CH – 21 A Major Step Towards Life!
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My apologies to everyone, because of my 12th science going on so I don't have enough time to write my story, so every chapter will be uploaded in two or three days.
In this chapter new team seven . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Check to find out.
Minato and Kushina are going to be . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Check to find out.
* *And sorry to say that I don't own Naruto and tried to say it before but was not able to say.* *
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"WHO KNOWS NARUTO UZUMAKI…PERHAPS….EVEN I AM SOME DAY "My thoughts
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"Old man, what happened? Wake up" Naruto tried to wake up an old man who was just thrown out of the road side bar shop.
"Hey kid take that old man somewhere else, my shop is closing now" The shop keeper shouted.
'How rude' Naruto thought.
He then herd that this old man was getting up, so he helped him to stand. That Old guy was Drunk and he looked at Naruto and Narrowed his face. But he got distracted when Naruto asked him "I think you drank too much, let me help you, I will drop your house, just guide me there"
He nodded.
Naruto finally reached the apartment and finds his room and dropped him in there. He was about to leave but he stopped and asked the sleeping old man "you stay alone"
He nodded.
"C-Can I-I please stay here for few days please" Naruto requested.
That old man again nodded which made Naruto to smile. He changed his cloths and sleep on the floor. He took his jacket as a blanket and closed his eyes.
"I am sorry but this is the path I closed"
He thought and slowly started to cry and went to unpleasant sleep.
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Sasuke, Hinata and Itachi arrived back to the village with bad news. Hinata was the one who cried the most. Kushina did nothing, nothing means nothing, and she just went black. She wasn't displaying any movements.
She wasn't sleeping not listening to anyone. Minato told Itachi to use Sharingan to make Kushina to sleep. He did as he was told. Sasuke cursed himself for not being strong enough, if he might have been strong as his big brother is, he might have defeated those traitors and Naruto might not have to leave the village, but he promised himself that he will sure bring Naruto back no matter what.
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Last night Naruto was successfully able to escape from the leaf village. He finds a town where at night he finds an old guy who was drunk and he helps him to reach his apartment where the old man took in rent to live there for few days because of his research.
After asking for the permission, Naruto was able to spend last night there with him.
At morning,
Old man was first to wake up and surprises to see something familiar.
"I think I saw him somewhere" he scratches his back and finally glanced at the photo Naruto was Holding.
He slowly took that photo from him and find "What in the world is he doing here" he thought "Naruto!"
He waked him up. Naruto wakes up and glanced at the old guy who was holding his family photo.
"Hey, give that photo back to me" Naruto yelled at him and tried to take his picture back but that guy stopped him "Why are you here, Naruto?"
Naruto was shocked, he didn't knew who this guy was but how could he knows him. "I'm not Naruto" he shuttered while Jiraiya punched him in his head and shouted "You Idiot, whom you are making fool. I am your god father"
"Hey you mean you are perv Jiraiya who peeks in women's bath room" Naruto asked while he scratched his head while he remembered his mom once told him about this guy.
"No! I mean I'm not perv. I'm Jiraiya the legendary sannin." Jiraiya answered him trying to look great in front of this kid instead of being called as pervert.
While he was going to ask one more thing to Naruto but he stopped when Naruto sadly looked down. Naruto was thinking "So everything I did finally went into vein. Now he will leave me back to the village"
Jiraiya suddenly realized something was wrong, so he asked him "What brings you here, Naruto" with clearly showing care in his voice.
Naruto looked at him with sad look and told him "I left the village"
Jiraiya felt a shock at his spine when he herd Naruto saying this, he looked at him seriously and asked again "Why you left your family and the village"
"I will tell you but you need to promise that you won't tell father that you found me" Naruto said to him.
"I can't promise that but if the reason is strong enough then I will look for its solution." Jiraiya said while rubbing his chain.
Naruto nodded and started to tell what brings him here.
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As they went on the middle path which was fully covered by the forest, there they encountered 7 Lightning Village Jonins.
Naruto, Sasuke and Hinata pulled out their kunai's ready for the battle.
"I thought this mission was supposed to be C-rank" Sasuke smirked.
"Yeah I too but now it turns to be B-rank" Naruto added.
"Huh, B-rank. This kids considers us to be a B-rank enemy" the fatty jonin said.
"They sure don't know who we are" another jonin said.
"Don't get in our way, or it won't go good for you all" Sasuke said.
"Brats hand us the kid of yellow flash and the rest will be allowed to go back"
The whole team 7 was shocked their eyes were widen 'they are after me' 'so they are after brother Naruto' 'they are Naruto'
Sasuke Then full with rage in his voice ordered the merchants to get away for them. Then they started their battle.
Seeing the destruction and death the merchant's had brought in only the short while, Hinata paled. Those Jonins brought down team 7 and was asking "who is the child of fourth Hokage"
They were tied with ropes and was crumbled on ground.
Naruto was already raged with anger; seeing the innocent merchants killed right before his eyes and he wasn't able to do anything and the reason they were killed was Naruto himself. One came at Naruto and started to hit him on his head, "Tell us, who is Fourth's brat" he then pushed his leg on Naruto head very hard that made him scream in pain.
"Leave him" Sasuke shouted in anger. "No Naruto" Hinata paled.
Sasuke was also lost in his anger and was panting high. They all were at their limits and was already tied, so what else they could do. Then one of the jonin went near Hinata and tried to lick her face but he stopped and looked at Naruto and told him "tell or let this girl die". Hinata let some tears fall.
The Images of Dead merchants were just roaming in head and now seeing Hinata cry. He growled in anger with completely different voice "Back off" he then pushed his leg up while clearly showing his anger but his eyes were no longer blue. Both, Sasuke and Hinata look at Naruto with shock. Naruto took everyone's attention at him.
His face was torn apart by a feral rage unlike any she had seen before. That jonin who was pushing his leg on Naruto's head, just jumped back in fear and with trembling voice he said "Those eyes, the Nine-Tailed fox"
Sasuke and Hinata both widens their eyes, Sasuke Thought "This isn't looking good, I must hurry" he said and secretly pulled out a kunai and started cut Hinata's ropes.
"We found him, let's take him to the Raikage" As he said and was about to punch Naruto, he vanished with the speed of light.
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"After that everything went blank, and when I was brought back to sense by Hinata" Naruto Continued
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Arms were ripped from the torsos they were attached to. Heads were severed. Organs torn out.
He was brought back to his sense and was terrified at the scene of dead jonin's who were now just turned into open flesh and a farm of organs with tree as heads.
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"Then I decided that this Nine-tails is also a threat to my beloved family, so I will go away from them so they can leave in peace"
"Hmm" Jiraiya nodded. He looked at Naruto who almost started to shed some tears after that.
Jiraiya had a smile and thought "He took a major step towards his life, I hope Minato understands this"
"Naruto" Jiraiya called. Naruto looked up "um"
"How are you goanna solve this problem" Jiraiya asked him.
"I will stay away from my family so atlas they can be safe" Naruto answered him.
Jiraiya thought with smirk "He haven't matured yet"
"And you think your family won't try to find you" Jiraiya told him.
"I will stay away, as much I can" Naruto answered him.
"How childish you're Naruto? Are you underestimating your father's skills? He will find you within two days" Jiraiya said.
"Then what should I do. I don't want the Nine-Tails to go on a rampage and kill my loved once" Naruto once again told him. Before could Jiraiya could tell him something, he said "I will kill myself before that."
He again punched him in his head. "Hey stop hitting me" Naruto yelled.
"You know, how deep your parents loves you. Kushina she will too kill herself if she herds that you died" Jiraiya this time with harsh tone. He remembered the night, after some days of the Nine-Tails attack, where he first meet Naruto who was just 7 days old. He remembered what Kushina said, that she will kill herself if something happens to Naruto.
Naruto widens his eyes, finally realised that he was indirectly was going to kill his family if he kills himself. So with the proper question, he asked Jiraiya "I know. The Nine-Tail is so strong that my father struggled against him. I don't know what I should do but . . ."
Before he could continue further, Jiraiya said in between "You need to control it"
"Control it. How is it even possible to control this powerful beast" Naruto said with a shock when herd this from Jiraiya.
"It's hard but not impossible." He said with smile which add Naruto to have little hope.
"You mean . . . you …." Naruto shuttered.
Jiraiya nodded and told him "I will help you to become stronger and help you to have the control over the Nine-Tails"
He looked shocked but one more thing hit his mind "Yeah I am happy but will you until help me to keep myself hiding until I control the Nine-Tails"
"You can count on that" Jiraiya re-assured him.
"But what if they comes here" Naruto once again asked him.
"I already have a Jutsu which is used for infiltration and it's called a special transformation Jutsu which only few people know." Jiraiya said.
Naruto with some hope asked "So how much time it will take to master the power of Nine-Tails"
"It will take a lot of years" Jiraiya said
"Oh I see" Naruto murmured and looked down again. Jiraiya understood what actually he meant, so he said to Naruto "Don't worry I will even give you chance to meet your family indirectly"
"Really?"
He nodded.
"Um thanks." Naruto said while he wiped tears.
"But we can do this even by telling your family Naruto" Jiraiya asked him.
"You know Mom really well right. So she will never allow me to take some kind of risk which is this serious?" Naruto answered him.
"Yeah you are right at this. If I tell Minato, he will sure tell Kushina because he won't be able to see Kushina crying" He said and puts his hand on Naruto's head "You sure have taken a major step towards your future Naruto. We will start our training from today"
He Nodded.
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A lot of weeks went, Minato found Jiraiya and Naruto but he was not able to notice Naruto because he hides him and the ultimate Transformation Jutsu made Naruto to look complete different. Minato told Jiraiya the same thing which Naruto already told him. So Minato requested to Jiraiya to inform him if he finds Naruto somewhere then please inform him. Jiraiya promised him but it was a fake promise.
Naruto now looked like. He had brown hairs, yellow eyes. His foxy checks were gone. This transformation was not ordinary. It changed every single detail on the body that no matter how great or intelligent the shinobi might be but still he can't identify it as a transformation. His voice was the same but little different. Only close people can think this voice is similar to Naruto.
They began their training with combat tactics and the new Jutsu "The Rasengan" the Jutsu which required fourth Hokage years for perfecting it.
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Everyday every week, Kushina was getting unstable. Her mental condition was disturbed; her precious son left, was the reason.
Everyday Itachi required to force Kushina while controlling with the Sharingan to force her to eat. She was so lost.
Same was with Hinata she was lost, her love was lost. She cried every day. And every day she went to meet Kushina. And on some day she finds Naruto's Diary.
She starts reading it and find's a lot of thoughts written by Naruto.
As for Sasuke, he blamed himself; he thought that if he were little stronger he might have able to defeat those traitors so Naruto might not have to leave. Also he knew that; whenever he finds Naruto, he need to bring him by the force. So he started his training with Kakashi. While Hinata, After reading Some pages of Naruto's dairy, she thinks that she should not leave the hope and one thought which really hit her mind was written by Naruto in his dairy. She specially requested her father for a harsh training. She was able to perform really well against her father every time, which impressed him. He knew the reason behind the sudden change in Hinata, it was Naruto. She was getting stronger and stronger with her every try, she will get even stronger, and her strength grow a lot faster and faster. She gave herself a word which she pledge to follow unless it's done.
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Jiraiya and Naruto Started to travel town to town for his research on the Akatsuki but Naruto judge him differently because whenever he accidently saw Jiraiya, he was always peeping into women's bath room. So he named him "Pervy sage" which Jiraiya never liked to be called like that, especially not in public.
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Training for the Rasengan last step, a book of the hero.
Naruto was able to master all the steps but he was not able to do the final step. He tried it for almost a week but still it was not completing, so he even worked twice harder than before. Slowly but truly he was losing his will to master that Jutsu which required his father almost 3 years. Jiraiya closely watched everything, he thought that maybe this will work.
One Night while Naruto was training, Jiraiya sets the camp for both of them. He called Naruto to have some rest but he insisted to train. But Jiraiya told him that he have something special which will decide his future. Naruto at first got confused but went to him.
Jiraiya gives him the book named "The tails of the Gusty Ninja"
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After reading that book Naruto felt a lot of his confidence coming back. Also at the end of the book, he found that he was the hero in this book and it was inspired by some kind of guy named Nagato. His thoughts were same to the book. He started his training again at the late night. But this time he was more confident than before. He needed to master this Jutsu as much as fast as possible. He also needed to master his combat tactics with the new Jutsu's Jiraiya was going to teach him after the Rasengan.
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Next time Three months' time skip. Naruto will be a lot stronger and don't forget that Hinata and Sasuke too.
Next time return to the leaf village.
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Next chapter: - hint – Who is that guy?
1) Chunin Exams.
2) Menma okiri.
3) But why Pervy sage?
Preview towards the new Chapter. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
"Why Pervy sage?" Naruto
"I need to see how strong you have become" Jiraiya
"But what if they notices me." Naruto
"No they won't, you just need to act different" Jiraiya
"What brings you here Master Jiraiya" Minato
"I have new student, Menma Okiri." Jiraiya
"I see, so did you find Naruto" Minato
"No haven't seen any traces of him" Jiraiya
"So why did you brought this guy here" Minato
"I need to take Chunin exams from the leaf village" Menma
"It will be proud for us. I have a team which is incomplete. I want you to join them" Minato
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2) The remaining part will be continued tomorrow guys and there will be no time skip, I will continues it from here . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
3) What do you think how was the chapter and sorry for the short chapter . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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