Head's up. I reccomend you listen to this song, Flathead by the Fratellis (or how ever you spell it) while reading this chapter...beleive me...it's perfect. Here's a link:
http:/www. youtube .com/watch?v=Fz2ZDeTYgTs&ob=av2e
Just get rid of the spaces.
Now, after you've gotten this song playing, read on!
"Did you see him?"
"I think I just died!"
"He smiled at me! He smiled at me!"
"We are so effing lucky!"
"No way is that eyebrow real."
"Did you hear, he's going to try out for the soccer team!...don't they practice shirtless..."
"Oh. My. God."
"I have chemistry with him! YES!YES!YEEESSS!"
"Damn it! I couldn't say anything to him!"
"He's so HOT!"
"Take a picture! Take a picture! Why aren't you taking a picture?"
"KYAAAAAA!"
"I love my life!"
"I think he went to the library!"
"Where is he?"
"He gave me a cupcake! NO! That's mine! Don't take it!"
"I bet two hundered that he's already taken!"
"Love me! Love me! Love meeeeee!"
"I thought people like him get homeschooled?"
"Am I the only one who really wants some father-son action going on?"
"I'm dreaming aren't I? Lord I hope I'm not dreaming!"
"I LOVE YOU! MARRY ME!"
"Why are all the girls going crazy?"
"Hn."
"I think that's Greg's way of saying he has no idea...oooh look, some guy's giving free cup-HOLY MACARONI! Is that Charles Stockholm?"
"Who's 'at?"
"Have you really been living under a rock for the past sixteen years Leroy? Charles is the son of Daniel Stockholm: The most famous professional ice hockey player after Wayne Gretzky! ...the boy's like-like a male, canadian version of Paris Hilton! What's he doing here?"
"...school...duh."
"No shit Sherlock, but shouldn't he be- hey, where are you going Leroy?"
"Cupcakes."
"Oh. Get me one too."
"Don't think he heard you."
"Then you go get me one."
"Why should I?"
"Pweeeaaaase? Wit a pwetty chaiwy on top?"
"Ew. Stop doing that. It doesn't even work on girls...on you it's just disgusting."
"Hmph. Fine. Just get me a goddamn cupcake!"
"Yeah. Yeah. OI! BLONDIE! PASS A CUPCAKE OR TWO!"
"...what?"
"You deaf or something? I said pass a cupcake!"
"These delectable treasures are treats for the beautiful maidens of this school. Not brutes like you."
"Shitty bastard...I AIN'T NO BRUTE!"
"Of course you're not, and I'm not a boy!"
"Damn right yeh aren't! More like a girly pansy!"
"I am must have heard you wrong."
"I. Said. You're. A. Crappy. Pansy."
"Fucking...Say that to the bottom of my foot seaweed head!"
"Shitty piece of shit! I'm gonna rip the shitty mouth of yers off ya fugly face!"
"Arrrrrrrrrggggggg!"
"Gaaaaaahhhhhhh!"
"Hahahaha! Greg and that baker guy are fighting!"
"Aaaah! Get a teacher! Someone get a teacher! They're going to kill each other! And how the heck does Greg even have his sword with him in school?"
"Hahahahahhaah! This if funny!"
"No Leroy, this is not- WHY THE HELL DO YOU HAVE A CUPCAKE AND I DON'T!"
So? So? Yeah, I know a lot of you expected some Renee and Sheila bonding time but I really wanted to get some more stuff on Charles in first. :P So, this chapter is completely dialogue since I was lazy and didn't want to write up a long descriptive one. (In my standards.) I hope you guys can follow along one who's speaking...it shouldn't be too hard, I hope.
Also, I can't exactly reply to reviews that are anonymous so for those, replies will be stated here. So here I go!
Kiki-sama: Thank you for the review. I'm glad you took the time to give me your opinon. Now then, yes, the characters are heavily modeled off of the OP cast because they are the OP cast. Except for a few minor physical differences (like Nami's tatoo, and Luffy's scar under the eyes) they are the same. Now then, if you find that the names I gave them are a big turn off...good. That's what I was going for. While I myself can kind of see the majority of the introduced characters as the names I give them (example, Usopp and Michael...I dunno, they both seem to fit to me.) other names, such as Luffy's are impossible. (In no universe should Luffy ever be named Leroy. Leroy is not a good name. It is a terrible name. Luffy is not Leroy.) I will repeat, this minor changes are important to the story. Because it is only logical that these changes occur. More on that in later chapters.
Lastly, I do hope you don't give up on my story. I am only in the beginning, just getting all the characters together. I haven't even introduced the actual plot. So, while I respect your desicion to give up on this fic I hope that you'll give me a chance. Either way, thank you for reading it so far. And thank you for the review.
So that's it for now folks! See you next chapter! Oh, and more reviews would be EPIC!
