THE AUTHOR'S NOTES~~~~~!!!!!
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Oh GOD. I actually finished this story!
Firstly, to the people who corrected me for everything..
Lady of the Lilacs- The horrible Mindelan thingie. (bangs head on table) I can't go back to correct it now, but. the spelling is probably glued in my mind.
Keita- A brutally honest reviewer! Thank you, thank you (has my writing style changed?) its because of great reviewers like you, that makes a story better.
Read 24/7 and more- Kennan, Masbolle. I didn't use it, but thanks anyway! (^_~)
6-a opal- I hate my spell checker, but I'll take your advice for the future.. And most of the glaive scenes in the later chapter had been taken directly from the book. Lady of the Lilacs, Keita, Read 24/7 and more, 6-a opal
MagixPawn- Your reviews were some that got me up and going. I should have read what you reviewed before I continued writing.. But I was too busy.. Thanks! I really valued your info and reviews!
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To the Neal/ Dom lovers: Lady Wild Rose, Drunken Little Monkey, white lily, zella, lara (I took your advice)
Just a tiny little segment about Neal and Dom charming all the ladies in King Roald's court
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Don't You Just Love Attention?
~! ~!
After straightening their tunics and combing through their hair, Neal and Dom marched over to the dining hall, ready for anything.
"Now, remember," Daine had warned them, "you are to charm and flirt- nothing more than that."
"Send them panting, in other words," Dom corrected. "I think I'll like this job!"
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Dom struck for the pretty ones, as did Neal.
"Lady Elaine! Don't you look charming today?" Dom would ask, "the colour of your dress matches you exactly. Tell me- do you use magic? Surely, there is no other way."
Lady Elaine would laugh, blush, and give Dom a little shove. "As charming as ALWAYS, Sir Domitan." She purred.
Neal, however, had small success at first. He couldn't keep from being sarcastic. True, he tried Dom's approach, but every time, the lady would give him an annoyed look, and inch away slowly.
Later, he found his own style of it. Flattering, flirting- put together with a flourishing bow.
"Demoiselle- do you know how beautiful you look tonight?" He would ask, with a soulful look.
Instant captivation.
"Just don't write any poetry, Neal," Kel advised.
Neal took poetry of books, reciting them to perfection.
"This is the life," Dom sighed to Kel. "Pretty girls fawning all over us- can it get better than this?"
Kel rolled her eyes. "No, Dom. It can't."
One night, after Neal was bombarded with pretty, scented, scalloped pink papers, he was practically over the moon.
"I'm in demand! I love it!" He crowed.
Kel just sighed. "Please, Neal. Don't read that stuff near me."
"You're just jealous."
"You wish."
Pretty soon, Neal and Dom got tired of their 'fan mail'. But of course- boys are boys. They never would get tired of the 'pretty girls'!
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The thought of K/J did freak me out more than I thought it would. In the beginning, I thought it would be a sort of DIFFERENT pairing. I mean, Daine and Jon had been put together before, so why not Kel and Jon, as Roald and Kel were definitely not an ideal couple (I don't know, but I LIKE Shinko!)
I guess it turned out OK in the end. in the first couple of chapters, I always got reviews speculating on the weird pairing! Anyhow.
I don't know. I'm a Kel/Dom fan. (I don't read fanfics on them, though) ~*~*~*~*
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For the people who love Jon, hates George, or loves George and hates Jon, this was a part I wanted to put in, but kept on taking out 'cause it was a bit off.
Thanks to: Forget-me-not, Vilranda, Lady of the Lilacs, Ti-Ti.
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Fight (I even named these segments. Sigh)
~! ~!
It had been a long time since Jon had visited Dancing Dove.
It was a spur of the moment thing.
Outside the Dancing Dove, Jon tied Darkness to the pole and entered the building.
Inside, the thieves were celebrating about a thing or the other. At the sight of him, Lightfingers stood up, swaying a bit. "Johnny! What bring you 'ere?"
"Business, no ale tonight, 'Fingers," Jon said quickly.
"You an' young Alan. Never drinkin' a drop. Sombre as a block of wood," 'Fingers shook his head before staggering away.
Approaching George's 'throne', Jon tapped the thief on the shoulder.
George turned around. "Jon! What brings you here?"
Jon shrugged.
"We need to talk, you and I," George said, with the strangest expression in his eyes.
Leading Jon to his chambers, George politely opened the door and let Jon enter first.
Inside, however, George was anything but polite.
"Do you realise what you've been doing?" He bellowed.
Jon looked surprised. "What do you mean?"
"Haven't you been lookin' into Alanna lately, or too busy carin' for that Shang who doesn't have a thing for you?" George said coldly.
Scowling, the Prince turned on George. "Don't be ridiculous," he began.
"No, Jon. It is YOU whose bein' foolish here," George said, "Just because that Shang has a prettier face doesn't mean that Alanna's worthless!"
"I said nothing of that sort!" Jon said.
"Don't you even know 'bout Alanna anymore? Or is it just Keladry? Do you know that the lass comes runnin' to me practically every two days, tryin' to fight back tears about your ignoring of her?"
"Alanna should just talk to me then!" Jon fired back. "Since when did we invite YOU to comment?"
"Tis is where you go WRONG, Highness," George said, his voice icy, "Alanna doesn't talk to you because you don't give her th' chance to now."
"What goes on between Alanna and I is ABSOLUTELY none of your business!" Jon shouted.
"It is if she gets hurt," George retorted.
Suddenly understanding what George was really saying, Jon's temper fired up. "Tell Alanna to go to you then! Tell her that I'm with Kel! She can go snivelling back to you!"
Flinging open the door, Jon bumped straight into a person with violet eyes that brimmed with tears.
"Alanna-" Jon began.
"Lass, listen-"
Alanna turned striding off to the entrance.
"Now look what you've done," George muttered.
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Oh well. Enough of these segment things.
Just for the people that I need to thank..
+Angel of the Storms+
-demented-dreamer-
^White Wolf^
#Rhapsody07#
Lady Atalanta
jazy716
$Nikita, Lady of the Rogue$ %Lady Marie% )BabyGirlKatie14( & hannirose & "horselover" }Skysong{ |White Phoenix Erialis| ~Hazel Eyed Witch 87~ * Gemini*Star *
(the following are signed reviews, if any are omitted, it was unintentional)
Thanks 2 all! My fic would be nowhere if it wasn't for you guys!!! :)
Also, thanks also to: *sunstorm/ *Lady Mage Dragoness/ Stuffed Dodo/ *Nat/ Wat../ *hihi/ *1234/ Valencia22/ lisini/ ShangRose/ von/ Wildmage/ kittydat_weirdo/ Twinkie_bar_ummmmm/ little_fire_cracker_goes_BOOM/ Rae, Sho, cuddly fluff lover/ Tammy_Fan/ mel/ Tammy4fan/
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This is the serious stuff. The real authors notes bit.
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Well, I've finally finished writing the fic!
I admit that this story lost some of its spark in the end, due to brain block and too much Harry Potter fluff, It went up, down, down, up, up, down. The last chapter was down.
Well, I've learnt a lot out of this fic. It's the first fanfic I've finished! Not to mention the first piece of writing I've finished.
Most of the fics end up in 'the trashcan'.
This will probably be one of the exceptions. I won't delete this even after I've finished it! Promise!
This isn't the best fanfic in the world, it isn't the worst either. (I think I won that one with the first fan fic I wrote.. Ugh! Not even mentioning it! It had something to do about Alanna going into Australia..Needless to say, no one reviewed it)
I hope you guys all enjoyed reading this, cause I LOVED writing it! And reading the reviews as well!!!!!
Anyone is welcome to use the plot of Kel-going-back-in-time. You'll probably end up doing a better job than me! Also, I PROMISE I'll read any kel-back-to-time fanfics..
One thing for sure, K/J romance will probably never be a rocking success. It was a pretty weird idea, though it couldn't have come through without all the reviews supporting me :)
I hope you enjoyed reading 'Fallen'
You guys rock!
Wev :) :)
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(~._.~)(~._.~)(~._.~)(~._.~)(~._.~)(~._.~)(~._.~)(~._.~)(~._.~)
THIS IS OFFICIALLY THE END OF "FALLEN"
Oh well, lets just do that one last time!
~THE END~
If you liked Fallen- you would probably like 'Love is Blind' my newest fanfic. (I couldn't resist adding this in.) It's about Alanna. What will happen if Alanna was found to be a girl after the defeat of the Ysandir, but she was allowed to continue on training to be a lady knight?
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Oh GOD. I actually finished this story!
Firstly, to the people who corrected me for everything..
Lady of the Lilacs- The horrible Mindelan thingie. (bangs head on table) I can't go back to correct it now, but. the spelling is probably glued in my mind.
Keita- A brutally honest reviewer! Thank you, thank you (has my writing style changed?) its because of great reviewers like you, that makes a story better.
Read 24/7 and more- Kennan, Masbolle. I didn't use it, but thanks anyway! (^_~)
6-a opal- I hate my spell checker, but I'll take your advice for the future.. And most of the glaive scenes in the later chapter had been taken directly from the book. Lady of the Lilacs, Keita, Read 24/7 and more, 6-a opal
MagixPawn- Your reviews were some that got me up and going. I should have read what you reviewed before I continued writing.. But I was too busy.. Thanks! I really valued your info and reviews!
~*~*~*~*~*
To the Neal/ Dom lovers: Lady Wild Rose, Drunken Little Monkey, white lily, zella, lara (I took your advice)
Just a tiny little segment about Neal and Dom charming all the ladies in King Roald's court
~! ~!
Don't You Just Love Attention?
~! ~!
After straightening their tunics and combing through their hair, Neal and Dom marched over to the dining hall, ready for anything.
"Now, remember," Daine had warned them, "you are to charm and flirt- nothing more than that."
"Send them panting, in other words," Dom corrected. "I think I'll like this job!"
~
Dom struck for the pretty ones, as did Neal.
"Lady Elaine! Don't you look charming today?" Dom would ask, "the colour of your dress matches you exactly. Tell me- do you use magic? Surely, there is no other way."
Lady Elaine would laugh, blush, and give Dom a little shove. "As charming as ALWAYS, Sir Domitan." She purred.
Neal, however, had small success at first. He couldn't keep from being sarcastic. True, he tried Dom's approach, but every time, the lady would give him an annoyed look, and inch away slowly.
Later, he found his own style of it. Flattering, flirting- put together with a flourishing bow.
"Demoiselle- do you know how beautiful you look tonight?" He would ask, with a soulful look.
Instant captivation.
"Just don't write any poetry, Neal," Kel advised.
Neal took poetry of books, reciting them to perfection.
"This is the life," Dom sighed to Kel. "Pretty girls fawning all over us- can it get better than this?"
Kel rolled her eyes. "No, Dom. It can't."
One night, after Neal was bombarded with pretty, scented, scalloped pink papers, he was practically over the moon.
"I'm in demand! I love it!" He crowed.
Kel just sighed. "Please, Neal. Don't read that stuff near me."
"You're just jealous."
"You wish."
Pretty soon, Neal and Dom got tired of their 'fan mail'. But of course- boys are boys. They never would get tired of the 'pretty girls'!
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
The thought of K/J did freak me out more than I thought it would. In the beginning, I thought it would be a sort of DIFFERENT pairing. I mean, Daine and Jon had been put together before, so why not Kel and Jon, as Roald and Kel were definitely not an ideal couple (I don't know, but I LIKE Shinko!)
I guess it turned out OK in the end. in the first couple of chapters, I always got reviews speculating on the weird pairing! Anyhow.
I don't know. I'm a Kel/Dom fan. (I don't read fanfics on them, though) ~*~*~*~*
~*~*~*~
For the people who love Jon, hates George, or loves George and hates Jon, this was a part I wanted to put in, but kept on taking out 'cause it was a bit off.
Thanks to: Forget-me-not, Vilranda, Lady of the Lilacs, Ti-Ti.
~*~*~*~
Fight (I even named these segments. Sigh)
~! ~!
It had been a long time since Jon had visited Dancing Dove.
It was a spur of the moment thing.
Outside the Dancing Dove, Jon tied Darkness to the pole and entered the building.
Inside, the thieves were celebrating about a thing or the other. At the sight of him, Lightfingers stood up, swaying a bit. "Johnny! What bring you 'ere?"
"Business, no ale tonight, 'Fingers," Jon said quickly.
"You an' young Alan. Never drinkin' a drop. Sombre as a block of wood," 'Fingers shook his head before staggering away.
Approaching George's 'throne', Jon tapped the thief on the shoulder.
George turned around. "Jon! What brings you here?"
Jon shrugged.
"We need to talk, you and I," George said, with the strangest expression in his eyes.
Leading Jon to his chambers, George politely opened the door and let Jon enter first.
Inside, however, George was anything but polite.
"Do you realise what you've been doing?" He bellowed.
Jon looked surprised. "What do you mean?"
"Haven't you been lookin' into Alanna lately, or too busy carin' for that Shang who doesn't have a thing for you?" George said coldly.
Scowling, the Prince turned on George. "Don't be ridiculous," he began.
"No, Jon. It is YOU whose bein' foolish here," George said, "Just because that Shang has a prettier face doesn't mean that Alanna's worthless!"
"I said nothing of that sort!" Jon said.
"Don't you even know 'bout Alanna anymore? Or is it just Keladry? Do you know that the lass comes runnin' to me practically every two days, tryin' to fight back tears about your ignoring of her?"
"Alanna should just talk to me then!" Jon fired back. "Since when did we invite YOU to comment?"
"Tis is where you go WRONG, Highness," George said, his voice icy, "Alanna doesn't talk to you because you don't give her th' chance to now."
"What goes on between Alanna and I is ABSOLUTELY none of your business!" Jon shouted.
"It is if she gets hurt," George retorted.
Suddenly understanding what George was really saying, Jon's temper fired up. "Tell Alanna to go to you then! Tell her that I'm with Kel! She can go snivelling back to you!"
Flinging open the door, Jon bumped straight into a person with violet eyes that brimmed with tears.
"Alanna-" Jon began.
"Lass, listen-"
Alanna turned striding off to the entrance.
"Now look what you've done," George muttered.
~*~*~*~
~*~*~*~
Oh well. Enough of these segment things.
Just for the people that I need to thank..
+Angel of the Storms+
-demented-dreamer-
^White Wolf^
#Rhapsody07#
Lady Atalanta
jazy716
$Nikita, Lady of the Rogue$ %Lady Marie% )BabyGirlKatie14( & hannirose & "horselover" }Skysong{ |White Phoenix Erialis| ~Hazel Eyed Witch 87~ * Gemini*Star *
(the following are signed reviews, if any are omitted, it was unintentional)
Thanks 2 all! My fic would be nowhere if it wasn't for you guys!!! :)
Also, thanks also to: *sunstorm/ *Lady Mage Dragoness/ Stuffed Dodo/ *Nat/ Wat../ *hihi/ *1234/ Valencia22/ lisini/ ShangRose/ von/ Wildmage/ kittydat_weirdo/ Twinkie_bar_ummmmm/ little_fire_cracker_goes_BOOM/ Rae, Sho, cuddly fluff lover/ Tammy_Fan/ mel/ Tammy4fan/
~*~*~*~
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~*~*~*~
This is the serious stuff. The real authors notes bit.
()()()()()()()()()
Well, I've finally finished writing the fic!
I admit that this story lost some of its spark in the end, due to brain block and too much Harry Potter fluff, It went up, down, down, up, up, down. The last chapter was down.
Well, I've learnt a lot out of this fic. It's the first fanfic I've finished! Not to mention the first piece of writing I've finished.
Most of the fics end up in 'the trashcan'.
This will probably be one of the exceptions. I won't delete this even after I've finished it! Promise!
This isn't the best fanfic in the world, it isn't the worst either. (I think I won that one with the first fan fic I wrote.. Ugh! Not even mentioning it! It had something to do about Alanna going into Australia..Needless to say, no one reviewed it)
I hope you guys all enjoyed reading this, cause I LOVED writing it! And reading the reviews as well!!!!!
Anyone is welcome to use the plot of Kel-going-back-in-time. You'll probably end up doing a better job than me! Also, I PROMISE I'll read any kel-back-to-time fanfics..
One thing for sure, K/J romance will probably never be a rocking success. It was a pretty weird idea, though it couldn't have come through without all the reviews supporting me :)
I hope you enjoyed reading 'Fallen'
You guys rock!
Wev :) :)
(^_^)(^_^)(^_^)(^_^)(^_^)(^_^)(^_^)(^_^)(^_^)(^_^)(^_^)(^_^)(^_^)(^_^)(^_^)( ^_^)
(-_-)(-_-)(-_-)(-_-)(-_-)(-_-)(-_-)(-_-)(-_-)(-_-)(-_-)(-_-)(-_-)(-_-)(-_- )(-_-)(-_-)
(._.)(._.)(._.)(._.)(._.)(._.)(._.)(._.)(._.)(._.)(._.)(._.)(._.)(._.)(._.)( ._.)(._.)
(~._.~)(~._.~)(~._.~)(~._.~)(~._.~)(~._.~)(~._.~)(~._.~)(~._.~)
THIS IS OFFICIALLY THE END OF "FALLEN"
Oh well, lets just do that one last time!
~THE END~
If you liked Fallen- you would probably like 'Love is Blind' my newest fanfic. (I couldn't resist adding this in.) It's about Alanna. What will happen if Alanna was found to be a girl after the defeat of the Ysandir, but she was allowed to continue on training to be a lady knight?