This was an idea of Evan's and I am putting it to good use
I'm so sorry this took so long! This much time for something that isn't even a chapter. At least you got to finish the story. The first chapter of the sequel is finished, so look forward to that.
This was an idea of Evan's and I am putting it to good use! This isn't a chapter to the story as I said before. I have to warn you that bloopers are a hard thing for me to do, but I did my best so I hope you enjoy them. I'll probably get better at it. Practice makes perfect and I haven't had much practice with humor, so bear with me.
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Bloopers:
A/N About the bloopers: before almost every blooper I mention what chapter it was from in case you want to know. My first attempt at bloopers so I'm not sure if they're really any good. Feel free to skip them altogether if you want to.
Prologue:
"Give him back please!" Delia yells.
Aviur runs in and the camera turns to the blond.
"Oof!"
Camera turns back to Aviur to see him kneeling next to one of the grunts who is on his back, on the floor, next to a pad. Aviur looks up at the camera. "Sorry!"
Camera turns to grunt still holding crying baby at arms length.
"Cut!! Can someone get the baby?"
Chapter 1:
Ash jumps backwards on the bed and lands on the edge. The sheets come undone and follow Ash to the floor.
"Ow…. You said that wouldn't happen."
"It's your own fault you're so clumsy."
"Can it, Misty."
"Cut!!"
Chapter 2:
Ash runs down a path. After looking back he sticks his fist in the air and throws his Pokeball. "Yes! Pikachu! Come on out!"
The pokeball opens empty and Ash groans. "Pikachu! Where are you?"
"Pi! Pika pi!"
"It's just for one scene! C'mon Pikachu! Please?"
"Cut!"
Chapter 3:
Ash turns and walks backwards. "Hey Pikachu, do you…" He bumps into Misty but instead of bouncing off of her he trips, sending him and Misty to the ground.
"Ash Ketchum!"
"Sorry."
"Cut!!"
Chapter 3:
"Well I'm just surprised you haven't bought the whole Mall already. Hours of shopping, and you only got a pair of shoes."
"Hey! I needed shoes!"
"Still, you're slow."
"Am not!"
"Are too."
"Am Not!"
"Are too."
"AM NOT!"
"…Are too."
"Ugh! You egoistic pompous-"
Misty clears her throat.
"…sexist…"
Drew looks uncomfortably towards the camera.
"May."
"…aggravating…"
"May!"
"…controlling…"
"May!!"
"Cut!"
Chapter 9:
Keagan reaches out to Growlithe and bites his lip as Growlithe shuts his jaw over his hand.
Alexi's eyes widen. "Keagan!"
"Cut!!"
Chapter 9:
Ash unties the ball and starts lowering it. The rope slips and the ball crashes to the ground and cracks. Ash cringes in the background.
"Cut!!"
Chapter 14:
"Um… yeah." Drew mutters.
"Drew… are you ok?"
"Yeah… I think I'm just tired."
"Oh… ok…. C-Can I sleep here? It's better than sleeping on the cold floor."
He shrugs lightly. "I guess so."
"Thanks."
"N-No problem."
"M-May?"
"Hmm?" May looks up acting her part as Drew kisses her. Drew moves into a kneeling position and pulls May more to him while she puts her arms around his neck. This goes on for a while until…
"Cut! You're supposed to pull away at some point! This is not the time to confess!"
From Chapter 14:
Alexi - "Keagan, help me dig up this hole?"
Keagan gets down beside her and they both start digging.
Alexi screams and falls through the hole as it collapses beneath her.
"Whoa! Alexi!"
"Cut!"
Chapter 17:
Ash gulps "Wh-What were you saying?"
She looks up at him. "What?"
Ash opens his mouth, shuts it, and fidgets before turning around.
Misty groans.
"Cut!!"
Ash looks toward the camera and mouths, "Sorry."
Chapter 17:
"They want me as one! I can come!" (Misty)
"No you can't!" (Ash)
"Yes I can!" (Misty)
"No you can't!" (Ash)
"Yes I can! I'm in charge of myself! I have a choice and you're not stopping me!" (Misty)
"…Well… no you can't!" (Ash)
"Cut!!"
Chapter 18:
"I'm surprised we've gone this long without you hitting me." Alexi mutters.
Jason stops and pulls her to the wall. "Consider yourself lucky."
Alexi fights a smile as he goes on.
"With everything you've done, I-I have more than enough… Ugh! Stop that!"
Alexi starts laughing. "I'm sorry…."
"Cut!!"
Chapter 20:
"I don't think I could handle staying in bed any longer."
Keagan comes to help Alexi but she waves him off. "I wanna do it myself now."
"K."
She teeters and falls. Keagan reaches out but misses.
"Ow…."
"Heh. Sorry."
"Cut!!"
Chapter 20:
(Ash is sitting on the railing of the bridge instead of leaning on it.)
"Well, Ash I've gotta tell you..." Brock walks to Ash and gives him a pat on the back. Ash teeters and falls into the water.
"Cut!"
Chapter 20:
"It means that she wants you to call her and…"
"And…"
"Gary! Line!"
"It makes me look like an idiot…."
"Cut!!"
Keagan - "Misty, will you marry me?"
Ash - "What the heck!"
Keagan laughs – "Sorry. Couldn't resist."
"Cut!!"
Deleted Scenes: There was an alternate prologue, but I completely changed it because when I read it to one of my brothers they laughed. I didn't like it so much myself.
The prologue started with a storm outside of a house. You never know that Delia is the mother because the wind howls, or something will happen when the husband says her name.
Basically in the prologue, Aviur hides his wife and son (Ash obviously), under the house in one of those room-covered-by-a-trap-door-and-rug sort of things. Delia tells Ash that they are going to play hush-puppies (a game where you see who can stay quiet the longest). A man comes in and talks to Aviur but I shall not go through the whole conversation. Ash finally starts getting scared and curious and tells his mother that they sound angry. The man hears it, opens the hatch and pulls them up. Throughout the end there is a very short struggle in which Team Rocket wins and leaves with both males.
It is not terribly different from the version I chose to use, that is in the way it ends. But the other I liked a lot more. I though it brought out the attitude of Team Rocket and introduced the parents much better.
Sneak Peak To The Sequel: The Boy Outside The Window:
Makaila knows nothing about her father's past, and Ash is determined to keep it that way. But what happens when Makaila starts saying strange things?
Keagan pointed out another of her drawings. "And what's this one?"
"A dog!" she replied happily.
"And this one. Who's this?" Keagan pointed out a person inside a house, apparently on a bed.
"That's me!"
"And…" Keagan paused and tilted his head to the side and looked at the roof of the house next hers, where something was atop it. "…who's this?"
"Oh!" Makaila started happily. "That's the boy outside the window!"
Keagan blinked and turned to her. "Who's the boy outside the window?"
Makaila shrugged and picked up another crayon, starting to color the boy in, and then said, "He protects me."
Makaila says more and more things about "the boy outside the window". Is he real, or is he someone she created from her imagination. More importantly, does he have anything to do with Ash's past? And if he is real, who is he?
"What's your name?" Makaila asked.
The boy shrugged and pulled the basket closer to him, starting to go through it.
"You don't talk very much."
Again he shrugged.
"Can't you at least tell me your name?"
The boy looked cautiously at her, then opened his mouth.
"Makaila! What are you doing up there?! Get off the roof now!"
"But mommy! I was just…" Makaila turned back around but saw no one. She blinked then looked at the ground. "He was just…"
"Makaila!"
"I'm coming mommy. I just wanted to talk to the boy."
Misty let out an uneasy breath as her daughter crawled back to her. "What boy…?"
Unimportant Yet Special Stuff That You May Or May Not Care About:
I am happy to say that obviously the sequel has already started being written and I have the whole plot planned out. The story will be up soon.
I have a mini trailer for the sequel made and that will be on youtube soon as well. My account is prettygirlstory. If you type it into the search section my vids should pop up. I also have a couple aaml vids in process (Sorry. No daml. Hopefully soon.).
I may do a oneshot collection based on this story that will involve Ash's father or Skye's father etc., so you all can get a little more info on that. I probably will but I don't know what it will be called. Help on that is welcome as well. Tell me what you think of this idea if you can.
A/N: So I hope you guys all enjoyed this extra page. I know that the bloopers weren't that good and I don't mind anyone saying so, but please don't flame me. This was my first attempt ever. I don't mind constructive critism though.
And that's it! Once again, sorry if it took so long. Hope it was worth the wait. I can't believe how long it took me to finish this story. It took forever! Feels great to have it marked complete now.