A/N: I am sorry it took forever to update I'm just…not feeling the story. Suggestions are greatly appreciated, reviews are awesome, and spreading the word about this story is just as great. I have made a goal to get at least a hundred reviews. When xxCastleFanxx had the story there were over a hundred but now there is less than half that and it makes me feel like it's my fault so spread the word and if you haven't reviwed yet then PLEASE do!
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Poor Sam…I don't blame her for crying. If someone's blood was dripping onto my face i'd even be upset. On the ceiling above Sam was a fresh message of blood on the ceiling.
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An arrow pointed to a door and they could hear a screaming. Oh my god…is that…Carly?" I asked. Shane looked upset but still staid focused on the task.
"Carly?" he yelled knocking on the door. No answer, just the sound of crying. Shane took a few steps back and ramed the door. The door broke open and we ran through. The first thing we noticed in the room we entered was no Carly. The second thing we noticed was a recorder device playing screams and cries from Carly. The next thing we noticed was something hiding in the shadows.
"You guys…" Shane started. "We need to get out of the room NOW" Shane backed out of the door and ran into a shadow. He turned around and pointed the flashlight at the figure. The axeman! Sam screamed. We ran back into the room and the door closed and locked. I pounded on the door and heard an evil laugh from the murderer on the other side. The only possible way out was the one door in the room but we all remained bothered by what could possibly be in the corner.
"What do you think is in there?" I asked.
"Dead bodies, the killer, Carly raped, the creature devouring another teen, the psyhco girl with a knife…" Chris started.
"Oh shut up Chris" I said.
I felt Sam stiffen and shiver. "Oh shut up Chris" I said. I grabbed for her hand and surprisingly she smiled. I heard a loud crunch and turned to the shadow in the corner. Aparently I wasn't the only one who heard it. Chris had pulled out his gun. We heard a growl. Shane turned the flashlight to the shadow to reveal the creature gnawing on a human bone.
"Run!" Shane yelled, opening the door and running through with Sam and I following. Chris grinned evilly.
"Chris!" Sam tried to get his attention to urge him out the door
"I want to give this thing what it deserves for killing Mark and Jack. It's going down." The creature got up and began circling him.
"But don't you want to help us find Carly?" Shane asked.
"What? This was the only reason I came here. To send the bastard to hell" Chris tossed his gun to me. I gave him a confused look.
"You could use this more and anyway I want it to die a slow painful death." Chris motioned for Shane to give him the crowbar and he didn't object.
"We have to go, be careful" I said and we ran through the door and into a hallway. The door closed behind us and locked. We heard a scream and a howl followed by banging and growls. It was hard to tell what was going on in there but it seemed like Chris has finally found someone his own size. The next hallway contained three doors.
"Looks like we have to separate." Shane said. "I'll take this door and Sam can take that one and Freddie can take the last." I gave Sam an I'm-sorry-we-can't-be-together look.
"I'll be fine dork" she said uneasily."I don't need you"
I smiled but felt a slap in the face, a punch in the gut, or really it was a stab in the heart. I really really wish she did because I need her. I can't live anymore without her loving me. I gave Sam one last smile and opened the door. It was darker than even the tunnel and my flashlight cast a ray of light. The room was filled with puppets, costumes, statues, and machinical funhouse figures. It sent shivers down my spine. I walked around carefully, expecting something to jump out at any second.
"Carly?" I whispered. Nothing. "Carly?" I tried again. For some reasom my voice wouldn't rise past a whisper. I hated this so much. I should go back to Sam. I turned around to the door but it wouldn't open. Of course. I shown my light around for anything that I could pick the lock with. One of the full size statues had a pin on their shirt. I reached for the flower clip on the clown. As I undid the pin the hand on the clown got caught on my wrist. Wait a minute. It wasn't caught. It was grabbing my wrist. I tried to pull away but the clown refused. It wasn't a statue, I realised. It was someone in a costume. Well this ain't good. I heard a blood curdling scream.
"Sam?" I yelled. There was no answer, just screaming from the room over where Sam had entered. I used all of my might to pull from the clown and broke free only to have me fall backwards. The thing pinned me to the ground and was starring down at me. I screamed and wiggled from under it. I quickly did what I've seen Sam do many times to pick the lock. I sucessfully unlocked it and ran out the door, locking it behind me.
"Sam! I'm coming to help!" I ran to the door Sam had gone through and screaming could still be heard. I tried the knob but it was locked. Again I used the pin to unlock it and rushed through the door. I shone my flashlight around and gasped.
Meanwhile.
Shane's point of view.
I walked into the room and shone my flashlight around b"Carly?" I saw something quiver in the corner. I walked over to it and shone my light revealing Carly smiling at me.
"Shane! You found me!"
I ran over to her with a a grin plastered on my face.
"No!" She put her hand out. "Don't come closer"
"Why? Carly, I know your probably angery for leaving you but I couldn't let you risk your life. If I would have known It would bring you danger I woud have never done it. I love you Carly Shay" I confessed. She just stood there smiling.
"Shane! You found me!" she repeated. I gave her an odd look.
"Ya-"
"No!" She put her hand out. "Don't come closer"
"Wait a minute!" Shane put his hand on her cheek. It was cold and…not real? Her head popped out and rolled on the floor with mouth wide open. I stepped backwards toward the door. I felt something touch my back. I swung around to find the axe killer again I was about to scream when a gag was stuffed in my mouth. My screams were silenced completely. I tried to run but where would I run? I tried to hide but there was no where to hide. I tried to fight but everything went black.
A/N: Again Shane is not dead just knocked out. Chris's fate is being decided and as for Sam and Freddie…let's just say they are in for a scare. Carly is going to be found soon but who knows how long it will take to save her. If you haven't read my new story iMust save humanity then please do.