Allies

by 11mrp11

Monkey D. Luffy dreams of finding the One Piece and becoming the King of the Pirates. Follow him and his crew on their struggles through the oceans of the world. Of course, he always has back up with in the form of his new ally, who also happens to be an aspiring pirate captain. Rated M for Later and Safety. Pairings can change.

21. Chapter 03: Responses and Other

Chapter 0.3: Response and Other

Yo, sorry for doing another one of these, but this is a response to the two reviews I got, and some more information and questions for all readers. First of All, I'd like to thank you two for taking your time to comment. Hope you two don't mind me using your usernames as to avoid confusion:

MasamuneDaymo: Thanks, I hope it'll continue as good as it's going! Hopefully will get to that in the next... well 5... 10? Who knows how many chapters until Logue town. All of my chapters range around from 1000 to 2000, and it takes a few chapters usually to get through some of the Arcs. We'll see, and I'm glad my grammar isn't too bad, I'm not the best, but I try.

NotThatGuyAlpha: I'm glad you like it. I try not to rush, but the words sometimes write themselves, so I just spit them out on this site. Glad you think the parings are good, I don't have any plans at the moment to change them, I'm just leaving it open to flexibility in the beginning. I feel like one piece isn't getting a lot of LuRo fics, but a lot of Yaoi. I myself don't read those types of fics, but they are obviously popular. Alvida is someone that barely appears in fan fictions, and has been in like 3 episodes in the anime? I don't know much about the manga, I'm not big on Manga. Hopefully the last two chapters I added a little more descriptiveness, I'll try and improve on that as I'm working on these. Thanks for the input!

Now for some Questions for anyone willing to answer. How are you guys? I've been throwing these out like crazy, and I hope they are fun to read. Are the OC's okay? I'm actually short on male one piece characters that could join Marx's crew, not OC's but characters. I have an idea for one or two, but not nearly enough. I plan on Marx's crew to be the same size as Luffy's crew, and approximately as powerful. The power balance is going to be a little off below Luffy and Marx.

I have a lot of plans for the future, and hope they help the story. Anyways, are you all fine with no AN in chapters with story in it? I feel like it sort of takes away from the story if I put it in the chapters, at least this way when you see the 0# chapters you know that it's a non story update... I actually should talk about that. So, the chapters that are info based, and AN-y are the ones with 0 and then number after. Like this shows up as chapter 03. Periods don't actually appear in chapter titles it seems, so that's why it's not 0.3 like in the actually chapter itslelf.

Anyways, I'd be happy to listen to any of your Ideas, I know I'm being repetitive, but comments on my style, characters, and such are always helpful. Positive or negative. I want to develop a path for the future of how this story is going to go, and I can make it more enjoyable if I can hear what a lot of people want to read. Anyways, thanks for all your support, and hope to read from y'all again.