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Kim's POV

I spun around to the song laughing and dancing with Carmen while blowing kisses at Jared. I guess I spun a little too much because I ended up getting dizzy and falling into some guy. He grabbed me by my arms and steadied me.

"I am so sorry!" I said embarrassed as Carmen laughed hysterically. He looked down at me and smiled. He was kind of cute with curly hair and brown eyes but of course he was nothing compared to Jared.

"I'm not," he said smiling.

"You will be," I heard a deep and familiar voice say. The guy backed off and I spun around right before I heard a scream.

"Jake!" Rachel exclaimed throwing herself at him. He laughed and picked her up spinning her around. "You came!"

He sat her to her feet and smiled fondly at her. "I wouldn't miss my little big sister's birthday," he said.

"Jake!" I said and it was my turn to throw myself at him. "I've missed you." He hugged me tight lifting me off my feet.

"Alright you can put her down now," Jared said possessively. He smiled fondly at Jake and they did their guy handshake thingy.

"Hey I just handed your dirty work and scared a guy off, you owe me," he said laughing.

"Yeah well when Nessie is a grown woman I'll do the same thing for you," Jared said putting his arm around me.

"Hey kiddo, how's Nessie. When are you going to bring her by so she and Claire can play together again?" Emily asked giving him a kiss on the cheek.

"We can probably set something up tomorrow. Bells and Edward need a little time to their selves anyway," he said. He and Sam shook hands but still backed a little ways from each other because as Alphas it was hard for them to be too close without feeling tension.

"So nobody sees me?" Embry asked I laughed and hugged him.

"We see you at school every day so no, we're not too excited," I said. He pouted.

"Aww Embry I missed you!" Carmen announced throwing her arms around him and kissing his cheek. Brady scowled but didn't say anything. Embry smiled at her and let her go and Brady quickly went to her side and placed his arm around her.

The rest of the night followed with us dancing and stopping the guys from fighting other guys for touching us or checking us out. I even got Jared to dance with me a little and he has completely no rhythm to speak of but it was so cute! I was not as drunk as I had been earlier in the year but I was still intoxicated and as such I was a bit more…festive then normally.

"I love you," I told Jared for the umpteenth time as I threw myself against him.

He laughed and held me close kissing my forehead. "I love you too sweetheart," he said.

We left the club and I could not walk in my shoes so I opted to go barefoot. Of course Jared being overprotective didn't want me to step on a piece of glass or something so he carried me to the car which was fine with me. Suddenly the guys decided that they had to use the bathroom and Rachel and I groaned. Instead of going inside a gas station or something they just went into the woods to pee. Talk about animals. Rachel hopped on the front of her car and lay down sighing loudly.

"Arggh, what's taking them so long?" she asked throwing her hands up in the air. I laughed.

"You know dogs always have to go to the bathroom," I said. She giggled.

"Maybe they've gone to mark their territory," she said and laughed hysterically.

"I'm surprised they haven't tried to do the same to us," I said laughing with her.

"They have! I have the bite marks to prove it!" she announced and for some reason that was so funny that I fell on the ground laughing.

"Hello ladies," a male voice said.

"Oh god not again," Rachel groaned. I got up on shaky feet and saw three guys standing there looking at us.

"Hi yourself," Rachel said sitting up and shaking out her hair.

"Me and my pals are heading to an after party and we were wondering if you wanted to join us," he said.

"Sorry, we got plans," Rachel said standing up.

"Well maybe we can join in?" he asked.

"Well aren't you the persistent one," Rachel laughed. "But no, you can't. Sorry." She turned to face me and the guy grabbed her arm.

"Wait a minute baby. We're you going?" he asked.

"Hey, let go of her!" I said pulling her other arm. Rachel yanked at her arm.

"Get your fucking hands off me. I said no," she spat.

He laughed and pulled her against him. "Come on baby you don't really mean that."

"We're not by ourselves our boyfriends are here," I said when he didn't let go. I tried to pry his hands off but one of his friends grabbed me by my waist and spun me against him.

"Really?" he whispered in my ear. I shivered in disgust.

"Yeah they are assholes and if you value your life you'll let us go!" Rachel yelled struggling against him. They just laughed.

"Baby I don't run from nobody," he said squeezing her ass. All of a sudden the guy holding me let out a yelp and he snatched away from me so fast that I lost my balance and fell on the ground. I looked up and saw Jared lifting him in the air with one hand around his neck and baring his teeth at him. The guy who was holding Rachel immediately let her go and Paul stalked him with a menacing look on his face.


Omg...what's going to happen? I can't take the suspense! Lol you know what to do if you want to find out...But don't despair because I have a treat for you. Here is my promised excerpt from my new story "Second is the Craziest" hope you like it!


*From Rachel's POV*

For some reason I decided I wanted to look nice when I went over to Emily's. Not for any particular reason…yeah right! I had this tightening in the pit of my stomach and I felt really anxious. I decided to put a head band around my head and traded my shorts for some jeans and a white v-neck shirt. The girls needed some attention too! I didn't want to put on any make-up because I thought maybe I would look a little too eager. So I grabbed my sandals and put them on and ran some lip gloss over my lips. I looked in the mirror and shrugged. Not too shabby.

"Rachel," my dad called. "You're escort is here." I rolled my eyes at that one. I went downstairs and I could immediately feel my heart knocking against my ribcage. What the…? And then I realized why. Standing in the living room with Billy was Paul Lionel. Gosh he was yummy. He was now wearing a black t-shirt, much to my disappointment, with a pair of cargo shorts and some tennis shoes. I smiled slightly at him.

"Nice to see you again Paul," I said. His face completely lit up when he looked at me. He looked me up and down appreciatively and I cocked an eyebrow at his boldness. He just smiled.

"You too Rachel," then he turned to look at my father. "Alright Billy I'll see you later." I went over to him and kissed his cheek.

"Bye daddy. I have some leftovers in the fridge for you so there's no excuse to order pizza," I chided. He laughed.

"Oh darn."

I followed Paul out the door and we walked in companionable silence for a minute. Never one to be quiet for too long I turned to speak and was shocked to realize he was staring at me again.

"So are you gonna tell me what was up with you and my brother earlier?" I asked.

"Uhhh…" he started and shoved his hands in his pockets. I stopped walking and crossed my arms to look at him.

"I'm not going anywhere with you until you tell me," I said when he still hadn't spoken.

"Look I'll tell you I promise. Just not now. I have to…figure some things out first," he said.

I humphed and continued walking.


As you can probably see Rachel is the complete opposite of our dear sweet Kim and I hope you guys are looking forward to the story. It's completely finished now and I'll start posting it after this story is done. Anyway don't forget to weiver! Let's get 5 more reviews before the next update!