Notes

Well from the last review I some great feedback but I don't use ms word, I use google docs so I can work on this at school and home, (yes I am still student) and using a usb to transfer the file between home and school would just be a massive waste of my time when I can access this anywhere including my useless non auto correcting phone. (That has the worst accuracy of any smartphone I have ever seen) (I know there is an online ms word but it's terrible compared to the program)

Now onto the goal of this chapter is to get the story to one Location and that is Planeptune cause you know the whole Lastation crap show I did… I mean I could try to do something with that mess but it would have to be a lot later into the story, really I know I keep making this point but it all depends on how I make it go.

One last thing about the game war thunder it is going to be taking up a lot of my time until Neptunia U comes out on steam next Monday and once I get Neptunia U I will be a lot of that so this story might get put on the back burn.

Other than that I on with the show

place/locations will be bolded and italicized

Planeptune's basilicom the morning after

(Blanc's perspective)

The feeling of being groped woke me up, at first I did not mind this feeling even though person's fingertips felt like little daggers digging into my skin. Until I realized why it felt like that, one of the other goddesses had climbed into bed with me at some point in the night. I couldn't rolled over to see who but I didn't really need to guess who it is. I mean this is Planeptune after all, so it shouldn't have been a surprise to me to have Neptune groping me like this.

One thing about this situation confused me a small bit, why is Neptune in bed sleeping in her HDD form. I know that my transformation went haywire at the hospital and I am currently stuck as white heart, but I could feel that Neptune was full HDD. Her chest in only this massive when transformed.

Well unlike thunder tits she doesn't go around throwing those in everyone's face to try to prove a point, doesn't mean that isn't ticking me off feeling her lumps of fat on my back is any different than Vert shoving them in my face. Well if I don't get up now I am likely gonna try to rip them melons off her chest. I tried to break free of Neptune's iron grip to no avail, goddess damn this woman has a the grip of the true goddess.

I mean failing around a giant weapon is no easy task by any means but that doesn't mean she needs a grip strength like this, does it? Neptune only uses a Katana looking sword which should have a pretty balanced weight compared to my battle axe. The bed started to shake like Rom or Ram was trying to get up onto my bed on the very rare occasion I read a story to them for bedtime. ("Maybe once I get back to Lowee I should go to that theme park that just opened up in the next town over with Rom and Ram")

?: "NEPU!"

Blanc: ("What the hell was that noise")

("Was that Neptune")

?: "Wake up me"

Blanc: ("That is definitely Neptune's voice")

("But why did she refer to herself as me")

("Also why did she tell herself to wake up when she was clearly awake")

Nep: "Hey… Neptune stop hugging that weird blue haired girl and get up"

"I want play- "

Blanc: "HEY BITCH YOU ARE YOU CALLING WEIRD"

Nep: "You're the one sleeping in our room"

Blanc: "THE HELL IS THAT SUPPOSED TO MEAN"

Nep: "Nothing… "

"Well nothing you need to know"

Blanc: "GET YOUR HANDS OFF ME THUNDER TITS"

Purple Heart: "Hmmm… five more minutes"

Nep: "It been 10 minutes so get up already"

Purple Heart :"I just want to sleep"

"Is that too much to ask for a goddess to get some sleep"

Blanc and Nep: "Well maybe if you didn't sleep in that form you might not be so tired"

Purple Heart: "It's not my fault my bed was so tantalizing to another goddess"

Blanc: "Shut the hell up it was convenient"

IF: "For the love of the goddesses what is with all the yelling in here"

Purple Heart: "Iffy, Compa what are you two doing here"

IF and a sleepy Compa: "That's a great question what are we doing here"

Blanc: "I brought you two back here after you fell asleep on a bench outside the hospital"

IF: "I don't remember falling asleep outside"

"Compa did you do something to me last night"

Compa: "What could I have done to you Iffy"

"Just because I am a nurse doesn't mean I carry drugs on me like that"

IF: "..."

"I can't deny that"

"Not to mention it's you"

"There's no way you could hurt something…"

Purple Heart: "Iffy don't you think you should reword that"

IF: "Yeah I should… but not right now"

"Now that things seemed to have calmed down a small bit"

"good morning every-one"

"Umm… ahh… hmm…"

Purple Heart: "What is it Iffy"

IF: "why are there two Neps"

Blanc: "Now that you mention it…"

("That explains the voice from earlier")

Compa at this point was barely conscious so she didn't really get what was going on here, or see the fact that there was two Neptune's right in front of her.

Nep: "I think we have some explaining to do don't we me"

Purple: Heart: "What do you mean by we"

"This is all you so knock em dead Nep"

"I'm going out to get some pudding to wake up"

Nep: "Well then... "

"I guess I start with this"

"I'm Neptune just from another dimension according to Histy"

"It's not really all that hard to understand"

"I mean I have no idea who any of you are but you already seems to know who I am because of myself here in this dimension"

Blanc: "Well that doesn't really tells us anything other than one of you has to die because one Neptune is enough let alone two of you"

"Now whether it's you or the Neptune we all Know is another story"

("I would opt for both just because I find Neptune to be unbearable to be around")

IF: "We're not killing anyone here"

Blanc: "Killjoy"

IF:"What was that"

Blanc: "Nothing you need to know"

IF: "Blanc for a goddess you can be even more stubborn than Nep in HDD mode"

Blanc: "You're on to talk IF"

IF: "Hey this isn't time to compare goddesses to humans for attitude"

"Now on to the issue at hand hopefully no more interruptions from anyone"

"Nep if you really are the same as our Nep then what is one thing you can't give up"

Nep: "Pudding" "
"Meeting Nepgear"

"Not doing any work"

"Playing video games"

"Oh and don't forget pudding"

IF: "You said pudding twice"

Nep: "Wow Iffy… you noticed that"

IF: "How did you know my pet- I mean nickname from Nep was Iffy"

"Also only one of those doesn't fit and that is the Nepgear part"

Nep: "No one told me that"

"just hearing miss hot head over there-"

Blanc: "Watch your mouth bitch"

Nep: "See what I mean"

"Well getting back to what I was going to say to Iffy"

"When she said your name I didn't like it so I made up that nickname"

IF: "I see… "

This Neptune pissed me off more than that workaholic bitch in Lastation, not even thunder tits could get me this worked up with just words alone that quickly. It probably doesn't help me that I am still technically in my goddess from with my human clothing on. So in other words I am still in HDD and my temper goes from the press of a button to a hairpin trigger.

Compa: "Morning Nep-Nep"

"Hi Iffy"

"Miss Blanc?"

Blanc: "Why did I get a question mark at the end"

Compa: "I'm just really tired"

"So can you tell me why you are here"

Blanc: "I brought you here from the hospital"

"The reason I am here is because Histoire let me stay the night"

Compa: "Histy let you stay in Nep-Nep room"

Blanc: "No she didn't it is just the one that a basilicom worker told me to go to"

Nep: "Who's Nep-Nep"

Compa: "Nep-Nep why did you ask that"

"Did you impale yourself in the ground again"

"You really have to stop doing that Nep-Nep"

Nep: "When have I ever speared the ground"

Compa: "Yep Nep-Nep definitely got stuck in the ground again"

"Don't worry nurse Compa will fix you right up"

IF: "Nep you should probably start running"

Nep: "Why"

Blanc: "Don't ask why just run dammit"

Nep: "Well I guess I'm out of here"

Neptune went out the at the speed of light that time no questions asked when i told her to get the hell out.

Compa: "Why did you two tell my patient to runaway"

IF & Blanc: "For Neptune's safety"

Compa: "But Nep-Nep lost her memory again and we need to help her"

IF & Blanc: "That is not the same Neptune"

Compa: "What do you mean by that"

Blanc: "That Neptune is from another Dimension"

Compa: "So… does that mean our Nep-Nep is gone"

Blanc: "No it's worse than that"

"There is now two Neptune's"

Compa: "There 's two Nep-Nep's now"

"Wow that's even better than one Nep-Nep and one Ge-Ge"

Blanc: (" I feel bad for poor Nepgear having to deal with two of the same")

"Well I am going to go join the other Neptune in the kitchen"

Everyone: "Have fun with that"

I walked out of Neptune's bedroom only to be greet with the last thing in Gamindustri that I wanted to see.

And there is a new chapter out

Sorry it took me so long to get this chapter out I have been trying to find an editor from this and well that is not an easy task when it is this far gone and has this many words to it.

Also the other story I keep mentioning has not been worked on since wednesday this week so don't expect it to be rolling out any time soon because that one needs to be done right. Or it would piss a lot off people off.

I know I already asked this but please PM me if you are interested in taking on the challenge of fixing this story.

Other than that

MissNepgear OUT!