ATTENTION
I, GreatMarta, am SERIOUSLY considering rewriting this story.
Being truthful, I've been on a very weak mental condition lately. I've got myself a psychologist and need to learn to break the invisible wall between me and the rest of the world.
I seem kinda like Hro, heh? I'm feeling more miserable than I usually do. The only joy in my life is writing, and I feel that this story, which is so far my longest, sounds like a work of an amateur. I'm not satisfied with it. I feel it could be much better. That feeling just keeps on bothering me.
Now, I have a HUGE request to you: if there is anything to NGZ that bothers/annoys/irritates you in particular, tell me. It's the time that I have to sit down and think: How can I make my story better?
And, of course: sorry. I'm being hard to deal with (InnerGM,,Being"? Neh, you simply ARE hard to deal with.). Anyway, that's all. Thanks for the attention.