If you want to know why I updated so late, blame my Honor's classes teachers next year. The kept having meetings and getting to know us early...blah blah blah
By the way I made it into the special orchastra for more advanced players I auditioned for! YAY!
BlackKeys96~Haha, I know right? I totally agree that Caspian should be grateful, but that would ruin the story
ninja-currey-girl ~ Chapter four? uhhh ok, I know I LOVE PHILLIP! What an awesome horse :-) Caspian IS a goody-goody! Draco Malfoy...I can see it! Draco is my fav. character from Harry Potter :-)
AlwaysABrandNewDay~Goodness, we haven't talked in a while! Thanks! Chapter 14 I agree I'm proud of! That rock joke must be pretty funny...Well here are the clues at the end...
EdFan~ Yay! I'm glad it is! I think Eustace's performance was the best in Voyage of the Dawn Treader! The Lord...well I agree :-) Thanks! I spent a while on the Eustace and Aslan scene. I wanted to give Eustace a little more fight... trust me it's coming up :-)
EdmundPevensie for evermore~ I know! Go Eustace! I don't like Jill very much either, but apparently a lot of people like her...I don't see why. That's okay! I understand. Will Poulter did an AWESOME job, he was exactly as I visioned Eustace. Favorite chapter? Just WIATTT!
GildorInglorion~ You got lucky! I almost updated before you left your review! Only seen VDT ONCE! Wow, I've seen it seven times! (But I own it...) Reepicheep the violent mouse...sadly it has a ring to it...hahaha. Narniaweb? I've seen it, but you can make accounts? I should get one! I will really need your help on that cross-over and I'm sure people don't want to read about it till it's done. And I don't want anyone to steal my ideas...
dbd823~ I got your review don't worry! I almost missed it though... Hmmm, I don't know why it won't let you review. Strange. No she did not stab Eustace, she faked it to get a reaction out of him, and to cause fear. Thanks though! Hmmm, that is a weird idea. He did think of the Witch and she shows up...but she never comes to life like the sea serpent. PLOT HOLE IN THE MOVIE! Hahaha. It was school related, but I guess it could be counted as a vacation. Thanks!
CrazyDyslexicNerd~ Already reviewed? Gah, stupid review thingie. Your not the only one. Thanks!
P.S. Glad you could make it! We shall begin Africia bright and early tomorrow morning.
P.P.S A lampost? Have you ever gone lampost tipping? It's fun! You find a flashing one, and you try to beat your friend by running up to it tagging it and running back before it flashes back on. Whoever does that the fastest wins. My friend and I ran across a street to play it with a flashing lampost across from my house, we got in trouble for running across the street in the middle of the night though. If your on your own, you can time yourself. Nerdy huh?
CLUE TIME! What's my favorite chapter that I'm going to post in this story? It's actually a few chapters away!
Clue 3
"Once a king or queen of Narnia always"
Clue 4
"Book 6, Chapter 3 Paragraphs 48-51" The Name is Useless.
IN ALL YOU HAVE
1, Eustace 2, A coronataion 3, Once a king or queen of Narnia always 4, Useless DO YOU KNOW WHAT IT IS?
Chapter Twenty-One ~~~ Edmund-sickle For A Beast
"PULL; PUT YOUR BACK INTO IT!" Reepicheep cried with his shrill voice to the crew members as the sea serpent screeched just on the other side of the ship. The men were relentless to the oars that bond them to their life. If they couldn't get the ship out of the infernal darkness of the island, no one would ever be able to.
With a loud wail, so loud many men covered their ears in pain, the monster from Edmund's head approached closer to the Dawn Treader. With a roaring splash of sea water that covered the deck, the serpent sailed over the ship and dived into the water on the other side.
Lucy did not know what the beast was attempting to do, but there was something else on her mind. A small girl who happened to be in the middle of the fight, named Gael. Ever since Gael had joined the ship after the Lone Islands, Lucy had felt personally responsible for her safety and well-being. In horror, the queen realized she was the only one who was able to do something before Gael got seriously hurt or lost in the salty liquid below.
"Gael, COME ON! This way!" She shouted over the cracking of the vessel they stood on. She tugged on the terrified female, and dragged her below. At least she would be safer down there then up on top where the fighting was happening.
The creature was wrapping itself around the Dawn Treader a second time, causing men to jump left in right in shock, or for men to jump to push another out of harm's way. Caspian ran making sure that no one was hurt, but only to see Edmund struggling to keep out of the sea serpents way.
Men trying to lock the luggage and prepare cannons were thrown back, as the sides of the ship started to give to the weight of the monster. Water was now everywhere, and it was difficult to tell what was ocean and what was ship.
Edmund was having the most trouble. For some reason, he seemed to be the only passenger on board who was freezing to death. Making it hard for him to pay attention to the larger threat at hand. He breathed on his hands for some heat, only to have water splash on him again to make him cold.
"It's that entire bloody Witch's fault! I never had a normal temperature since I ate that poisoned food of the devil…" Edmund complained under his breath, as he nearly got jammed into the rail of the ship.
Gael gave a scream as things in the once beautiful room went flying past her head. Lucy tugged her along and thrust her desperate next to the bed in a crouching position, then turned and searched the room.
There it was…
Grabbing Susan's bow she paused for a half-a-second. Would her sister mind that she was using her gift? It was too late to worry about something like that she decided, and turned back to Gael.
"Now you stay here in till someone comes and gets you, okay?"
Without waiting for an answer she rushed out of the room.
Everything was starting to get awfully blurry as Edmund's eyes started to water from the cold he felt. He was trapped between the serpents body, with nowhere to go. Trying to shake the feelings off, he heard Caspian shout to him.
"Ed, Ed! We'll ram the serpent, smash him on the rocks!" He shouted over the fury of battle.
You doubt him Edmund; it would be easier to abandon ship…
Frustrated Edmund gritted his teeth and visualized Caspian's plan. He turned back to the other king and replied,
"Steer her to port, I'll keep it on the prow!" He shook his head again, and realized his blurry eyes made him only think he was trapped. Pushing his way through the wreckage, he heard men call out to each other.
"Look out!"
Edmund raced up the stairs, but a small tingling of tiredness was starting to grasp his body. There was no possible way he was sick! Edmund groaned, this was going to be awful.
Lucy emerged on deck to look over the deck, a sudden jolt lead her to realize that there was practically no deck left to see. She made sure the arrows in their quiver were safely secured on her back and she tore up the steps in alarm. To her left she watched her older brother attempting to crawl up to the prow; unable to ask what he was up to she gave only a few seconds to watch.
He looked horrible, like he used to when he lay in bed with the flu. She remembered as a little girl walking up to him…
"Eddie!" A small joyful girl called, it was six in the morning and she was excited. Her older brother was up and making noises, so she came to the conclusion he must be up to play. She reached up to the handle and stood on her tip-toes just to grasp it. Just above her head was a large sign printed in un-even letters that read "Lucy Keep Out At All Tymes!" Times had been misspelled, and appeared the writer of the sign didn't seem to care.
Finally managing to open the door, she burst into a very dark room.
"Ugh! Who is that? Go away!" A weak annoyed voice cried, who was none other than Edmund Pevensie. Walking up to the bed, she peered over the pillows to see a ghost in her brother's bed. Lucy never understood her dark-haired brother, but having a ghost in his bed was horrifying. With a scream, she leapt back and ran for the open door. She bumped into something quite solid, only to see it was Peter, her other older brother. Peter was ten years old, and quite proud of his age. Peter walked into the room, with Lucy at his heels, and waited for Peter to yelp and run with her.
He didn't.
Instead he began to laugh,
"Poor Ed, not feeling well are you?"
His answer was a mouth-full of pillow. Chuckling Peter replied to the rude comment,
"I'll get mum,"
"You get mum, and I'll mUrDer… you!" A hoarse and funny voice yelped.
"Ungrateful little git…" Peter muttered, as he turned out in the hall and turned the light on.
Lucy peered over the covers again, only to realize the ghost was really her brother. His eyes were watery, and he was nearly was white as the sheets he lay on top of. The tip of his nose was red like he had been rubbing it severely before she had come in. His mop of brown hair was damp from his sweating, and he glared up at Lucy.
"Go away!" He yelped.
"But Edmund, we want to help," She replied.
"I don't want your help…"
Edmund looked the same way she remembered, she wanted to help him but she just couldn't. She gave a sigh, and kept climbing.
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Reepicheep on the other hand, was still attempting to encourage the crew. However, he seemed to be more of getting on their nerves then helping.
"Foreword! Come on, pull!"
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The youngest Pevensie boy dropped out on the tongue of the dragon painted on the Dawn Treader. Still suffering from whatever he had, he felt quite accomplished. The only problem was how to keep the dragon on the prow…
His electric torch glistened in the water that coated it, and it hit him. He yanked the silver object off his belt and switched it on. Swinging the beam of light over the sea serpent's face he prepared for it to come at him. Rising to full height, and irritated at the fact he couldn't see, the creature turned towards the source of the light. A boy…
"Try and kill me, come on! Come on, I'm here!" Edmund shouted, luckily his voice was fine.
It will kill you Edmund, give up! Give up!
The serpent seemed to be listening to the voice in his head more than he was, as it lunged for him. Next thing Edmund knew, he was looking down the monster's throat, and he did not like what he saw. I violent shiver ran down his body, and Edmund swore he heard himself yell. The teeth of the monster were right around his body, and all it had to do was chomp down and he was gone.
"NO!" Lucy cried, as she watched the sea serpent drive its teeth in the place she saw her brother lie. It would be bloody and heart-shattering to see Edmund pulled from her like that.
"EDMUND!" Caspian joined in, as he watched the monster pull away and start chewing the wood. What if the younger king was inside that wood? He thought in panic, a paralyzed feeling froze him in place as he watched the teeth move up and down.
Then there was movement on the prow, and he nearly missed it. Edmund was climbing out of the mouth alive!
Edmund gripped the top of what was left of the dragon, and grunted in pain. He was tired and exhausted from trying to get out of the serpents path of destruction. He felt dizzy and his head was killing him, literally. Climbing around on the dragon's head Edmund turned and shouted to the beast in his loudest voice,
"I'm still here!'
Lucy raised Susan's bow and remembered the famous words that came with it, "Trust in this bow, and it will not easily miss,"
The queen released the tension on the string, and watched the red tipped feathers…
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"Ungrateful, useless, unwanted FOOL!" The witch screamed into Eustace's face with anger. She was screaming at the top of her lungs, and the witch brought the sword above her head.
Eustace had to think fast.
Ducking his head, he ran head first towards the Witch's stomach, and with all his weight he tackled her. Knowing full well she had a sharp object in hand.
Hey, by the way if you want a really fun Narnia remix of the Battle song, try this,
http:/ www. youtube .com /watch?v= 1X5MWu05psI&NR =1 Just remove spaces
give it 2 minutes and then it gets good! CHEERIO CHAPS :-) Review?