So i know that i promised that this chapter would be longer but its not... so sorry but i wanted to get the chapter out because i've had it written for a while ;)
but there werent more reviews than for the last chapter so that also was why the chapter didnt come out sooner. :( so thanks to everyone that reviewed! i really appreciate you taking the time to do it!
this is the chapter that everyone has been waiting for!! Bella's transformation!! yayy! this was pretty fun but hard to write so i hope that it turned out ok.
i decided on both POVs after reading the reviews and i tried to make it so that it wasnt confusing at all so go and read and remember to REVIEW!!
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Chapter 21
EPOV
"Bite me." she said with a huge breath. I could tell that this was what she really wanted. I thought about the past year and half that I spent with Bella and how careful I had to be with her. Now I wouldn't have to do that.
I took a big breath and told her, "Your wish is my command." I leaned over to her neck and I could hear her heart going crazy as my venom coated teeth sunk into her warm flesh. As my venom was released into her blood I could taste her sweet tasting blood. It tasted even better than she smelled. Stop, I thought to myself. Bella was my wife. I did not need her blood. I pulled away from her neck and she smiled faintly at me as I picked up her wrist and bite into her vein. I released a lot of venom into her system as I bit her other wrist.
Carlisle had told me that adding more venom might make the transformation occur quicker and she would be in less pain. He instructed me to bite her in several places and then hold her still and keep her calm. I promised Carlisle that I would follow his directions when I brought her here.
My thoughts were interrupted as she gasped in pain. She took a few ragged breaths and then let out a wild scream. Her eyes were opened wide and she stared up at me in fear. I didn't know what to do for her so I sat down on the bed with her head in my lap and my legs on either side of her so that I would be able to hold her down if I needed to.
I stroked her hair as she had spasms and screamed in pain. I looked over at the clock on the table; it had been about three hours since I had bitten her. Carlisle had told me that her transformation might take a little less than three days because her heart was much stronger and I had added a lot of venom into her main veins. I looked down at Bella and her eyes closed and she wore a peaceful expression even though she was in so much pain.
"That right, love. Try to sleep. It will be over soon." I told her as I stroked her face and hummed her lullaby. She relaxed and seemed to fall into some kind of unconscious state.
BPOV
"Bite me." I told him and I took a deep breath.
"Your wish is my command." He said as he leaned down and sunk his teeth into my flesh. I wanted to hide the pain that I was experiencing as I felt fire flowing through my veins. I smiled at him and watched as he bit my wrists too. I gasped in pain and tired to focus on breathing and took in a few ragged breaths. I couldn't hold in the pain anymore and I screamed. I wasn't sure how loud I was because my body felt like it was on fire as Edwards venom was racing around in my blood. I could feel him sit my head on his lap and I knew that he had placed his legs around me as a protective barrier. He stroked my hair and did his best as I had spasms and the fire flowed through my body. I didn't know how long I had laid there but finally the pain lessened enough for me to close my eyes.
"That's right, love. Try to sleep. It will be over soon." He told me and I could feel his cold hands on my face. He hummed his lullaby and I wanted to tell him that I wasn't asleep and that I would be ok but I couldn't find my voice in my painful body. I began to relax and I got lost in my endless thoughts.
I eventually opened my eyes when I heard a fearful scream and looked wildly up at Edward. He looked concerned and I then realized that the scream was mine. I thrashed around on the bed and I could feel his cold arms restraining me. I eventually calmed down enough and Edward sighed with relief. I closed my eyes and wished that the pain would be over. I knew that it would be painful but I wasn't sure how much I could stand.
I knew that it was a new day because the lighting was different. I was beginning to feel more and more powerful but I still felt like I had fire rushing through my body.
EPOV
The night and half the second part of the day had passed and I could feel Bella growing more powerful because I couldn't hold her down as easily. She thrashed wildly and random screams would come from her.
This wasn't my Bella. What had I done? I was putting her through so much pain just for my own selfish being. She didn't deserve this and I didn't deserve her. Bella only wanted to be a vampire because of me. I knew that she would be my Bella again after she changed but I just wanted to see her blush and smell her scent once again. I noticed that her scent was still as strong as ever and I wondered if I was imagining things. I wished that I could take away all of her pain.
As I held her still, her skin began to feel icy and it hardened. I could see that she was becoming more and more beautiful as her skin paled and her features became more prominent. I looked down at her in wonder and her eyes shot open and she looked at me and smiled. Her eyes were still their normal brown color. She let out a few groans of pain. I kissed her forehead and she unwillingly closed her eyes and rocked the bed with her body.
"Shh… Bella, it's all most over. I promise, love." I told her as I stroked her new shiny brown hair. I listened to her last faint heart beats and committed their sound to memory. I smiled down at my angel and waited for her pain to be over.
I looked at the clock and it had been almost 50 hours since I had bitten her. I was getting worried. Carlisle had said that she would wake up in less than three days. It had only been two but I was hoping that she would finish and become a vampire quickly because she had a strong heart. Just then my phone began to buzz, and I reached for it while I held Bella's thrashing body down on the bed. I looked at the caller ID and it was Carlisle. I sighed and flipped open my cell phone.
"Hello?" I asked as Bella moaned loudly.
"Edward? How is she?" Carlisle asked with a concerned voice.
"She's fine. When is this supposed to end? She's suffering so much." I told him.
"According to Alice, she should be complete at exactly 3:24 pm today."
"Good, so there is about 4 more hours." I said and sighed with relief.
"Well, I'll let you go and take care of her. Bye."
"Bye, and thanks."
"You're welcome, Edward. I'll see you in about a month. Keep her safe, son." He said with a warning and hung up. I clicked the phone shut and Bella had opened her eyes again and was staring up at me. Her face had relaxed and her eyes were beginning to change to a newborn red color.
"Bella? Did you hear that? There are only about 4 more hours until you are done." I said with a smile. She smiled weakly back and groaned.
BPOV
I could feel my skin become icy and I shivered involuntarily and I was sure that I had rocked the whole bed by doing this. I was tingling all over and I didn't know what was going on. I could feel the fire being put out. I couldn't feel the blood pulsing through my veins and I knew that it had all been drained from my body. My heart had stopped by now and I moaned in pain as another shot of pain burst through my body. As I thrashed around, I could feel Edwards's body trying to hold me down but he wasn't being very successful. I was becoming stronger than him.
I heard the phone ring and slowly opened my eyes. It was Carlisle. I could hear his every word over the phone and I understood their rapid speaking. He told Edward that I would only be in pain for 4 more hours. I groaned again. 4 hours seemed like such a long time but it really wasn't compared to the amount of time that I had been drained of my blood. He kissed my forehead and I attempted to smile at him. I was still not strong enough to move around a lot except for the random spasms that my body would have.
EPOV
I looked down at my wife. I looked over at the clock next. It was 3:23. She had less than one minute before she would be fully a vampire. I wondered how she would react. I was lost in my thoughts, when suddenly her blood red eyes shot open and she looked up at me with thirst.
BPOV
I would feel the pain lessen until there was no more hurting anywhere except in the back of my throat. It burned and itched and there was nothing that I could do about it. I decided that it was time to wake up from this state and my eyes shot open and I looked into Edward's confused eyes.
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sorry about the small cliffhanger... but maybe if there were more reviews i wouldnt have stopped there? haha
so this was short but i didnt want to drag it out too much because not alot can happen with a person laying on a bed in pain. so the next chapter should be longer (or maybe it already is because theres a possiblilty that i already wrote most of it?) so if there are alot of review i'll put the finishing touches on it and then post it? sounds good to me!
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