Authors note- so yeh...i didnt get many reviews :(
anywhooters, ive got a new story up called And Then There Were None, and if you wanna check it out go ahead i think it came out really good! lol not trying to sound concieded..but...ITS AWSOME! (that was the joke, ppl) ok anyway, please check that out, and yeh. nextt chapter! ooooo romance, a gushy subject!(:
chapter 21- romance
From the minute I saw her I knew she was the one. Even if she's way out of my league.
Yes, out of my league.
Out of James Diamond's league.
What? It's possible. There are people that are prettier than me, belive it or not.
Red hair, blue sparkling eyes that twinkled in the sunlight, nice body figure, smooth soft hands...she was gourgeous.
There's something about her that just..doesnt quite remind me of other girls...
When I said red hair, first off, i meant like, intense red hair. Like Hayley Williams style. Her hair obviously was dyed like that, Iater found out that her natural hair color is blonde.
And I like that. Im sick of those slutty girls with the bouncy blonde pony tails who never shut up about cheerleading.
She walked past me, lovely red hair, twinkling blue eyes, very fine body figure, blue skinny jeans, black t-shirt, gray converse, and a pink and black belt.
I want to tell you all about how we first met, and went on our first date, then got married and had kids...
I want to tell you that. But Im afraid thats not exactly what I can tell you...
"Hey, Im James."
She observed me, and smiled. "Rachel."
"So...uhm, I was wondering if maybe-"
Right then, a gun shot went off from behind me.
A tall man, wearing all black, throws down the gun, and lights a match.
I would love to tell you all about how I saved her life, defeated the criminal, and became a hero like they do in the moves.
I would love to...but Im afraid...I cant.
Before anyone can react, the Palm Woods is burning down, and there are about 7 people, already dead.
I would love to give you all the details...but its easier to just fast forward to the part where he pointed the gun at Rachel, and we both ran for our lives, the criminal chasing after us.
I didnt really no where I was going.
I had this georgeous girl in my arms, and we were running through L.A., running for our lives.
I was scared.
I couldnt get away.
That was it, it was over.
But the gun shot went off again, and we both ran for the hills.
The gun shot went off again, and we realized...we were on top of the Hollywood sign.
The gun shot went off once more, and we tripped.
Keep in mind, that standing right behind me...is the killer.
I would love to tell you all about how I saved her & she didnt die, and how the two of us lived happily ever after together.
I would love to tell you that...
The gun shot went off once more, and hit me right in the shoulder.
I bit my lip in pain, but still held on to Rachel.
"James, dont let go."
"I promise, I wont."
I would love to tell you how I kept my promise...
The gun shot off agian, hit her in the head, and me in the other shoulder, and we both let go of eachother.
Lucky enough for me, the cops arrived just then, and took the criminal away.
But not too lucky, Rachel didnt make it.
I've only known her for two hours, but the way she held on to me for dear god life, I felt sparks and knew she was...or wouldve been...the one.
But I know she is still the one, she's specail, I will never meet another girl like her.
And I know that she will always be looking down from above at me.
And we can always share some romantic moments, in our minds.
Here lies the dead body of Rachel, the girl i fell in love with in two hours, while running from a criminal.
But she will always be with me, up there.
authors note- case you couldnt tell, Rachel, is me. I described her exactly like me, lol so yes its a sad story about how I fall in love with James, then die.
Yeh...
lol, ok so I REALLY NEED AN IDEA FOR SCIFI
and then i really need an idea for spiritual and supernatural...
and then western.
lol yeh so im really hoping that i can get 100 reviews by the end of this story...please..lol just like 15 more, ppl i know you got em in you!
lol anyway...check out my other story if ya want, and yeh.
Tootles!
yes, i just sed it, tootles.
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