A/N - Thank you for all the amazing support this story is receiving!
I am fully aware that I am not the most talented writer in the world of Fandom, but I try my best to please my readers…
** I would continue to write even if I got no reviews at all. I enjoy it as a pastime, and it gives me thrills to bring my favourite characters alive ;) **
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Chapter 21 - Bella POV
"Edward it burns!" I screamed as the fire overtook my body. My body convulsed with painful tremors as the iciness of the burning licked it's way through my bloodstream.
Suddenly, becoming an Angel did not seem so pleasant.
I briefly felt soft touches on my forehead and arms, but they were quickly overtaken by pain and immense discomfort. I writhed and struggled, trying to find any source of comfort in this painful world.
It was far worse than the darkness that had claimed me whilst being drugged.
"Shh Bella, it will be over soon my love," Edward's velvet voice invaded my thoughts for a mere few seconds. It sounded fuzzy and far away as I let out another blood-curdling scream of pain and terror.
I couldn't deny, I was terrified. I wanted the fire to stop. I wanted comfort and softness, not this excruciating pain.
The back of my mind told me this would all be worth it in the end, but that thought was far-fetched as another wave of pain shot down my arms and legs, seeming to snap my bones and twist them painfully. Well, that's what it felt like.
Soon, a piercing sting was making it's way across my chest as something pinned my arms down. I writhed and kicked out as best as I could, but it was fruitless.
The pain intensified and seeped deeper into vital organs. Fiery pain ripped into my lungs and my breaths were becoming quick and short.
"Ahhh! Please stop arrggh!" I screamed and sobbed desperately. I heard Edward's distraught voice somewhere, trying to soothe me, but nothing could soothe this kind of pain.
Something held down my legs as the fire continued it's deadly path towards my heart.
What did I ever do to deserve this?
More painfully chilly flames lapped into my stomach and clenched it in an excruciating hold. My intestines felt as if they had been knotted and sliced over and over.
My wrists throbbed and I could barely register the tears flowing in great rivers down my burning cheeks. Edward was there the whole time, but I only just remembered he was there at points.
A shredding pain burst through my eardrums and I choked and gasped as my hearing became impaired as the merciless flames licked a path up to my eyes.
No! Not my eyes! Please, I beg! No!
The demonic pain ignored me as my shut eyelids began to tingle painfully and it spread to my pupils' and iris'.
"No! Oh God NO! Please, arrhhhh!" I cried and heaved to no one in particular. No one was listening anyway. At that moment I decided death was better than this.
"Just a little longer my sweet darling, I'm here, I'm here," A honey coated voice crooned to me over and over. I was so far gone now that I couldn't care less who stopped this pain, I just wanted it over with. Now!
"No! No no no no! Please make it STOP!" I screamed incoherently and hissed in complete pain. The pain spread, widening it's search for something. My heart.
Coils of icy pain curled it's way round my heart tendons and squeezed like a snake would it's prey.
My breathing stopped short altogether and my heartbeat slowed dramatically. I screamed again and again for mercy and any comfort. But there was none.
Gasping and convulsing, each breath burned as I began to drink in the oxygen again I so desperately needed. A fiery pain emitted from my shoulder blades and seemed to shove them apart.
I arched upwards into something solid and I heard a ripping sound as my bones seemed to stretch and snap painfully. Through my weak eyesight, I spotted a bright glow of light surrounding me in an aura but the pain took over my senses again.
The pain seemed to build altogether now, in a perfect chorus of pain, ice, fire and breakage.
More screams erupted from my chest as I tried in vain to writhe, but something pinned me down, preventing from doing any more harm to myself, I supposed.
I felt a stab through my chest as a strong summit of pain rippled through to my heart and shattered every last piece of my human senses.
After that, my soul was lost and my body weak.
The aura around me died and The pain trickled slowly down and out of my body…
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A/N - Can I just say, wow! I wrote this in under half an hour and am pleased with the outcome!
I know I made the transformation of an Angel similar to Stephenie Meyer's methods of becoming a vampire, but she's not here to sue me so…you can! XD
Let me know what you thought…