I decided to redo chapter 21. I like this one better and so did Alyssa the Twilight Lover. I had her read it and she did a great job with the mistakes that I had. She also gave me the idea of the civil war. So a big thanks to her. I hope you all like this on as much as the last on. But hopefully more. Again, this is a NEW chapter 21. I re did it because I liked it better. So if it doesnt make sense PM me and I will explain better, if needed.