Disclaimer: Stephenie Meyer owns everything Twilight. yada,yada...you've heard it all before.
Any who, I recently had a review...the longest review I've ever seen...of some questions and concerns. I thought maybe I should post it with the story just encase anyone else had the same questions and concerns. Let me start off by saying, I really appreciate you taking the time to review and ask your questions, and in a nice way was amazing, so thanks. This is for...Bubblegumblues.
Question 1: Why didn't someone stop the Nessie and Shawn thing in the lunch room? Well it's because Alice had seen blood coming and wanted to get the vampires out of the cafe. The pack couldn't help because they had to keep Jake cool and if they tried anything they would turn into wolves...which obviously can't happen.
Question 2: When Holly's mom wanted to see Nessie's parents. Who are Nessie's parents? Carlisle and Esme are "playing" Nessie's parents in disguise as you said. Bella and Edward her actual parents; "play" her siblings when around humans.
Question 3: Why is Nessie aggressive? Well Nessie's aggressive because that's how I want her to be. I know she would naturally be sweet and innocent in real "twilight life" but I wanted her to have an edge. Do things I wish I had the courage to do, be a badass.
Question 4: Aren't Ness and Jake a little too close? Well...nope. I figured they're teenagers and are supernatural so they should have fun! Be reckless...Be...sexual. And remember Nessie is in 8th grade and physically 15, however mentally she's 17/18. Bottom line is she's ready and able to be in that type of relationship with Jake.
Question 5: Do jocks just grab attractive girls butts? hahaha, no. Usually in movies the football players or jocks always play the bully or the guy who gets the girls, the cocky type guy; so i was just playing off that. I know for a fact that all boys who play sports are not all rude and coincided.
Question 6: Do people really treat their teachers like this in America? Well depends on the school you go to and what the community is like but typically no. We treat our teachers respectfully, or at least I do.
I forgot that fanfiction was worldwide so people from other countries and what not may get the wrong impression on what America is like or may be confused with some of the things being said and what not, for that I'm sorry. I don't really know how to fix that but to say ask questions. Btw Bubblegumblues stated something else regarding writing a story that I do my own thing. My answer to that is: i have a lot of ideas in my head for my own thing but it's just hard to write down. Ya know? well if i ever decide to write something completely on my own, excluding fanfiction as well, I'll let you know. You never know i could be a best selling author some day. Hah, yeah right.
In summary, I wanted to thank you for your review. I'm really glad your enjoying the story and wanted to take the time to write to me as to what your concerns were while reading. If I didn't fully answer your questions please ask again I want to make sure I got it right.
For those who don't give a flying fuck as to what I'm talking about...please enjoy the following update(:
QPOV (Quil)
What the fuck!?
Is that MY Claire wearing the sexiest black tango dress, heels that showed off her gorgeous legs, and dancing…with HIM.
Him as in a teenage boy, Him as in male, Him as in a guy about to get his ass kicked.
I can't believe this shit!
I look over and see Nessie on the stage, playing the music and purposely avoiding looking over this way.
This is whys she was being so weird earlier; she had this whole fucking plan. But what I can't figure out is why.
What reason is behind them doing this? What did I do?
It had to be something that took place today; but what?
All I did was participate in the hot dog eating contest, I won that. She ran off with Nessie…
Okay stop Quil and think! This is where something had to have happened. I finished eating first, then stood on the table doing a victory dance, some girls walked up to me and I mooched off the attention…
Awhhh shit! The Girls! Claire hates it when I surround myself with girls. But it wasn't entirely fault…
Okay it was.
However that's no excuse for doing something like this. Come on? It's a little over board.
I mean seriously? Dancing with some guy! What the fuck!
I turn my head to look at everyone else's reaction. The vamps are in shock. My pack is looking at me like a ticking time bomb. Excluding Jake, he's staring intently at Nessie willing her to look at him. I bet he's pissed, she lied to him too, her imprint. Regardless of her reasons, I'm sure it still hurts.
I turn my attention back to the situation at hand; A boy dancing with my girl.
He was keeping somewhat of a distance before but apparently now he wants to get into it.
Well like hell I'm gonna let this continue.
I rise faster than a normal human could, and jump down the side of the bleachers. I sneak my way forward to the center of the gym.
RPOV (Renesmee/Nessie)
I can tell that Jake is trying to get me to look at him.
I can't do it.
I know he's pissed with me and by me not looking at him is only making him angrier and/or sad.
I love him…but it's a girl thing. I have to do this for Claire.
To try and distract myself from Jake's gaze; I look back at Claire and Justin dancing.
…{wait for it}…
Is that Quil?!
Dammit!
I get up and run towards the fire alarm and pull down.
The gym erupts into screams of terror. The administrators are trying to maintain order but the students are just running over them trying to get out the nearest exit.
I run into the center of the gym pushing pass the frightened students and jump in front of Justin.
By now the last few students were leaving the gym and it was about to be just my family and I.
Damn that was fast…all you have to do is give humans something to run for and they run like cheetahs. A thought to save for later.
Quil was growling and growing angrier by the minute.
Justin was still touching Claire.
"Justin let go. What the hell did I tell you? You don't fucking listen. Let go and run." I yelled at him.
He immediately let go and was out the gym in about 6 heartbeats.
"What the hell?!" Quil yelled/growled at us.
"What the hell is your problem? Why are you growling? You know exactly why I did this." Claire hissed back in reply.
My eyes went wide. Probably not wise to further piss off an already pissed werewolf.
"You're right I do know why, but was THAT really necessary. I would have…should have, killed the boy!", Quil yelled.
"Kill him for what?!Dancing with me?! He was just being nice! Was I able to kill all the fucking girls that were all over you!?", She yelled back.
"UGHHH!" ,Was the last recognizable sound to come from Quil.
He had gone wolf.
Just fucking great!
He growled at both of us.
I went to stand beside Claire and pulled her a little bit away from Quil.
"Quil calm the fuck down! This isn't the first time you've done shit like this but this is the first time Claire had the balls to do something about it! Fucking talk it out so it doesn't happen again. It's a stupid issue and easy to fix so fix it!" I yelled to Quil.
I turned to storm out but was caught by the elbow.
"We need to talk as well, don't ya think?", my captor said to me.
I sighed and nodded in response.
Well this should be fun.
Another cliffy. How do you think the conversation will go with Jake and Ness?
Anyway, for those who haven't realized I live in America. South Carolina to be exact. So that's why I say "peace from the south east". I didn't realize some may think I mean't Australia, my bad.
Hope you're enjoying the story. We haven't even reached the half point yet. All these events are leading up to something...wanna guess? Cause I ain't telling. I predict a minimum of maybe...40 chapters. Who knows?
Chapter Info
Published: April 1st, 2013. 2:51 A.M.
p.s. sorry for any crazy mistakes and run off shit. Its late but I was feeling inspired so I wanted to write.
Catch ya'll on the flip side. Peace!