Blue: Yeah, I rewrote this chapter!! I hope it's a little better, although most of it is the same….
Reviews
Blue: first up is Pinkpelt…. Thank you and I'm glad people like Emberpaw, and with the suggestions for kits coming in, that could be possible
Blue: Next is Mystra…. He(I get confused about that too) would name his kit weird names… that would be an interesting personality, thank you!
Blue: then She Who Stalks in the Shadows….. Thank you, your poem fits Emberpaw perfectly, and perhaps she only talks in chat speak…
Blue: Tsugi wa Silameara….. Arigato! Kono koneko wa sugokute tanoshii desu yo! Soshite… hai! Shurumi wa ookiii baka desu yo!! (sorry I didn't feel like speaking/typing English…..rough translation-thank you, the kits seem cool, and Shroomy I agree that you're an idiot.)
Blue: Sorekara Cloudfire…. Yeah that or the book has a typo…. and thank you!
Blue: sixth is either Dragonpelt or dragonqueenc I'm not sure which one it is…. Thank you and thank you for the kit!
Blue: Nightkit also reviewed….thank you!
Blue: Now it's time for Faithrose's reviews….thank you! (sometimes it is easier to just skip a few chapters with longer stories) thank you again and it seems like everyone likes Emberpaw.
Blue: ninth is Princess Alyra…. thank you!
Blue: then Moosey…. I never really liked Fudd either….. I don't like most hunter's actually…
Blue: after Moosey is Streamheart…thank you! Sorry I am kinda bad at updating fast….
Blue: lastly is Eaglesflight… thank you! And umm…. sorry?
---Chapter 21: the return of the Ember-
-A few days later-ThunderClan medicine-cat den-
Yellowfang, "To day the clan will suffer a great gain and minor loss."
Fireheart, "That's nice!"
-Somewhere in ThunderClan territory-
Whitethroat, "Littlecloud! I'm tired!!"
Littlecloud, "Well perhaps a little nap won't hurt…."
Whitethroat, "Yay nap!!" and then they fell asleep.
-With Treepaw-
Treepaw was staring intently at the thunderpath and Tigerclaw and the rogue cats were staring at her.
Rouge 1, "Treepaw? What are you doing?"
Treepaw, "Hunting!"
Rouge 2, "Huh? But you're just staring at the thunderpath….."
Tigerclaw, "I know…."
-Twolegplace-
Emberpaw lands on the ground and some glowing turkeyish bananas yell, "AND YOU BETTER NOT COME BACK!!! WE DON'T NEED ANYONE FINDING OUT THE SECRETS OF THE UNIVERSE!!!" (Yep, the secrets of the universe are hiding in the sun!) and then the bananas floated back to the sun!
Emberpaw whined, "No more huge fire….." then she lit a nearby catnip bush on fire! "YAY!!! Heee heeeee…."(she started to get high off the catnip) then she drunkenly stumbled back to camp.
-ThunderClan camp-
The camp was peaceful until, the barrier caught on fire!
Frostpaw, "EEEEK!!!" and then she ran around in circles most of the clan stared at her then joined her. (Normally they wouldn't think anything of it but, since Emberpaw is gone they're not expecting spontaneous combustion!)
Snowkit, "You guys are annoying, I'm going to go join the city cats!" and he left through the burning barrier.
Yellowfang, "Well, there's the loss…. But what's the gain?"
Then to answer her question, the warrior den burst into flames. Darkstripe yowled, "EMBERPAW LIGHT YOUR OWN DEN ON FIRE!!!"
Emberpaw, "Okay!" and she lit the apprentice den on fire!
Swiftpaw, "Emberpaw!! Your back!!" and he ran up to greet his apprentice.
Yellowfang, "I see why it was suffering a gain…"
Darkstripe, "Guys? We still have 2 dens on fire…."
Frostpaw, "Woot! This means I won't betray my clan!"(woah. She's not panicing) "But, TURKEYISH BANANAS WILL COME AND ATTACK THE CAMP!!!"(Okay now she's back to normal)
Darkstripe, "Anyone? The dens?"
Rockpaw, "Yes! Song time!"
Fireheart, "And karaoke?"
Rockpaw, "…No auntie…"
Darkstripe, "SOMEONE PUT OUT THE DENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Princess, "Did you say something?"
Darkstripe, "……… Forget it…."
-About an hour later-
Some random patrol(meaning Thornpaw was probably in the patrol) brought Littlecloud and Whitethroat in to the camp and now the clan is deciding what to with them.
Bluestar, "So you found these orange tigers sleeping in our territory?"
Whitethroat, "But, we're not orange…."
Littlecloud, "We're also not tigers…"
Bluestar snapped, "I know what bananas look like and you two are defiantly bananas!!" Whitestorm muttered, "What's a banana?"Littlecloud, "You just said we were tigers…."
Bluestar hissed, "I know what I said!!! Don't you pineapples try to trick me!!!"
Whitethroat, "What's a pineapple?"
Littlecloud, "And I thought Nightstar was delirious…"
Bluestar, "My senior warriors and I will figure out what to do with you two pine trees."
After the warriors left, Ashpaw wasted no time walking up to Littlecloud and meowing, "Hi!"
Littlecloud, "Uh… hi?"
Ashpaw giggled, "You're a tom right?"
Littlecloud confusedly replied, "Yeah so?"
Ashpaw once again giggled, "And your name is LittleCLOUD?!?!"
Littlecloud, "Yeah…. HEY! Shut up it's not my fault Nightstar keeps thinking I'm a girl!"
Then while Ashpaw was laughing hysterically, Cinderpaw walked over and mewed, "I think I have a theory on how to cure you guys…"
Whitethroat, "Who are you?"
Swiftpaw, "No one knows…. She just keeps appearing and claiming to be the medicine cat apprentice."
Yellowfang, "Yeah, you'd think I'd know if I had an apprentice…."
Cinderpaw gave her clan mates a death glare, hissed, and stormed away.
Then Bluestar comes out of her den and meows, "We decide that you heartless have to leave."
Whitethroat, "Hey! I have a heart!!"
Mousefur, "Bluestar, that's from the wrong series…."
Anyways, after a few more minutes worth of arguing, the ShadowClan warriors left and soon Cinderpaw caught up with them.
Cinderpaw, "Just let me try to cure you!!!"
Littlecloud, "I guess…. I mean what do we have to lose?"
-ThunderClan camp-
Fireheart, "Hey Emberpaw! Light me on fire! I want to see if I can control fire too!!!"
Emberpaw, "Yay!" Then she lit him on fire, he couldn't control the fire. Let's just say that scorching him takes place of this chapter's mauling okay?
-End chapter-
Blue: Okay, so Emberpaw's back! And there was a little oocness in that chapter…. Also I probably asked for the kits too soon, but I think I have enough. The next chapter is this story's 1-year anniversary chapter so it won't be a normal chapter…