well here is chapter 21 hope everyone likes it!!!!! it's going to be a while before Jak is free from Rayn and Kras City again.
Jak had been asleep for almost the whole day until the time of the Grand Prix. as Jak saw Link and Zelda he asked Daxter "what are they doing here?" Daxter anwsered "Yeah they joined the Team". Jak was now Undistracted by the tought of Keria. Jak was back to normal thinking about the new members Link and Zelda. He sat down on a chiar and asked Link and Zelda "well have Cars yet?". Link anwsered for both him and Zelda "We got cars that we Re-painted to go with how we are dressed!". Jak asked a second question "well have you qualfied yet?". Link yet again anwsred for him and Zelda "yes we did the training corses while you where asleep". Jak had another thought. "well hope you do a good job on the Red Eco cup Grand Prix". Sonic turned around and asked Jak "what we win a Gold Trophy?". Jak didn't even think about anwsering that question. "No anwser" said Jak. Sonic semmed angery. "Ok well Pecker, and Spongebob will be here soon to pick us up" said Jak grining. Jak then looked back at Link in the chair across from him with Zelda next to him. Jak asked Link "so where are your cars?". Link lifted up his hand and pionted to the garge where Tails was. Jak got up and went into the garge. He asked Tails as he put a hand on the Car tails was working on "Tails I sorry this hasn't been your best days". Tails looked at him "Yeah well..." "well what?" asked Jak. "Jak am I a real member of the Team?" asked Tails worried. Jak had a hard anwser for that. He anwsered Tails "Tails you don't race but I do know that your a good Mecahnic". "So am I?" asked Tails. Jak anwsered that with a sigh and then he said something "Tails I'd say you aren't an offical member yet". Tails looked down at the ground and closed his eyes. "Ok" said Tails Getting back to work on Link and Zelda's cars. "well see ya Tails" Said Jak worried that he upset Tails. as Jak walked out of the garge in the hotel of the Theme park he saw a Trophy case. That brought back a memberory of something he had forgoten in Kras City. "The Choas Emeralds" Said Jak worried. He ran over to Shadow wicth had his eyes closed and Arms crossed. "Shadow we forgot about the Choas Emeralds in Kras city". Shadow's expresstion Changed with those words. Shadow said the first words that he had said for days "We have to go back".
what will happen!!!!!!!! are the Choas Emeralds stolen? they have to leave The theame Park to Kras City and get back the Choas Emeralds!!!!! well this is a while I just got tired typing that!!!!