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Ryoko - Thanks for everything, your prayers and thoughts have helped me through, without you I think I probably wouldn't come back, and would've just left this story unfinished.
For the first time in a long time, I have thought of a storyline, with helpful hints and ideas from three reviewers who all came up with the same thoughts, Angel of the crescent moon, Juusan'ya and Kelly, that's you, so I've taken your idea's and added my own.
Without further adieu:
Disclaimer : I do NOT own Inuyasha!
Credit for this chapter: Juusan'ya, Kelly, Angel of the Crescent moon.
Chapter 19: Closure
Kagome ran from the dungeons, her hands soaked with blood, Inuyasha's blood. Sesshoumaru hot on her heels, trying to stop her from running. Together they ran out into the courtyards, the sakura blossoms falling in the downpour. It was the dead of night, the moon hanging in the sky looking down upon the child in pain, its tears mingling with hers.
Sesshoumaru caught up to Kagome easily, grabbing her, holding her shaking form tightly to his chest, allowing her hot tears to slide down his torso, along with the beating rain.
"who am I? I murdered them both, I murdered Kikyo, and only a few weeks later I sent Inuyasha to hell as well. I don't deserve to live this life" Kagome muttered into Sesshoumaru's chest, trying desperately to push herself away, but he only pulled her tighter into his embrace, not wanting to let go.
"Kagome, you did what was right. Otherwise you wouldn't have done it at all" Sesshoumaru attempted to quell her fears, however his choice of words were not the best, Kagome looked up at him with those oceanic eyes, that were filled with rouge waves upon the cliff-face. She pushed herself out of his embrace, running towards the castle, her bloodied hands hiding her face. Sesshoumaru allowed an audible sigh to grace the winds, as he shook his head, not quite knowing which course of action to take.
The winds shifted, the scent of the wind, mingled with the departing rainfall assaulted Sesshoumaru's delicate nose. Her aura was the next to slowly develop, the foreboding of raging winds upon a Northern rock face, chilling, biting and intimidating, although her aura would not intimidate him.
"What do you want wind witch" Sesshoumaru seethed although not giving her the satisfaction of looking at her.
"Just here for some advice" She replied back courteously
"Why in the seven realms of hell, would I, Lord Sesshoumaru take advice from one such as yourself, allied to the forces I fought against, spawn of Naraku?" Ice dripping from his tone, that would make the Northern winds run warm.
"Because you know not of what your mate is feeling, she needs comfort, but not the comfort you can give"
Sesshoumaru turned gilded slit eyes at the witch, furling his lip slightly.
"I mean it in no disrespect, but she needs a female to talk to"
"If you dare to presume that I would allow my mate to converse with you, you are greatly mistaken" Sesshoumaru turned to leave, walking towards his palace.
"No not I, I would be the most ill-suitable choice, as you have pointed out as spawn of Naraku. But she needs, perhaps a sister or mother to converse with"
Sesshoumaru had heard every word, however chose to ignore the wind witch, entering the warmth of his palace. The scent of salty tears mingled with the metallic scent of blood moved along the soft breeze in the palace, trailing all the way to Kagome's chambers. He walked towards the heavy golden decorated doors, knocking on them. It wasn't the Lords place to knock, it was his palace, so he could just enter as he saw fit. But his mate was distressed, and as much as he hated to admit, Kagura was correct in that he could not comfort her as a female could. Nor could he as he had no emotion.
"Kagome…"
"……"
She refused to answer him, he turned around, deciding that it would be beneficial to sit in his study until the time arrived in which he could converse with her, the correct course of action.
"there be your problem"
"oh no, what do you want"
"I'm pointing out the flaw you've already made"
"This Sesshoumaru knows what he is doing, I do not…flaw"
"you're treating her like a battle ground, she's an Inu Youkai for Kami sakes, you're an Inu Youkai. It's in our nature to console our mate"
"I do not treat her like a battle ground…"
"but you do, you strategise how your going to converse with her"
"I believe that is the most logical course of action?"
"Iie! Turn around and go back, knock and enter"
Giving in to the commands of his inner beast, Sesshoumaru unwillingly turned on his heel and stood outside Kagome's chamber doors once again.
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Kagome flung herself onto her huge bed, the pale blue silken sheets turning a stained shade of rich crimson, as the blood of her victim stained their beauty. Her eyes stung from the crying, her heart aching from the truth, she needed to talk to someone, someone who would understand. She mentally slapped herself, not being able to converse with her mate-to-be.
Sesshoumaru was standing outside her room, she could sense his aura, that of the howling storm upon a fierce sea, raging with unadulterated fury of something in its wake, Kagome's azure eyes crept to the door, where he stood on the other side, slowly she pulled herself off the bed, and moved solemnly towards it.
Leaning against the door, Kagome placed her hands upon the cold wood, feeling the essence of death, from the timber. Turning one of her petite hands towards her, she watched as Inuyasha's lifeblood continued trickling down towards the wooden floor.
"Kagome…" Sesshoumaru spoke from the other side, Kagome's tear stained face turned towards the sounds, of rapping, and the voice of her mate-to-be.
'Why does he not enter?'
'he's being sympathetic'
'what? This is his palace, he should not knock on my door'
'he's giving you space, letting you know that he's aware of your feelings, of your pains. Let him in, or answer him'
'I can't'
'why not?'
'I'm afraid I may hurt him too'
Kagome listened as the ruffles of silken fabric turned and began to walk away, she slumped against the door frame once again, dropping to the floor, hiding her face with her long raven hair. Time seemed to stand still, then unexpectedly, Kagome felt Sesshoumaru's aura return to the door, he knocked once then let himself inside.
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Sesshoumaru's POV
She looked so beaten and wounded, a wound to the heart caused by her own afflictions. A wound I cannot heal with any words or actions. I looked down at her form crumpled on the floor, knees brought to her chest, adopting a protective position, one I had seen her adopt many times when she was hurt, in the heart and soul. I sighed, there was only one thing I could think of, and as much as I hated to admit that Kagura of all beings was the one to give the guidance, I thought it was perhaps the wisest idea. I lowered myself to her level, dropping to my knees. If any of my staff had seen this action, they surely would've died from a coronary heart attack, for no being brings me to me knees voluntarily or otherwise. I took her bloodied, tear soaked face into my hands, raising her face just enough for me to catch a glimpse of those remarkable eyes.
There they were, those captivating eyes, shining brighter than the sea on a sunlit afternoon, with no clouds in the skies, only pools of salty oceanic water.
"Kagome, we're going to journey towards the Southwest, there is someone who can offer you comfort there, and you comfort them in return. It has been many a year since your last visit, and I believe she surely misses you. It would be good for the both of you to gain your strengths together, by burying the past. Come" With that Sesshoumaru stood up, extending his hand towards Kagome, hesitantly she took it, being lifted to her feet.
Together they walked out of the her room in silence, no laughter, no chatting, no stories as she usually left her confines, just pure silence. Shippo walked down the hallways towards the banquet room, readying for dawn breakfast when he spotted the two Inu Youkai leaving for the moon filled gardens.
"Milord" Shippo bowed lowly in greeting to his Lord and father figure, before turning his attentions to the mute Kagome in his Lords hand. "Milady" then straightening himself up, he looked over her depressed state.
"Kitsune, we are departing to the place she once resided. There are beings there that can aid in this situation, I trust you to keep the palace running in my absence, plus taking care of a matter in the dungeons"
"Hai, milord"
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Sesshoumaru stepped outside with Kagome's small hand enveloped within his own, she had held on it tightly as though it were her last remaining lifeline. Outside he circled one of his muscular arms around her waist, forming his youki cloud beneath them. In an instant they were up into the clouds, flying over the blacked out lands of the West. The silvered clouds had taken on a soft lilac colouring as the night sky began to shift into the slow approaching daylight as the moon, slowly made it descend to the ground for its slumber. Kagome shifted in his arms, slowly becoming a dull weight, despite that she was not heavy at all.
For many hours they travelled in pure silence, a silence unbroken except only by the rushing of the wind, and the beginning of the dawn chorus.
"How much longer to this place where we're going?" Kagome finally spoke, her voice was full of pain, and fatigued remorse.
"Ashita" (tomorrow) Sesshoumaru replied, anyone else would have simply received no audible answer, but Kagome was not anyone else. A mere few hours later, Kagome's head had dropped, her long ebony tresses falling over her blood stained face, Sesshoumaru looked over her sleeping form, slowly and gently changing her position until she was sleeping within his arms.
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Kagome's eyes opened slowly as she was still within Sesshoumaru's arms, being held bridal style by the Demon Lord, a light blush crept to her cheeks at the thought, looking below she saw the village of Edo, the peasants continuing their daily chores.
"Sesshoumaru, why are we heading Southwest?" Kagome asked, but received no answer, for they were descending to the forest below.
'Inuyasha's forest' Kagome thought silently turning her eyes away from the Goshinboku tree, the tree that was eternally scarred from Inuyasha's slumberous death. Sesshoumaru placed Kagome back on her feet, and stalked towards the well house with Kagome following behind.
Kagome stood outside the wooden hut, looking at Sesshoumaru as though he'd lost the plot. "Why are we here?" Kagome questioned.
"Go inside" Sesshoumaru added, Kagome sighed dejectedly and obeyed sliding the door to the small wooden hut open.
"A well? Why are we inside a well house?" she asked silently to herself.
Sesshoumaru gracefully approached the lip of the well looking down into the dark murky void below. He knew of the well's power, of how one Ningen Kagome Higurashi and his loathed half brother could traverse freely to another time period. Extending his hand towards Kagome, he gave her the 'come' look. Hesitantly she took it, looking into the void below.
"I wonder how far it goes down?" she whispered to herself silently.
Sesshoumaru took a step up onto the lip of the well, motioning Kagome to do the same.
"Step down into it with me" Sesshoumaru said in a monotone
Kagome stared wide eyed, with a confused look on her face. "What? Why?"
"All will be revealed if you step down into the well"
Kagome looked down once again, groaning, not liking the idea at all. However; she didn't have a choice as Sesshoumaru took the first step pulling her down along with him.
They both landed on the dirt below, still hand in hand.
"What in Kami's name did you do that for?" Kagome questioned, she suddenly started looking around herself, ducking and flinching as though something was attacking her.
"wh…what's happening, where are these blue lights coming from?" Kagome panicked as she lifted her hands to duck away from them, her hands she noticed fading away then reappearing again. "What's going on? What have you done? Sesshoumaru" Kagome panicked even more as she began to fade from existence before Sesshoumaru's eyes.
Sesshoumaru POV
This was not what I thought would happen at all, I thought we would've arrived safely on the 'other side', but there was nothing to indicate that over those years Kagome did disappear to another world beyond this wooden well. That is until she starting seeing things 'blue lights' she was acting strangely, seeing what I could not, and yet she was beginning to disappear without me. I did the only thing I thought would work, I grabbed one of her hands as it came back into this era, she gripped it tightly afraid of what I had done, but it wasn't enough she was still fading away without me. What had I done? I thought that we would traverse time together, but this rare magic rejected me, the thought of losing Kagome forever to this magic jolted a small fraction of fear within me, apprehension that I may never see her again, I pulled her fading form closer to mine, the sadness and panic from her mirrored in my eyes, I did the only coherent thought that raced through my mind…I kissed her, as if I would never get the opportunity to again.
My skin flushed as though something hot was pricking it, it radiated from Kagome's warm lips, and flushed in waves throughout my body I opened my eyes, all around us were blue orbs of distorted light. It felt as thought time had accelerated, causing my stomach to knot and jolt, I was beginning to feel nauseous, my head was reeling, the travelling was something I would not want to do on a regular basis. Just as suddenly as it began, it ended. The lights faded away to reveal nothing as though we had not travelled at all. Maybe it didn't work.
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Kagome and Sesshoumaru continued to stand in the pit of the well, in the blackened silence, their lips still locked together in a chaste kiss. Kagome pulled back from Sesshoumaru, looking into his shinning Amber eyes. Then slapped his arm.
"What the hell were you doing? What the hell did you do?" Kagome screamed
Sesshoumaru's features schooled to the hard unemotional mask once again.
"This was the only way, although I'm not too sure it worked" he replied coolly.
"what worked, Sesshoumaru you're making no sense to me at all" Kagome continued. A long slender finger was placed over her lips in order to silence her ranting.
"You will see" Sesshoumaru added, leaping gracefully out of the dark pit, shortly followed by Kagome.
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Sesshoumaru opened the door to the well house, with Kagome right behind him. As the sliding doors were pulled apart, the sights and sounds were so overbearing that both Inu Youkai retreated back into the small shelter slamming the doors closed again. Kagome slunk to her knees heaving, one hand over her nose and mouth, the other against her elf like ears, Sesshoumaru was holding onto the wooden huts walls for support, breathing in deeply.
"I never thought that this world would smell so foul" Sesshoumaru added into the silence, taking deep breaths of the musky well house air that was slightly fresher than that of outside, but still just as disgusting.
"Other world?" Kagome voiced, schooling her nausea and finding it better to breathe, but the sounds from outside were still so overpowering. Sesshoumaru opened the doors slightly once again, allowing a crack of sunlight to creep slowly into the darkness of the well house.
"Shut the doors, that smell is disgusting!" Kagome voiced, cupping her nose and mouth for emphasis.
"No, In order to venture out into it, we must become accustomed to the foul odour" He replied, although the gagging reflexes still nipping at his mind.
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After what seemed like an eternity of nasal torture the two Inu Youkai ventured outside into the morning's sun. Not ten feet from them, the Goshinboku stood tall and firm, however the Village of Edo had disappeared.
"where are we?" Kagome asked silently.
The two Inu Youkai turned around sharply as a sword was unsheathed from behind them.
"You…do NOT belong here you deceitful murderous bastard!" A woman in her late forties with cropped brown hair screamed as she lunged at Sesshoumaru with her sword.
"Ningen, who are you, how dare you attack us!" Kagome growled flexing her claws, at this woman who seemed to have a death wish.
"I am Saddakko, Okaa to the daughter in which this bastard murdered, How could you Inuyasha, she loved you!" Kagome stared in shock of this woman, who dared to compare Sesshoumaru to his filthy half-breed brother, who's caked blood stained her hands and face, as she attempted to run Sesshoumaru through.
Sesshoumaru however being a truly skilled warrior disarmed Saddakko in a precise move, leaving her to topple to the ground ungracefully.
"You filthy human know not who you are addressing, This is Lord Sesshoumaru, not that filthy Hanyou, to which he was unfortunately related to" Kagome hissed.
"Lord Sesshoumaru?" Saddakko replied, Sesshoumaru had already left the area, walking towards the shrine once again, the shrine covered with flowers. The centre piece was the bunch of flowers from his gardens, the gardens of eternal life and beauty. Removing the parchment from the bouquet, he pulled apart the silvered ribbon that held it together.
"This Sesshoumaru was the one who informed you of your daughter's tragic demise, the one who dropped these flowers down the well, these flowers that you lay as requested by her shrine"
"Then, my sincerest apologies, I thought you were Inuyasha, and all I wanted to do was kill him, as he killed me and my family" Saddakko replied.
"Though this Sesshoumaru is not one to comment on such an action, it was out of noble cause for you to attack in your misjudgement, If this Sesshoumaru had not scented your daughter on your person as strongly as it is, you would have departed for the netherworld long before you had a moment to draw your sword from its sheath" He responded coolly, as he ran his fingers through his long silken hair.
Kagome stood dumbfounded for a moment, staring at the picture on the shrine, she fingered it lightly, the glass was highlighted in the sun, her reflection playing across the surface, moulding to the picture beneath. She was lost in her own musings, looking at the image of herself without her demonic heritage.
"I don't understand, who is this woman that you bring to my era?" Saddakko voiced, watching the raven haired demoness looking competently at the image of her deceased daughter.
Kagome stood there looking at the image, her hand creeping up to her face, Sesshoumaru stood at her side, looking at her eyes. They were a soft bluish grey, the colour of remembrance and realisation.
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"Kagome, a terrible wrong was committed in which brought you to us, when we send you back it will be your duty to correct this wrong doing. The defiled one, Kikyo must be returned to seven dimensions of hell for her devious acts. Inuyasha will join her there, when and how will be ultimately your choice"
Kagome changed her chain of thoughts.
"I wish to remain the same in appearance my blackened hair, although I've always wanted blue eyes, nothing too different, so my other companions can easily find me, if I had to choose a Youkai - an Inu Youkai would be my choice, to remind me of who did this to me. I would ask for nothing more"
"you chose very little, you are not one to think of yourself. We shall give you all that you've asked, and a few other traits, that we believe necessary, do not fear child, everything you asked for will be given. You are a pure soul, and a pure soul must be saved" the lunar spoke.
"I the Shikon-no-tama, make this wish; a pure soul - saved." Shikon said, lunar and solar sphere's chanted along with Shikon, enveloping Kagome's body within their lights and energies.
"I will remove your pain, your suffering and heartache, you will bestowed with my symbol, the symbol of the lunar. You are an Inu Youkai, your youki and beauty will come from me, you ethereal eyes in the shades of lilacs and blues will be my influence. You are a Youkai of the lunar, and I bless you with your new life"
"I will be your strength, your power, your inner self, I will be your voice of reasoning. I am your inner beast. From me you will inherit; eyes of fire when in anger, heat of passion with your mate. You will retain the scar of the one who burdened you with it, but this will in turn be a consecration, with this I bless you with your new life"
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Kagome's bluish grey eyes twisted and contorted into a rich sapphire, as she twisted her body pulling her hair aside to look at the scar on her back. Saddakko watched this unusual Youkai, and gasped at the scar.
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The ground tore up throwing the earth into the air, as the path of the wind scar approached almost slowly. Kagome cried out, but her own screams were lost to the deafening silence. Her throat muscles strained as she forced out air. Gold fire blinded her, that hot tears fell from her eyes. Shielding her heart from the reality of the truth she turned her back to the wind scar. The ground wrenched beneath her feet, throwing her sideways, a hot razor sliced at her back tearing the pink flesh from her left hip to her right shoulder blade. Akago left her arms disappearing with her blood chilling screams.
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Kagome dropped to her knees her body shaking with wracked sobs, as memories of her life before death flooded to her in waves of laugher, sadness, tears of joy, of pain, of her friends, her crushes, her grandparents, her father, brother and most of all her mother - Saddakko.
Kagome turned her tear streaked face towards Saddakko who was watching curiously, until Kagome stood and hugged her in a blink of an eye, refusing to let go. Sesshoumaru continued to watch what he could not give. Saddakko tried to pry the females hands from around her neck, to push her away.
"Oh mother, I'm so sorry I forgot you" Kagome cried, Saddakko stilled, her heart pounded, then felt as though it had stopped. She looked to Sesshoumaru with her auburn eyes, that were filling with tears, wanting this to be true. Seeing him nod his head in affirmation, Saddakko gripped her tightly, crying into her form.
"I want you to tell me everything…leave nothing out" Saddakko said pulling her daughter to stand with her as she gestured towards the house.
Sesshoumaru followed the Ningen woman and his mate-to-be inside, closing the door behind them, this is what Kagome needed, she needed closure, so did her mother.
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Sorry It took soo Long to write and Post this chapter, but my muse had sprouted wings and flown away. It has taken me a lot to write this, as there have been moments when I felt like giving up, and ending the story on the last chapter that you had read. But after much deliberation, to write this chapter. I'm not overly impressed by it, So i ask that if there was something that seemed wrong, or astray with it please do let me know, be critical and honest in your review. Then I can look at it, and change aspects of this story to make it right again.
Once again without Angel of the crescent moon, Kelly and Juusan'ya to whom gave me a signed review and offering me ideas on where to take this chapter I thank-you all from the bottom of my heart, and hope that this was good enough in your views, I look forwards to reading your reviews, to see if there is anything that you want to delete or change from this chapter.
Kindest thanks - Callie Yue Sesshy-s plaything