PLEASE EVERYONE READ MY OTHER TRIGUN FANFIC VASH THE STAMPEDE JR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And my weird fic that just started, TWO IN THE SAME BOAT!!!!!!!!!
*sighs* It's very amazing how the Princess of Pain takes everything I say the wrong way. I can't believe she took what I said 'And for those would don't like the story.. OH WELL! GO READ SOMETHING ELSE IF YOU DON'T LIKE MY STORY!' WRONG!
For one thing, I'm not saying that if you don't bow down and said you love my story that you can't read or review it. ((When the hell did I imply that? I sure as hell don't see it, so can anyone point it out to me?))
I'm saying, that if you don't like this story at all, and you really want to flame me for writing it, read something you DO like instead. I'm not forcing people to read this story. I'm only writing this story because I was bored one day and wrote the first chapter. Then I posted it to see what people would say.
So, SORRY if you don't like it. It's just a story I'm writing on the side and for those who like this story, GREAT! And for those who don't, critize me all you want then leave to read something else.
And for those who are concerned that I am going to stop the fic, don't be. I'm not. I don't care if no one likes this story anymore. I'm having fun writing it and expressing myself this way. Thank you.
It's not that I don't want detail in this story or want to use spell-check. It's just that I get so sick and tired of re-reading my stories and being so dramatic in them, I need a non-detail filled story like this to help me out. I feel drained after writing a detailed filled story. So, I just write this fun little story, for.. well,... fun.
((And for those who really don't like my story and the way I write it, I'll friggin' re-write the whole damn story once I'm finished if that will make you happy. I'll do everything you guys told me to do, and get a beta reader for it. Happy? Good. Because now I'm going to continue with my story.))
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Part 20- Just a Dream....
*drip*
*drip*
*drip*
'huh.... water...?' Kristin asked herself. Her mind was a bit fuzzy and she felt drained. She kept hearing the sound of water dripping.
She slowly opened her eyes. A dark world awaited her. She blinked a few times, tring to get an sort of image. Not a single color, nor a single light. All darkness.
"Rise and Shine!" A voice called out to her, almost singing.
Kristin blinked again. She was back in her room. She was sitting up in her bed, with her hair sticking out of it's pony-tail. She was snug in her P.J.s' surrounded by her four walls. Each decorated in anime posters. So much so, you couldn't tell what the wall color was.
A picture of the Saiyan Prince Vegeta hung over her head board, while a cozy picture of Kenshin sat across the room. An Inuyasha poster stuck it's way above her color T.V. and of course, a Trigun picture with Vash holding his gun across his chest was on the wall beside her bed.
Kristin blinked again. She stared at her mom who had called her to wake up.
"It's time for school honey. You don't want to be late." She said, pointing her finger at kristin.
"Right mom." Kristin answered, nodding her head.
Her Mom smiled at her, before closing the door. Kristin sighed.
'Was... all of it... just a dream?' Kristin questioned herself. The last thing she remember was Midvalley backhanding her..
A hand rose to her cheek. She brushed her cheek's skin with her palm, before climbing out of bed. She briskly walked over to the bathroom, looking in the mirrior.
She checked out her face, then her shoulders. She lifted up her PJ leggin's to see if there were any marks. None. Not a single wound. Not a single scar.
She scratched her head in thought, before brushing her teeth. It was after all, time to go to school.
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After getting ready and heading out the door, she was still questiong weather it had all happened or not. Had she been on Gunsmoke? Was it even possible? Maybe the shock knocke dher out and she dreamed it all. But then.. how did she get into her PJs and into bed?
Things weren't making much sence right now.
She decided to push all of that to the back of her mind before getting into her first class. English.
She sat down in her usual chair, with the usual friends sitting around her. She sighed. Life was seeming to be a bit boring right about now. Gunsmoke was much more exciting.
'But I was never there...' Kristin reminded herself.
Just then, the door opened. As usual the Teacher was stepping in late. That woman could never be anywhere on Time!
Kristin smiled upon seeing the door open, expecting it to be her Favorite teacher standing there. But... something was off...
Kristin stiffened. Something didn't seem right. The hair on the back of her neck was standing on end. Her eyes widen when they saw who it was.
'Knives....' Kristin thought as she looked at the tall, light blonde-haired man who was Vash's infamous twin. She covered her mouth to stop her from gasping. She glanced around the room. Everyone seemed to not have noticed. How could they not notice?!
Kristin turned back to Knives. He had blood stains on the front of his space suit, type clothes. The blood smeared across his chest and stomach. He was currently holding a knife.
He grinned at her sicken expression, before raising the knife to his mouth. He licked the blood off of it, before walking over to her.
Kristin leaned back in her seat, too scared to do anything at the moment. She felt the breath caught in her throat. Her knuckles were white as the gripped the edges of her desk.
Knives leaned in, and spoke. "You're a pathdic vermin who needs to die.."
Kristin's eyes widen if that was possible, to twice their size. Knives raised the knife above his head and brought it down. Kristin, screamed in terror....
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"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!" She screamed, bolting upright. Panting and sweating. Her sheets tossed a side as she grabbed onto her PJ leggin's for dear life. She was probably bruising her knees by doing this, but she didn't notice nor cared. She had nearly wet herself!
Her breating was ragget and short. Her skin was pale and had a burning feeling to it. She finally calmed herself down enough to take in what was around her.
A plain room with metal walls and a metal door. Only one bed, one bathroom and a pile of her old clothes folded into a neat pile lay on a desk beside the bed. A chair was pushed against the wall.
kristin's beath became ragget again once she saw who was sitting there. It was Legato.
"I see you are awake. I would think with your wounds you would be out for longer." He said, with no emotion what so ever attached to his voice.
"...." Kristin didn't speak.
"Do you know who I am?" He questioned to her.
Kristin... looked down and shook her head no. Now that she thought about it... she didn't remember anything!
"W-who.. am I?" She questioned to the strange Man sitting afar from her.
"You are kristin. One of the most wanted crimials of this planet. You are worth almost as much as Vash the Stampede, who is your enemy." He answered.
Kristin only nodded. She had no idea who she was... or why she was here...
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Vash woke up with a start. His head was foggy and his brain was buzzing like a hang-over. He rubbed his forhead, before swinging his feet over the side of his bed. It had been 3 days since he last saw kristin. Nightmares were becomming more apparent in his slumber.
He shook his head again.
'Something had happened to her. I KNOW something had happened to her!' He thought to himself.
He looked over at his roomate. Wolfwood. His new friend. A smoking Priest that carried a cross full of some of the most powerful guns on Gunsmoke!
He shook his head again with a smile gracing his sad lips. He sighed. It was already morning. He just remembered! He just got to this town by bus. Today he was going to explore this town and find a donut shop as soon as possible!
he glanced out the window. 'I wonder how you are fairing kristin. I just hope you can stay alive til we meet again..'
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"You brought her?" Knives questioned Legato as soon as the three got into the room.
Kristin was slowly following Legato, looking around at every corner in the building. She was tirng to remember what route they took to get to this room, but it seemed hopeless. The whole place was too large for her to remember. Last time she counted, it had been Left, right, straight, right, straight, left, elevator to the fifth floor, right then another left. That was nearly ten minutes ago! Who knows what turns they took since then.
"yes Master." Legato said, holding a hand over his chest, then giving a slight bow in the man's direction.
Knives was kept in a tank filled with... liquid? Or liquid looking stuff.
Kristin raised an eyebrow as she looked at the man in the tank-like thing.
"Very good. Did you tell her.." He questioned.
"Yes I have. She is ready for your orders sir." Legato said.
Kristin had felt very uncomfortable here. She was dressed, not in the red coat that was on the desk beside her, but clothes Legato had handed to her. It was a tight blue body suit that went up to her neck, with a black skirt and black shirt covering over it. Black bloves covered her hands and her hair was pulled back into a loose pony-tail. A few strands falling out here and there from it. A gun hoster was put around her right thigh. She resisted the urge to scratch at the materal that clung to her skin.
"Good. Kristin. You are one of the Gung-Ho Guns. The fourtenth Gung-Ho gun. You're nick name is 'Killer Kristin'. Your mission is to make your enemy Vash the Stampede suffer." He order her.
When she didn't respond right away, he yelled. "Do you understand?"
kristin winced at his tone, before rubbing her left shoulder. "Yes. I understand."
"Good. Now, do follow out my orders right away. Legato shall show you a picture of who Vash is. he shall also answer any questions you may have." Knives said, before ordering them away.
Legato bowed to his Master, glancing at kristin to do the same. Kristin quickly followed suit. She felt sick when she did though.
Once out of the room, kristin began to let the questions fly.
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How is THAT for one heck of a twist? I hope you all like it! Please review!
And my weird fic that just started, TWO IN THE SAME BOAT!!!!!!!!!
*sighs* It's very amazing how the Princess of Pain takes everything I say the wrong way. I can't believe she took what I said 'And for those would don't like the story.. OH WELL! GO READ SOMETHING ELSE IF YOU DON'T LIKE MY STORY!' WRONG!
For one thing, I'm not saying that if you don't bow down and said you love my story that you can't read or review it. ((When the hell did I imply that? I sure as hell don't see it, so can anyone point it out to me?))
I'm saying, that if you don't like this story at all, and you really want to flame me for writing it, read something you DO like instead. I'm not forcing people to read this story. I'm only writing this story because I was bored one day and wrote the first chapter. Then I posted it to see what people would say.
So, SORRY if you don't like it. It's just a story I'm writing on the side and for those who like this story, GREAT! And for those who don't, critize me all you want then leave to read something else.
And for those who are concerned that I am going to stop the fic, don't be. I'm not. I don't care if no one likes this story anymore. I'm having fun writing it and expressing myself this way. Thank you.
It's not that I don't want detail in this story or want to use spell-check. It's just that I get so sick and tired of re-reading my stories and being so dramatic in them, I need a non-detail filled story like this to help me out. I feel drained after writing a detailed filled story. So, I just write this fun little story, for.. well,... fun.
((And for those who really don't like my story and the way I write it, I'll friggin' re-write the whole damn story once I'm finished if that will make you happy. I'll do everything you guys told me to do, and get a beta reader for it. Happy? Good. Because now I'm going to continue with my story.))
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A $$120,000,000,000 couple
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Part 20- Just a Dream....
*drip*
*drip*
*drip*
'huh.... water...?' Kristin asked herself. Her mind was a bit fuzzy and she felt drained. She kept hearing the sound of water dripping.
She slowly opened her eyes. A dark world awaited her. She blinked a few times, tring to get an sort of image. Not a single color, nor a single light. All darkness.
"Rise and Shine!" A voice called out to her, almost singing.
Kristin blinked again. She was back in her room. She was sitting up in her bed, with her hair sticking out of it's pony-tail. She was snug in her P.J.s' surrounded by her four walls. Each decorated in anime posters. So much so, you couldn't tell what the wall color was.
A picture of the Saiyan Prince Vegeta hung over her head board, while a cozy picture of Kenshin sat across the room. An Inuyasha poster stuck it's way above her color T.V. and of course, a Trigun picture with Vash holding his gun across his chest was on the wall beside her bed.
Kristin blinked again. She stared at her mom who had called her to wake up.
"It's time for school honey. You don't want to be late." She said, pointing her finger at kristin.
"Right mom." Kristin answered, nodding her head.
Her Mom smiled at her, before closing the door. Kristin sighed.
'Was... all of it... just a dream?' Kristin questioned herself. The last thing she remember was Midvalley backhanding her..
A hand rose to her cheek. She brushed her cheek's skin with her palm, before climbing out of bed. She briskly walked over to the bathroom, looking in the mirrior.
She checked out her face, then her shoulders. She lifted up her PJ leggin's to see if there were any marks. None. Not a single wound. Not a single scar.
She scratched her head in thought, before brushing her teeth. It was after all, time to go to school.
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After getting ready and heading out the door, she was still questiong weather it had all happened or not. Had she been on Gunsmoke? Was it even possible? Maybe the shock knocke dher out and she dreamed it all. But then.. how did she get into her PJs and into bed?
Things weren't making much sence right now.
She decided to push all of that to the back of her mind before getting into her first class. English.
She sat down in her usual chair, with the usual friends sitting around her. She sighed. Life was seeming to be a bit boring right about now. Gunsmoke was much more exciting.
'But I was never there...' Kristin reminded herself.
Just then, the door opened. As usual the Teacher was stepping in late. That woman could never be anywhere on Time!
Kristin smiled upon seeing the door open, expecting it to be her Favorite teacher standing there. But... something was off...
Kristin stiffened. Something didn't seem right. The hair on the back of her neck was standing on end. Her eyes widen when they saw who it was.
'Knives....' Kristin thought as she looked at the tall, light blonde-haired man who was Vash's infamous twin. She covered her mouth to stop her from gasping. She glanced around the room. Everyone seemed to not have noticed. How could they not notice?!
Kristin turned back to Knives. He had blood stains on the front of his space suit, type clothes. The blood smeared across his chest and stomach. He was currently holding a knife.
He grinned at her sicken expression, before raising the knife to his mouth. He licked the blood off of it, before walking over to her.
Kristin leaned back in her seat, too scared to do anything at the moment. She felt the breath caught in her throat. Her knuckles were white as the gripped the edges of her desk.
Knives leaned in, and spoke. "You're a pathdic vermin who needs to die.."
Kristin's eyes widen if that was possible, to twice their size. Knives raised the knife above his head and brought it down. Kristin, screamed in terror....
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"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!" She screamed, bolting upright. Panting and sweating. Her sheets tossed a side as she grabbed onto her PJ leggin's for dear life. She was probably bruising her knees by doing this, but she didn't notice nor cared. She had nearly wet herself!
Her breating was ragget and short. Her skin was pale and had a burning feeling to it. She finally calmed herself down enough to take in what was around her.
A plain room with metal walls and a metal door. Only one bed, one bathroom and a pile of her old clothes folded into a neat pile lay on a desk beside the bed. A chair was pushed against the wall.
kristin's beath became ragget again once she saw who was sitting there. It was Legato.
"I see you are awake. I would think with your wounds you would be out for longer." He said, with no emotion what so ever attached to his voice.
"...." Kristin didn't speak.
"Do you know who I am?" He questioned to her.
Kristin... looked down and shook her head no. Now that she thought about it... she didn't remember anything!
"W-who.. am I?" She questioned to the strange Man sitting afar from her.
"You are kristin. One of the most wanted crimials of this planet. You are worth almost as much as Vash the Stampede, who is your enemy." He answered.
Kristin only nodded. She had no idea who she was... or why she was here...
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Vash woke up with a start. His head was foggy and his brain was buzzing like a hang-over. He rubbed his forhead, before swinging his feet over the side of his bed. It had been 3 days since he last saw kristin. Nightmares were becomming more apparent in his slumber.
He shook his head again.
'Something had happened to her. I KNOW something had happened to her!' He thought to himself.
He looked over at his roomate. Wolfwood. His new friend. A smoking Priest that carried a cross full of some of the most powerful guns on Gunsmoke!
He shook his head again with a smile gracing his sad lips. He sighed. It was already morning. He just remembered! He just got to this town by bus. Today he was going to explore this town and find a donut shop as soon as possible!
he glanced out the window. 'I wonder how you are fairing kristin. I just hope you can stay alive til we meet again..'
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"You brought her?" Knives questioned Legato as soon as the three got into the room.
Kristin was slowly following Legato, looking around at every corner in the building. She was tirng to remember what route they took to get to this room, but it seemed hopeless. The whole place was too large for her to remember. Last time she counted, it had been Left, right, straight, right, straight, left, elevator to the fifth floor, right then another left. That was nearly ten minutes ago! Who knows what turns they took since then.
"yes Master." Legato said, holding a hand over his chest, then giving a slight bow in the man's direction.
Knives was kept in a tank filled with... liquid? Or liquid looking stuff.
Kristin raised an eyebrow as she looked at the man in the tank-like thing.
"Very good. Did you tell her.." He questioned.
"Yes I have. She is ready for your orders sir." Legato said.
Kristin had felt very uncomfortable here. She was dressed, not in the red coat that was on the desk beside her, but clothes Legato had handed to her. It was a tight blue body suit that went up to her neck, with a black skirt and black shirt covering over it. Black bloves covered her hands and her hair was pulled back into a loose pony-tail. A few strands falling out here and there from it. A gun hoster was put around her right thigh. She resisted the urge to scratch at the materal that clung to her skin.
"Good. Kristin. You are one of the Gung-Ho Guns. The fourtenth Gung-Ho gun. You're nick name is 'Killer Kristin'. Your mission is to make your enemy Vash the Stampede suffer." He order her.
When she didn't respond right away, he yelled. "Do you understand?"
kristin winced at his tone, before rubbing her left shoulder. "Yes. I understand."
"Good. Now, do follow out my orders right away. Legato shall show you a picture of who Vash is. he shall also answer any questions you may have." Knives said, before ordering them away.
Legato bowed to his Master, glancing at kristin to do the same. Kristin quickly followed suit. She felt sick when she did though.
Once out of the room, kristin began to let the questions fly.
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How is THAT for one heck of a twist? I hope you all like it! Please review!