paramedics

Paramedic 1: Sir You need to Get Away From Her!

Eddie kneels down next to Loren, and tries to wake her up.

Eddie: LOREN! LOREN! LO YOU NEED TO WAKE UP!

Paramedic 2: Mr. Duran. She's gone…

Eddie: NO S-SHE CAN'T BE! She's… my … life…

Paramedic 1: Mr. Duran we need you to move so we can take her to the hospital.

Eddie: H-How'd she… D-Die?

Paramedic 2: We need to take her to the hospital to fine this cause of death.

Eddie: ….

Paramedic 1: Mr. Duran are you ok?

Eddie: * Whisperers * Take her…

Paramedic 2: thank you Mr. Duran

The Paramedics put Loren in a body bag then carried her away… Eddie got up from the ground and wrote a song then went over to Max and Nora's. Eddie ran right inside crying his eyes out.

Max: Eddie? Son what's wrong?

Eddie: *crying hysterically * DaD! Loren's DEAD!

Nora: What!

Eddie: something happened when we went to sea world then she got really sick and fell out of bed, she couldn't walk, nothing!

Everyone starts Crying.

Eddie: Nora where's Annabell?

Nora: in her room.

Eddie: Thanks

Eddie walked into annabells room and she was sitting on bed.

Eddie: Annabell are you ok?

Annabell: ya it's just now I've lost 3 people in the last week that I love

Eddie: aww annabell its' ok I got you don't worry

Annabell: Eddie?

Eddie: Yes?

Annabell: can you take me to the park and sing to me?

Eddie: yes of course. Come on lets go.

Eddie picked her up and they left and arrived at Eddie and Lorens spot

Annabell: Eddie can you play one of your new songs about Loren?

Eddie: ya

Eddie grabbed his guitar and started to play the song her wrote for Loren early today

The broken clock is a comfort, it helps me sleep tonight

Maybe it can stop tomorrow from stealing all my time

I am here still waiting though i still have my doubts

I am damaged at best, like you've already figured out

I'm falling apart, I'm barely breathing

With a broken heart that's still beating

In the pain, there is healing

In your name I find meaning

So I'm holdin' on, I'm holdin' on, I'm holdin' on

I'm barely holdin' on to you

The broken locks were a warning you got inside my head

I tried my best to be guarded, I'm an open book instead

I still see your reflection inside of my eyes

That are looking for a purpose, they're still looking for life

I'm falling apart, I'm barely breathing

with a broken heart that's still beating

In the pain (in the pain), is there healing

In your name (in your name) I find meaning

So I'm holdin' on (I'm still holdin'), I'm holdin' on (I'm still holdin'), I'm holdin' on (I'm still holdin')

I'm barely holdin' on to you

I'm hangin' on another day

Just to see what you throw my way

And I'm hanging on to the words you say

You said that I will be OK

The broken lights on the freeway left me here alone

I may have lost my way now, haven't forgotten my way home

I'm falling apart, I'm barely breathing

with a broken heart that's still beating

In the pain(In the pain) there is healing

In your name I find meaning

So I'm holdin' on (I'm still holdin'), I'm holdin' on (I'm still holdin'), I'm holdin' on (I'm still holdin'),

I'm barely holdin' on to you

I'm holdin' on (I'm still holdin'), I'm holdin' on (I'm still holdin'), I'm holdin' on (I'm still holdin'),

I'm barely holdin' on to you

( Broken- Life house )

When Eddie finished singing the song Annabell jumped on him and they were hugging until Eddie got a call from the hospital

Phone Call

Eddie: hello?

Nurse: Mr. Duran?

Eddie: Yeah that's me.

Nurse: Well Mr. Duran We have some news on you fiancée

Eddie: Ok so what was the cause of death.

Nurse: Mr. Duran, Ms. Tate is Alive…


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