#1: In chapter one, I typed "She explained that she was "evaluate" me later and determine my schedule." (What I meant to type "She explained that she was going to "evaluate" me later and determine my schedule.")

#2: In chapter one, I typed "She turned to Koenma, who was in his teenage form and had hidden his pacifier in his mouth," (What I meant to type was "She turned to Koenma, who was in his teenage form and had hidden his pacifier in his pocket",)

#3: In chapter one, I typed "Finally, the sad that it was hard to explain." (What I meant to type was "Finally, he said that it was hard to explain.")

#4: In chapter one, I typed "To the right was a large window, but now light shined through it." (What I meant to type was "To the right was a large window, but no light shined through it.")

#5: In chapter one, I typed "Before she could ask me how, I explained that I had to remind myself, everyday, that everyone I knew and loved is dead." (What I meant to type was "Before she could ask me how, I explained that I had to remind myself, everyday, that everyone I knew and loved was dead.")

#6: In chapter one, I typed "Kurama is one of the most intelligent people I've ever met, but I still don't understand why he hands out with losers; I can never figure him out." (What I meant to type was "Kurama is one of the most intelligent people I've ever met, but I still don't understand why he hangs out with losers; I can never figure him out.")

#7: In chapter one, I typed "Yukina's…too trusting; she knows went to back off, but her innocent visage usually gets her into unneeded trouble, not that it's her fault…she's just trying to help everyone." (What I meant to type was "Yukina's…too trusting; she knows when to back off, but her innocent visage usually gets her into unneeded trouble, not that it's her fault…she's just trying to help everyone.")

#8: In chapter one, I typed "I looked back up at he and she smiled at me." (What I meant to type was "I looked back up at her and she smiled at me.")

#9: In chapter two, I typed "Eat; please." I don't wanna see you go through all that." (The quotes after "please" don't need to be there.)

#10: In chapter two, I typed "Then you were suppose to tell them positive thing about them." (What I meant to type was "Then you were suppose to tell them positive things about themselves.")

#11 (which was pointed out to me): In chapter two, I typed "I want you," Soko said. "Mine is kinda small." (What I mean to type was "I warn you," Soko said. "Mine is kina small." HE WAS TALKING ABOUT HIS OFFICE!)

#12: In chapter two, I typed "When the burning stop, Hiei was out cold in seconds." (What I mean to type was "When the burning stopped, Hiei was out cold in seconds.")

#13: In chapter two, I typed "He took out a pen and began to fill the first on out." (What I meant to type was "He took out a pen and began to fill the first one out.")

#14: In chapter two, I typed "Soko check "VERY POOR"." (What I meant to type was "Soko checked "VERY POOR".")

#15: In chapter two, my Author's Note at the bottom was really messed up, didn't make sense at all. For some reason, when I uploaded it, a lot of words disappeared. Doesn't matter now though. I'm sure all of you understood what I was saying.

#16: In chapter three, I typed "Blinking, he realized his mouth was prying open." (What I meant to type was "Blinking, he realized his mouth was being pried open.")

#17: In chapter three, I typed "He smile faded an he glared at Hiei." (What I meant to type was "His smile faded as he glared at Hiei.")

#18: In chapter three, I typed "He bought his hands to his mouth and coughed up and mouthful of blood." (What I meant to type was "He bought his hands to his mouth and coughed up a mouthful of blood.")

#19: In chapter four, I typed "I thought this place would be great way to escape that annoying pack of idiots, but the longer I stay here, the more I wish those idiots would have left me with them." (What I meant to type was "I thought this place would be a great way to escape that annoying back of idiots, but the longer I stay here, the more I wish those idiots would have let me stay with them.")

#20: In chapter four, I typed "Once is a man with long black hair and deep gray eyes." (What I meant to type is "One is a man with long black hair and deep gray eyes.")

#21: In chapter four, I typed "He knew it was someone from the usual gang; but was it once person or everyone?" (What I meant to type was "He knew it was someone from the usual gang; but was it one person or everyone?")

#22: In chapter four, I typed "Hiei felt his stomach tighten; he didn't what that meant." (What I meant to type was, "Hiei felt his stomach tighten; he didn't know what that meant.")

#23: In chapter four, I typed "Soko smile slowly appeared, it had an evil smirk to it." (What I meant to type was, "Soko's smile slowly appeared, it had an evil smirk to it.")

#24: In chapter four, I typed "He opened it up and shoved Hiei various drawings." (What I meant to type was "He opened it up and showed Hiei various drawings.")

#25: In chapter five, I typed "When Hiei awoke the next morning, he continued his normal schedule, but through it all, he wondered if that think with Soko really happened last night." (What I meant to type was "When Hiei awoke the next morning, he continued his normal schedule, but through it all, he wondered if that thing with Soko really happened last night." Also, that comma after "normal" shouldn't be there.)

#26: In chapter five, I typed "It seemed too weird to real." (What I meant to type was "It seemed too weird to be real.")

#27: In chapter five, I typed "Uhm," this is gonna sound stupid, but I don't know your name." (The quotes after "uhm" don't need to be there.)

#28: In chapter five, I typed "You're cousin interests me." (What I meant to type was "Your cousin interests me.")

#29: In chapter five, I typed "But if you get in too much trouble, they'll send you somewhere else…worse then this place." (What I meant to type was "But if you get in too much trouble, they'll send you somewhere else…worse than this place.")

#30: In chapter five, I typed "His footsteps mad soft crunching noises as he gazed at the newborn." (What I meant to type was "His footsteps made soft crunching noises as he gazed at the newborn.")

#31: In chapter six, I typed "Rehabilitation?" (The question mark is suppose to be a comma.)

#32: In chapter six, I typed "I saw all this plans, freaked out, and told everyone." (What I meant to type was "I saw all his plans, freaked out and told everyone." There was also suppose to be some ending quotes.)

#33: In chapter six, I typed "So we she him to rehab in hopes he would get better, but when we went visit him…he seemed worse…" (What I meant to type was "So we sent him to rehab in hopes he would get better, but when we went visit him…he seemed worse…")

#34: In chapter six, I typed "Kayko and Botan each put a supporting hard Yukina's shoulder." (What I meant to type was "Kayko and Botan each put a supporting hand on Yukina's shoulder.")

#35: In chapter seven, I typed "Hiei, i hope You can figure me." (What I meant to type was "Hiei, i hope You can forgive me.")

#36: In chapter seven, I typed "Thought, he hadn't admitted it out loud, he knew it was true…" (What I meant to type was "Though, he hadn't admitted it out loud, he knew it was true…")

#37: In chapter seven, I typed "Hiei stood up and Hiei reluctantly followed." (What I meant to type was "He stood up and Hiei followed.")

#38: In chapter seven, I typed "He turned away from Soko best her could." (What I meant to type was "He turned away from Soko best he could.")

#39: In chapter seven, I typed "Hiei tried to pull away, but only pulled him closer." (What I meant to type was "Hiei tried to pull away, but Soko only pulled him closer.")

#40: In chapter seven, I typed "Soko let out a heavy sigh as she closed the door." (What I meant to type was "Soko let out a heavy sigh as he closed the door.")

#41: In chapter seven, I typed ""Shh," he heard Soko said as he began to rub his back comfortingly." (What I meant to type was ""Shh," he heard Soko say as he began to rub his back comfortingly.")

#42: In chapter seven, I typed "The afternoon shun shined on his pale skin, giving him almost normal tone." (What I meant to type was "The afternoon sun shined on his pale skin, giving him almost normal tone.")

#43: In chapter eight, I typed "They waited a few minutes for the nurse to escort the in, and sat at the same table from their last visit. Again, they waited for Hiei to come." (What I meant to type was "They waited a few minutes for the nurse to escort them in, and sat at the same table from their last visit. Again, they waited for Hiei to come.")

#44: In chapter eight, I typed ""She was partner in Support Group…" Hiei continued, as if he had never been interrupted." (What I meant to type was ""She was my partner in Support Group…" Hiei continued, as if he had never been interrupted.")

#45: In chapter eight, I typed "Like Hiei suspect, Kurama noticed the message almost immediately." (What I meant to type was "Like Hiei suspected, Kurama noticed the message almost immediately.)

#46: In chapter eight, I typed ""I'd thought you'd be happy knowing I didn't notice that not you slipped Yukina."" (What I meant to type was ""I'd thought you'd be happy knowing I didn't notice that note you slipped Yukina."")

#47: In chapter eight, I typed ""Run a search on letter, facial structure, everything."" (What I meant to type was ""Run a search on letters, facial structure, everything."")

#48: In chapter eight, I typed "The fifth and final paragraph begged for Koenma's help and asked that his shared this information with no one." (What I meant to type was "The fifth and final paragraph begged for Koenma's help and asked that he shared this information with no one.")

#49: In chapter eight, I typed ""Isn't that Hiei's last night?" Ogre asked curiously." (What I meant to type was ""Isn't that Hiei's last name?" Ogre asked curiously.)

#50: In chapter eight, I typed ""They trained together as kinds under the same sensei…"" (What I meant to type was ""They trained together as kids under the same sensei…""

#51: In chapter nine, I typed ""Come in," was replied and Hiei obey." (What I meant to type was ""Come in," was his reply and Hiei obeyed.")

#52: In chapter nine, I typed "He leaned back in his char, as if waiting for Hiei to ask questions." (What I meant to type was "He leaned back in his chair, as if waiting for Hiei to ask questions.")

#53: In chapter nine, I typed ""No even her nurse?" Hiei asked, voice slightly rising." (What I meant to type was ""Not even her nurse?" Hiei asked, voice slightly rising."

#54: In chapter nine, I typed: "Soko released him and he headed for the door, wiping away his tears as she went." (What I meant to type was "Soko released him and he headed for the door, wiping away his tears as he went.")

#55: In chapter nine, I typed: ""He let me call him 'father' once…" The said look grew deeper." (What I meant to type was ""He let me call him 'father' once…" The sad look grew deeper.")

#56: In chapter nine, I typed: "Doing so made Hiei's eyes will with tears; like he had done something wrong." (What I meant to type was "Doing so made Hiei's eyes fill with tears; like he had done something wrong.")

#57: In chapter ten, I typed: ""And now that he's found them," Kurama continued." (What I meant to type was ""And now that he's found him," Kurama continued.")

#58: In chapter ten, I typed: ""They're definitely dragging him with something or torturing him…or both…I've seen a lot of kids with messed up lives…and he's acting like every one of them."" (What I meant to type was ""They're definitely drugging him with something or torturing him…or both…I've seen a lot of kids with messed up lives…and he's acting like every one of them."")

#59: In chapter eleven, I typed: "I always pictured here in tears, yelling at me for worrying her and not telling her sooner." (What I meant to type was "I always pictured her in tears, yelling at me for worrying her and not telling her sooner.")

#60: In chapter twelve, I typed: ""It does say who…"" (What I meant to type was ""It doesn't say who…"")

#61: In chapter twelve, I typed: "A tattered mattress and black lay in the corner to serve as a bed." (What I meant to type was "A tattered mattress and blanket lay in the corner to serve as a bed."

#62: In chapter twelve, I typed: "He too a step toward Hiei, who didn't bother to take a step back or try to run, instead he just hung his head and began to sob." (What I meant to type is "He took a step toward Hiei, who didn't bother to take a step back or try to run, instead he just hung his head and began to sob.")

#63: In chapter thirteen, I typed: ""So, can't we just it to get to Hiei?" Kuwabara asked." (What I meant to type was ""So, can't we just use it to get to Hiei?" Kuwabara asked)

#64: In chapter thirteen, I typed ""Please don't be made," Kiren pleaded in Hiei's ear." (What I meant to type was ""Please don't be mad," Kiren pleaded in Hiei's ear.")

#65: In chapter fourteen, I typed: ""Hiei...?" Koenma said, slowly walking over to join the other." (What I meant to type was ""Hiei...?" Koenma said, slowly walking over to join the others.)

#66: In chapter fourteen: I typed "He looked up at the sky, best the could anyways." (What I meant to type was "He looked up at the sky, best he could anyways.")

#67: In chapter fourteen: I typed "He watched the hybrid teen cry in front of them..." (What I meant to type was "He watched the hybrid teen cry in front of him...")

#68, #69, and #70: In chapter fifteen: I typed "The temperature seemed too increased, only slight, the closer he got to the ground…maybe a degree or two." (What I meant to type was "The temperature seemed to increase, only slightly, the closer he got to the ground…maybe a degree or two.")

#71: Chapter Fifteen: ""I see," The person said. "A pyro are you?" He stepped closer to Hiei, who held his ground firmly. "Let me see your flame." Hiei hesitated. "C'mon now," Hiei held out his hand and, with little spirit energy, created a small flame. "Ahh," the person said amazed. "You're not like the others. Your flame's different." The person chuckled again. "Just like the old lord's…." He paused briefly. "Maybe I do have use for you," he said. "Come with me." He began to walk away." (There's really no mistake here, I just wanted to point out that Hiei's flame is different b/c it's black and purple; Hiei fans should already know this…but incase you didn't, you do now.)

#72: In chapter sixteen, I typed "He was sharing this room with Koenma, who also awake in the bed across from his." (What I meant to type was "He was sharing this room with Koenma, who was also awake in the bed across from his.")

#73: In chapter seventeen, I typed "A sick chuckle maid them all whirl around." (What I meant to type was "A sick chuckle made them all whirl around.")

#74: In chapter seventeen, the entire rape scene was kinda screwed up…I already explained that, I'll make sure to do better in the future…

#75: In chapter seventeen, I typed "He too the clothing and began to dress him." (What I meant to type is "He took the clothing and began to dress him.")

#76: In chapter eighteen, I typed ""You're servant just said that two spirits escaped; Kiren's and someone else."" (What I meant to type was ""Your servant just said that two spirits escaped; Kiren's and someone else.""

#77: In chapter eighteen, I typed "When the door closed Jaganshi smiled as Hiei lying on the bed." (What I meant to type was "When the door closed Jaganshi smiled at Hiei lying on the bed.")

#78: In chapter nineteen, I typed "He explained as he grabbed an ice pack from the freeze." (What I meant to type was "He explained as he grabbed an ice pack from the freezer.")

#78: In chapter nineteen, I typed ""So that is huh?"" (What I meant to type was ""So that's it huh?""

#79: In chapter twenty, I typed ""I didn't realize it would make Kuwabara so mad…"" (What I meant to type was ""I didn't realize it would make Kurama so mad…")

#80: In chapter twenty, I typed "She had gently black eyes and pale skin." (What I meant to type was "She had gentle black eyes and pale skin.")

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Wow….80 mistakes in 20 chapters….that's 4 mistakes per chapter…Jesus, I'm surprised fanfiction didn't take it off. Uhm…I just wanted to make this chapter to show that I'm human and I make mistakes. Just in case you didn't notice, the ENTIRE fanfic was Hiei's Journal entry…if you don't get it, go back and read the first chapter, then read the last paragraph of the last chapter. Cool, right? Also, I wanted to report that my rehab nurse Shawn Rowntree, died on February 15th, 2007….he was 28 years old. Quite ironic though; when I was in rehab during one of our personal times, he told me that if he could die on a particular day it would be the day after Valentine's day because he would have already shown his love to everyone. He had been diagnosed with brain cancer and never told anyone…guess he didn't want people to worry. Nice guy; I'm going to miss him.

"100 people can bring you down, but it only takes 1 person to bring you all the way back up."

Shawn Rowntree

April 20, 1978-Februray 15, 2007