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Frogman- Interesting guest star. I never saw that coming. I have never read Planes: Search and Rescue. I guess I'll take a peak at it. I normally don't read the stories about the planes, I normally just stick to the cars stories.-You should read it, it's awesome!
McQueen is sad that his vacation got ruined. He shouldn't complain, he's retired. Everyday should be a vacation for him. I can't wait to see what you have him doing when he is a sheriff. I know that Sally would be all over him. The mother-daughter moment between Sally and Tara…hilarious! I think it's wonderful that Sally is allowing the search and rescue teams to use the roof of the hotel. Sounds like Blade has a new girlfriend in the making.-Yes, Blade and Sara are kindled sprits. They are professionals, so their relationship will be slow going.
I love the spoiler, I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope McQueen takes care of his brother once and for all. I would like to know how Brody got out of jail. But I guess I'm going have to wait.-Yes, at least for a little while.
Oh poor Charlie. I hope he's going to be all right. I've only been thought one tornado in me life. Believe me it was intense. If I never see one again, it'll be alright by me. Tara was being very cheeky trying to get Chance to sleep with her. I doubt that McQueen wouldn't let him, even if Tara didn't announce her plans before hand.- Lightning saw that coming and was prepared for it. He almost refuses to see that Tara is growing up, he still see her as his little girl, which sometimes drives Tara nuts.
The way Doc threatened McQueen, very funny! I love this story, please keep going!- Thank you I will.
Very cute birthday party. Chance popping out of the cake was very funny. Doc is very generous for donating his services to Tara. I think it's sweet that Tara cares enough about Chance that she wanted to introduce them to the grandparents. I think they knew he was, since he spent a week with them while they were in Hawaii-Ooops, my bad. This chapter was written long before the Hawaii chapters. I simply forgot about it and taking it out. Since it's posted, I'm just going to let it ride for now, there is other things I want to work on.
I'm glad to see that Bella's pregnancy is going well. So it's official, they are having a girl. Good for them. I have an idea. Have her personally close to Lighting's. A female Lighting, I would like to read about that.-I've been kicking that idea around myself. I really haven't done a lot of work on that part of the story. But I'll eventually get to it.
Guest 01-Dear HMG...or homosexual midget gangbang which fixs you a lot. You called me "cobard" for not giving my name...but yet your name is "HMG" which I highly doubt is your real name in real life..but my name is Chase and I live in Ohio, come fine me baby, me love you long time. Just joking I am not gay...maybe you are since you like to hide shit.-Chase, I was the one who gave him the name.
Oh and I find it funny as fuck, you say I don't leave comments and shit on here...well I am past that I text her now because we are friends. And by the way come to Ohio and tell me to shut the fuck up to my face, you will leave in a body bag and no that's not threat that's a promise ;-). Technically you are the one that started this shit, by leaving all your negative comments on here. She works her ass on the story and you just say "the last two chapters was boring" so don't be all buddy buddy with Irish or here's a good one I remember when you put "I skip the chapters with John in"..just because you don't like him because you love the main characters.-Oh be nice!
HMG-Hey Guest 01! who the heck are you? you say you know me but you're so cobard to not give your name, you are pathetic. I don't get why are you reading comments if you never comment or say thanks to the writer for taking time to write the story, you just read it and leave. But all of us who actually leave comment, we care about the story and want to let the writer know what we think. We are all good friends here, we never fight at all, we can have disagrees because you can't always like the chapters, or going something like is always a perfection, so here we are free to give our opinions and we can accept it or not but we never fight! So if you are not going talk about the story then you are the one who should shut the fuck up and leave because here we don't want to friend IrishScottDragonGirl to fight, but I wanted to reply him/her. I haven't read this chap yet but I promise to give you my review as soon as I can ;)- You be nice too. Chase is a long time friend, and it was quite a shock when he told me that he left a comment. But his comments are just as welcome as yours are.
Guest-Chelsea can sound seductive but good that Lightning's got brains and keeps his loyalty to Sally and Sally knows it. Lightning should give Sally the heads up about Chelsea behaving flirtatious and dangerously around Lightning if you like that idea-I got that already in this chapter, but good idea!
ghest 2-Well. An unruly viewer there but I'm staying out of it.-Smart move!
Nice that Tara and Chance are falling deeper in love. Annoying that Doc, Lightning, and the rest of the family are eyeing their every move.- The family isn't watching their every move, but they are defiantly keeping an eye on them. They all know how teenagers think, or don't think before the do something.
Haha, Doc's still acting like an annoying alarm clock but hopefully Lightning can get him back.-I'm working on it.
That sounded creepy with Tara being able to work her father and other men out.-I don't think it's creepy. I pretty much figured men out by a was 16, so why should Tara be any different.
Chelsea's clearly asking for her tyres to be deflated and have her hood bitten off. Probably knowing that Lightning's now retired he's gonna be her target of winning him over again but we all know Lightning isn't that stupid. If this sounds good maybe make a part where Chelsea sexually harasses Lightning and Sally comes over to defend him. Then Lightning reveals to Chelsea by surprise that he's a cop with his licence. Just an idea, you decide. Whatever you decide to do I don't mind. I'm enjoying the story. You know how to use the romance, the drama, everything you use to make it brilliant. **Gives you big fluffy hug** pets to your dog too.-I like that idea. I'm going to use it once Lightning get trained as a deputy. I have a few ideas where I'm going to use it. But I can't say for sure until I sit down and write it. **I return the hug and Lucy gives you a few sloppy dog kisses.**
With Lightning's paint job making him look as hot as fire he's a target for more female attention than just Sally as we just read about Chelsea flirting and trying to seduce him. Sally and Doc better be on standby.- Lightning is used to having women through themselves at him. So he's use to it, and so is Sally and Doc.
Funny that Chelsea wants Lightning back now that he's retired coz she didn't approve of his career before-Of course, she didn't want him when she could have him. But now she can't have him, so she wants him. Chelsea really can't stand being around Lightning, she just wants the power and prestige that comes being with a famous person, if you know what I mean.
AN: I KNOW THAT I DONT NORMALY DO THIS, BUT I WANT TO GET BACK ON MY NORMAL POSTING DAYS. SO HERE IS THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Chapter 20. - Rookie Orientation -
During a break, Doc was talking to another crew chief. Out of the corner of his eye, he saw somebody that he has not seen in a very long time, and hoped to never see again.
Doc finished his conversation and then headed to the bathroom. He was in the middle of urinating when he heard another car enter the bathroom. "Hello, old friend." The car
said, seeing Doc standing at a urinal. "It's been a long time, hasn't it?" "Not long enough, Edge" Doc growled. "What are you doing here?" "Oh! Haven't you heard?" Edge said,
with an evil smile. "I'm Thunder's new crew chief. The old one retired." "I thought you were banned for life" Doc said. "It was punishment for causing my crash." "Banned from
racing, But not from being a crew chief. Go ahead file a complaint if you want. I have read the rules, line for line, with some of the new rules for this season; I'm allowed to be
a crew chief. I guaranteed Thunder; he'll be the first rookie in history to win the Piston Cup. So keep that girl and poor excuse of a racecar out of my way, or you'll be sorry."
Edge sneered "Oh by the way, your fiancée back in 54' Julie Lovingtire, the one that got hit hood on by the drunk driver. She wasn't coming to watch you race. She was
coming to tell you that she was leaving you…for me. If you would have stayed home for the weekend as if she asked you too, she'll still be alive. However, you had to go and
race, she insisted that she tell you in person that she was breaking off the relationship. We had planed to get married that weekend. I blame you for her death." Edge turned
around and left the bathroom with out another word. Doc started to worry about Tara's safety. Edge was a dirty racecar, much worse than Chick or his son. He would do
anything to win a race, and he would endanger others to do it. Doc pondered if he should tell Lightning and Sally, but decided against telling them. As soon as he told
Lightning, about Edge and his dirty tricks, Lightning would pull Tara out of the league. Doc decided that he would keep an eye on Edge, to see if he was up to his old tricks.
Chanti, while Doc knew she could make great steward. She just isn't old enough to know all of the dirty tricks that Edge was know to pull. That left Strip, not only is he old
enough to know who Edge Slammer is and seen him race personally, he is also the head racing stewarded. Doc made a mental note to talk to Strip before leaving today. With
all that sorted out in his head, Doc headed back to the conference and the rest of the sponsors drove into the room. Chelsea just glared at Sally as she settled next
to Lightning, who looked tense and upset. "I'm assuming that Chelsea has hit already hit on you?" Sally asked quietly "It looks the rumors were true, she's pregnant." "Yes"
Lightning hissed. "I almost vomited in my mouth, when she came over to me. I would not be surprised that she tries to seduce me at some point this week." "By the way
some of the other women have been drooling over you and that paintjob" Sally said. "Chelsea won't be the only woman trying to seduce you." "Don't worry about it
Sweetheart" Lightning said. "I'm use to having women throwing themselves at me. Only you can make me hard just by sitting next to me." "Really… let's find out." Sally said
as she was able to slip a tire under him with out being noticed. She felt a hard lump in his codpiece. Lightning barley contained a moan of pleasure. "Well… I guess you're right
about that. You'll just have to suck it in, there's nothing we can do about it right now." "We're in a room filled with racecars" Lightning said. "I would prefer to let it all hang
out." Sally just rolled her eyes. Lightning laughed at his wife's response and kissed her on the fender. A piston cup administrator and his assistant entered the room. "Well,
this is a big group. We normally have one or two new cars a year, not five." he said "Now before we get stared would anyone like something to drink?" The only one not to
speak up was Tara, she was too nervous right now to drink anything. The administrator whose name was Benton or Ben for short got the meeting underway. Ben's assistant
sat a stack of papers in front of each of the racecars. They starting going though it. Everything was covered from the racing schedule, to code of conduct. Three hours later,
they stopped for a break. The sponsors were taken to separate room to have a meeting. "I have go… I have a meeting with Strip and Chanti." Lightning said to Tara during
the break. "Sally and I'll see you at lunch." "Okay" Tara said "Have fun." Once everyone who needed to leave, left, Ben showed a two-hour documentary on the history of the
piston cup to the rookie racecars. Tara got a treat watching Doc race. To Edge's annoyment, he was cut out of every racing video. "I'll make Hudson pay for ruining my
career." Edge said under his breath. "I never got the chance to finish you off, but I'm back… and you are going to pay dearly for my banishment from racing." Once the movie
was done, they stopped for lunch. Everyone headed to the cafeteria. Tara was surprised to see Chance there. "What are you doing here?" She asked him. "I got an internship
with the Piston Cup president." Chance said "You'll meet him this afternoon. Right after lunch you'll have a tour of the headquarters, and you'll meet all of administrators, the
ranking officials, and the new racing stewards." "Can you join us for lunch?" Tara asked "Or are you too busy." "I can" Chance said "If your parents don't mind." "Come on"
Tara said playfully "They won't mind at all, they really like you." So Chance joined them for lunch. "Well I have to cut my lunch short" Chance said. "I have to get some things
done before your tour starts." "Can you come by tonight?" Tara asked "We can go swimming again." "I can't, the damaged trees I told you about are getting cut down today"
He said. "I have to stay home and help clean up." "Can I come and help?" Tara asked "I don't think so; It's going to be pretty dangerous. I don't want you to get hurt this
close to the start of the racing season." Chance said "I will see you tomorrow; maybe we can do a movie or something." Chance gave her a kiss on the fender before leaving.
Tara finished her lunch and the headed back to the confrere room. Like Chance said, they went on a tour of the headquarters. They got to meet the officials, including the
racing stewards. The group then got a thirty-minute break. Most of the cars headed to the lounge to relax. Doc took this opportunity to talk to Strip. "Strip, may I talk to you
privately please?" Doc said "It's kind of important." "Sure Doc" Strip said as he lead the way to his office. "Sorry Doc, I'm trying to get everything set up." Doc entered a
slightly cluttered office. Linda, Strips' wife was there putting away some items "Doc Hudson!" She said happily "It been a while, you look good. How are you doing?" "I'm great
Linda" Doc said as he gave her a little kiss on the fender. "You look gorgeous… as always." "You were always a charmer!" Linda said playfully "Can I get you anything?" "No"
Doc said "I'm fine, but thank you." "Honey, could you excuse us for a moment" Strip said. "Doc said he wanted to talk to me privately." "Sure thing Daddy Rabbit." Linda said
"Those forms that need your signature is on your desk, I need them back before the end of the day." "Yes dear, I won't forget." Strip said as Linda left the room. "She's my
assistant/secretary. But I have a feeling she is going to be the one running the department instead of me." Doc chucked, as Strip took his seat behind his desk. "Why do I
have a feeling this is about a certain former racecar that was just been approved to be Thunder's crew chief." "So… you know about Edge Slammer" Doc asked. "I had no
choice but to come to you, the other two stewards, well I don't know how they would handle the situation." "I understand, Doc. One of my duties is to review applications for
crew chiefs. When I ran across of Edge's crew chief's application. I immediately flagged it for denial, along with a long explanation of why Edge's application should be denied.
Then I sent it to a review board" Strip said. "The board's review came back saying that under some of the new rules, Edge was qualified to be a crew chief. So he was
approved as a crew chief. I'm sorry Doc; there is nothing I can do to help you at this point." "I understand Strip, your tires are tied" Doc said sadly. "Thank you, for your
time." "Doc, you and I know that Edge will try something at some point" Strip said. "So be careful out there. I can get you extra security if you need it." "Thanks Strip" Doc
said "Right now, I think I'm fine." When the break was over: The tour group then was taken to the executives offices. Tara did see Chance running around, but he looked busy
and she could not talk to him. But she made eye contact and threw him a couple of kisses. He smiled at her and threw kisses back at her. The next thing she knew Chance
was at her side. "Mr. Thorpe" Chance said. "This is the freshmen class for this season." Tara and the other racecars found themselves face-to-face with the Piston Cup
president, Bill Thorpe. Bill was a retired racecar himself and had two piston cups to his name. "Well this is a good looking group of racecars" He said. "I personally want to
welcome you to the piston cup and wish you good luck and fast racing in the coming season." Ben took them back to the conference room. "There is only more thing that we
need to do today" every one took their seats. The assistant sat a racing league contract in fount of each racecar. He went over the contract with them. Ben asked if there are
no questions, they could sign the contract. Tara signed hers and then handed to Sally. She signed it than handed it Doc who signed it. Once everyone was done, they were
dismissed for the day. The transports arrived and took them back to the hotel. Tara and Sally ended up in the same transport. Tara fall asleep on the drive back to the hotel.
"Tara, Sweetheart, were back the hotel." Sally said as she shook Tara awake. "Once we get to the suite, you can go back to sleep. "Okay Mom." was Tara sleepy response. "I
need to speak to you later, it's important." Doc whispered to Sally as the headed to the suite "I need to do it when certain racecars are not around." Doc gestured to Lightning
and Tara. "Okay" Sally said "Lightning and few of his friends are going out for drinks later. Tara will properly spend the evening in the pool." Doc just nodded. James had
dinner ready when they arrived. After dinner, Tara headed to her bedroom and called Chance. They talked for twenty minutes and then she fell asleep. Lightning's friends
showed up a little later. He and John went down to bar that was across the street. The tornado did very little damage to it.