Hey I'm back again! And I'd like to thank the following readers:
Demyx clears his throat: Angel Chan says thanks to AshPhoenix, angelofstrife2007, Slientdeath Bringer, Dancing Flame's wind and Trigga Happy Saiyanayo for always reviewing! You are VERY NICE PEOPLE!!
Xemnas: Now if those people would donated hearts, my Kingdom Hearts will be COMPLETE!
Err...how on earth will they be able to give you hearts?
Xemnas thinks for a bit: ...JUST GIVE ME HEARTS!!
Demyx: Hey sups what are you doin here?
Xemnas: It X-E-M-N-A-S!
Axel: HEY! You just copied my style!
Xemnas: Well if you stopped doing that all the time, it wouldn't have stuck in my head would it (Oh Kingdom Hearts give me strength...)
Demyx: Um you didn't answer my question X-E-N-M-A-S?
Xenmas on the verge of screaming (well OOC): ...Xigbar and Xaldin informed me this is where you, Axel and Saix were, talking to this Angel?
It's Angel Jeanne thank you very much!
Xemnas: I'll have you know I don't like it when my members go astray
Well SORRY! Maybe if you lighten up the place hint toomuchwhite hint, they wouldn't leave
Xemnas: ANYWAYS back to Kingdom Hearts! (Drags Demyx and Axel)
Aww you didn't have to take them away!
Demyx & Axel: HELP US!!
Since everyone has gone AWOL I don't own Kingdom Hearts or any of its characters. I own Rena, Raen and the plot of this story
A/N Thoughts Rena's thoughts
Thoughts Raen's thoughts
'Talking' Raen speaking
'Talking' Mysterious voice...
Yep there's yet ANOTHER mysterious voice...whoop de frickin do!
And for some strange reason my computer doesn't like me underlining stuff...but anyways...
Chapter 21- The Other Past
"Holy Heartless! That's a crap load of um...heartless!" Exclaimed Axel
"Where is he?" I asked, deeply concentrating on Roxas aura
We didn't have to look far, to see said person clad in his organization attire, dual weilding against a herd of heartless
"Roxas!" I exclaimed
Roxas turned to look at us before attacking again
"You guys took your time! A little help here!"
Nothing more had to be said, I unsheathed my sword and Axel summoned his chakrams, as well as his organization cloak appearing around him. I stared confused
"It's kinda automatic, you know. Everytime we go into battle, it just pops on you" Axel grinned
"O-kay...freaky..." I shivered
I shook my head before Axel and I split up to fight a whole herd on our own
Why is there too many heartless here at one point...it's almost as if something is drawing them here...
I spotted Roxas, his keyblades glowing, their eyes were on him
Are they after Roxas? But he doesn't have a heart...
I continued to fight on, still confused on what the hell was going on but I was focused
The hooded figure grinned, his eyes transfixed on Rena
"That's it show me...I want to see if my experiment is a success...did it give you this power..."
Meanwhile...
'...What?'
Raen awoke to the sudden vibrations around her.
Ren-Chan must be fighting again...there's no way I can sleep now...
She looked at the mirror, when Rena wasn't 'visiting' the mirror acted as a window to the outside world. In simple terms it allowed Raen to see what Rena was up to
She saw the many heartless that surrounded Rena, Axel and Roxas.
So many of them...but they're so weak...to think...I was...argh!
Raen's head began to the pound.
My head...wait...who is that...?
The source of the headache came from the depths of her very being
'Oh so I can still contact you...'
'...Who...are...you?'
'And you are capable of speech...my it seems you have grown...perhaps it's this girl you reside in...'
'You...your voice...you're that...'
'Ah so you do remember me!'
'You're the one that froze me! How-'
'But it seems you don't remember about yourself...'
'What? I'm a heartless plain and simple. A heartless that got absorbed by Rena and naturally became her heartless'
'That is now, I'm talking about your past'
'Past? Heartless have no past...'
'My my and here I thought you've evolved...and seems you're still nothing, like those others'
'Nothing? Do I look like nothing to you! Who the hell are you to say things like that!'
'I am your creator, I can say what I wish!'
'Creator...?'
'Don't you remember?'
'Remember?'
'Never mind my 14...yet you are here now'
14...what...?
'What are you saying...'
'The only experiment that succeeded...the 14th that was able to grow and strive...you are that very 14th'
'You mean...I'm not a normal heartless?'
'You are merely an experiment...my very own hand grown heartless...that escaped...'
'I...'
The intensity of the headache grew more
'I'm not...She gave me a name...I'm-'
'Like I said merely an experiment...however...though you were successful, I was unable to run more tests on you, to see whether you were perfect...'
No...I'm not...I'm...She...Rena...she gave me a...
'You being in this girl prevents me further access to you...I need you to-'
'I'm not listening to you! Get the hell outta of my head!'
'My my is the 14th experiment expressing their own feelings here? You should know, you are merely this girl's shadow everyting you are right now, is merely a duplication of this girl...Now come...'
'Shut up!'
'Tsk...and here I thought you'll co-operate with me...but if pain is what you want, very well...'
A sudden jolt ran through Raen
'What the hell!'
'You forget I created you...I placed a control device within you...now submit, unless you want more pain...'
'I said...NO!'
'Always the stubborn one, even without a form, you used to be so uncooperative...very well I guess I will have to take control then..'
'What? What are you...'
A small heartless insignia appeared on Raen's chest.
Her eyes lost whatever emotion that was held within them.
'Now come to me...'
As if she was being controlled, Raen unsheathed her sword and walked towards the glass slowly
'...and break free!'
On cue, Raen thrust her dark blade into the mirror and it shattered into a million pieces...
Rena's hand froze on the spot
What the hell?
Her chest was burning inside
Raen? What did you-
Strange feelings seared throughout her body, emotions of pain, hate and anger
What is...
Black.
However Rena did not fall...No she remained standing.
Though this was not the same Rena, for her eyes were
Amber...
And cut the tension! Ooh so much happened in this chapter didn't it? So we learn of ' Raen's ' past and I bet you know who was speaking to her, the freezing part should give you a HUGE clue. So what's gonna happen next? Well you're just gonna have to review and find out!
And just for a bonus I wrote up this drabble poetry thingy, I hope you like it and tell me what you think of it! It's called Pieces
P i e c e s.
I'm picking up the pieces,
What's left of
Me and you
They wonder why
I still wait for you
X.X
I'm searching for the memories,
The time that we had
I only wish
That I could
take it all back
X.X
But I guess I lost my chance,
when the ties
s n a p p e d
You didn't know
how much I,
hated you
Back
then
X.X
I'm picking up the pieces,
What's left of
Me and you
They wonder why
I still wait for you
X.X
So here I am
on one final stand
It's either this
Cos I can't take it
no more
X.X
It's the end of the line
and here I am
falling
into
p i e c e s