Hey Everyone! I finished Breaking Dawn and am just curious to see what everyone else thinks about it so tell me what you thought!

Last time...

Emmett held me before he glanced at Rosalie. We needed to get out of here. I knew that. What I didn't know was how to get out of here.

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Jasper's POV.

I followed Alice, not wanting to let her out of my sight. Who knows what Barbas is planning. She walked into a dark room before I looked over, trying to spot her. I made my way over to the room and stopped, Alice was gone. I looked around quickly. Searching for her.

"Alice?" I yelled.

Oh no, what if Barbas had her? What if he was going to torture her. That could be terrible!

"Alice!" I yelled searching the wall with my hands.

"Jasper please! Help me!" I heard her scream.

"Alice where are you?! Alice?!" I screamed.

This was not good, this was not good at all! I heard a voice and turned around quickly.

"Jasper. We meet at last..."

Looking around with my eyes I tried to spot the person behind the voice, but couldn't find anyone.

"Jasper...You know who I am..."

A gasp escaped my lips as recognition dawned on me.

"Barbas!" I hissed.

"Very good."

"What do you want from me! What the Hell do you want with me? With my family? And, what are you doing to my wife?!" I screamed.

"Dear Jasper...Dear dear Jasper. Follow me...You will have your answers. I have a special surprise for you. Come on..."

"No! Go to hell!" I screamed, looking around.

"Now Jasper... that's not nice...You want answers, I have them. Do you ever want to see darling Alice again?"

"That's cheep!" I screamed, but knew I was caving.

"Alice needs you Jasper. She's in danger. Come this way. Follow my voice."

I stared back at the room I was in. Could I trust him? I didn't, I had a terrible feeling about all this. But Alice needed me. My whole family did. I took a deep breath and began to follow the voice.

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Carlisle's POV.

I gripped Esme's hand as I walked forward, searching around the room for any proof of a way out. I couldn't see any. I sighed and glanced back at Esme.

"I wonder where they are." I said, cautiously looking around.

"I hope their alright. I'm so worried." Esme whispered.

I sighed, I was too. My children were missing, of course I was worried. I glanced at the wooden door strait ahead of us before looking at Esme.

"Well are you ready to keep going? Or should we take a break?" I asked, my thumb rubbing circles in her hand.

"We have to keep going, sooner or later we will find them. Hopefully it's sooner." Esme said, gripping my hand.

I nodded in agreement before I followed Esme to the door. It opened with a creak, protesting its job. Esme sighed as she realised this was another dead in. I groaned and let my head fall into my hands. We were never going to get out of this. I groaned and held her hand tighter. This was just getting worse. We were going to be getting thirsty soon, which put Bella, Paige and Henry in danger. We had limited time. Sighing I followed Esme to her spot on the box.

"Carlisle we really need to get out of here. How long have we been down here?" Esme wondered.

"I'm not sure. But you're right. We need to get out of here before we start to get thirsty." I said.

"I hadn't even thought of that...Oh Carlisle, what do we do?" Esme asked.

"We find away out of here and we kill Barbas." I whispered.

"Why? What's the point Carlisle? I just want this to be over with." Esme whispered.

"Esme we have to kill him for what he's done to our family." I said. "And just because it would make me feel better."

She grinned at me before looking around the room.

"What if we went backwards? Maybe we can see what way they went?" Esme suggested.

"Why not. I really don't see this going anywhere." I said standing up.

"Why not Carlisle?" I heard a voice behind us.

I spun around gasping. My father stood at the door of the room, a lighter flicking on and off in his fingers.

"Don't you recognise me Carlisle?"

"How? How is this possible."

"It doesn't matter. I can't believe what I see in front of me."

"What?" I asked, taken back by his tone.

"You're pathetic. After all I did to kill them and my own son is one. A disgusting Vampire." He hissed.

"Dad I..."

"No. I am not your father. You're a monster Carlisle."

I realised now that a sob escaped my lips.

"No...I'm not! I try...I try so hard..."

"It does not matter. You are a horrible blood thirsty Vampire. You and your whole family. Even that woman you call your wife."

I hissed at him.

"How dare you say that about her! You've never met her! And, I bet you're just one of Barbas's stupid illusions!" I screamed.

"Think what you want Carlisle. You're dead to me." He whispered, rage in his eyes.

Another sob escaped my lips before I could stop it. He gave me a sick grin before flicking the lighter again.

"Good-bye, you monster." He whispered before throwing the lit lighter at me.

I screamed as the fire connected with my clothes, trying to put it out. My father stood there, smiling at me.

"Carlisle! What is it? Carlisle! Talk to me! Please! It's just a vision, it's an illusion! I promise! You will be fine! It's all fake! None of it is true!" Esme screamed.

I screamed as the fire licked at my cold skin but let her words sink in. It wasn't real. It wasn't real. I was safe. My wife was with me. My dad is dead. None of this is real. None of this is real.

The fire disappeared and I collapsed into Esme's waiting arms.

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Okay guys tell me what you think! I won't update until I get 5 REVIEWS so if you want the next chapter you have to REVIEW! Suggestions, questions, comments on what you like are all welcome!

So how did I do with Carlisle's fear? He was one of the hard ones to come up with something so I hope i did it right.

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