Hey guys, I am finally back. I am so, so sorry that I didn´t update in such a Long time, but like I said, I was on vacation for two weeks. After that, school started again and our teachers keep us very, very busy with lots of homework and tests for which I have to study. Good grades don´t fly into my arms you know, so I have to do some studying. My updates from now on may take way longer than just 2 to 3days because of School. So, again sorry but I had good reasons.

So, now to a little bit more pleasant matters. Reviews, Favourites and Follows. To this Topic is my comment:

I am speachless. Wow, just wow. 12 new Reviews, nearly 30 new favourites and even more follows. Guys, you are just awesome.

I also got a few Reviews where I think that I need to answer, but as they are Guests, I can´t do this via PM-ing, so´ll just do it here.

Guest: if hestia fell in love that easily, how come she doesn't have kids? unrealistic the grammar was bad and I personally believe that a couple chapter need to be spent on his formative years
definitely needs a rewrite

okay, this one left me a little shocked, if I am honest. first, why they fell in love that easily will be explained in this chapter, I planned this, so read on. second: I do know that grammar is my weak spot, but considering that I am 15 and all the English i am capable of was taught at School, I am okay with it, if you are not, feel free to tell me what I did wrong and I will correct it. To the topic of the rewrite. I believe that at the Moment it just doesn´t make any sense. I don´t get the knowledge of perfect grammar in one night y´know, so this will probably wait until I now that my grammar improved that much that it makes sense to do this. But thanks for the Review anyway :) I need to be told, what exactly I do wrong.

Flaming: May I say you did great, also bit annoyed at you, as you made me laugh very loudly in class while reading making everyone think I am a lunatic. I love your stories.

Thank you very much and you may. :3 If I was a grown up and good writer, I would suggest that you don´t read in your classes, they are important. BUT, I am not grown up and probably very childish and if I am honest, i read in my classes too, so I am happy if you like it :) I am also sorry that I made you laugh that hard, but if it helps, it happened to me too by someone elses´ story. I had a full laugh session and my whole class and the teacher looked very strangely at me, what made me only laugh harder. XD

Da Truth:

You make Percy sound like a pedophile in the beginning describing Hestia.

Thank you for the help. As soon as I read it, I fixed it. It was actually a speling mistake, so I am sorry for letting him sound like that, it wasn´t meant that way. So, thank you :3 It´s fixed now.

brandonthehuman:

no offence dude but the LOVE thing went too fast.i mean they just met and they are already talking about to fast

I know, but there a few reasons actually. The first, it is my first fan fiction, so I am new to the whole writing and author thing. I try to keep mistakes at bay, but it doesn´t always work like that. Second, I planned it. If you read the next chapter, some things will be explained. And the thing that got to me the most: I AM NOT A DUDE! I am a girl and I would like to keep it that way (it´s even on my Profile, so read it and then write your answer!) But anyway, thanks for the tip, I try to make things better.

If I am honest, I am a little angry that the Reviews that has critic for my story are mostly written from guests, so that I don´t get the chance to answer them personally, what would be way less embarassing for both, me and you. Anyway, I can´t tell you what you have to do and am none the less very happy about EVERY Review I get. So Keep reviewing :3

Me: Whoohoo, 99 favourites for this story, sooooo awesome!

Percy: Yay, People love me"

Me: they also love me, cause I am writing this. So, ha!

Hestia: *Looks irritated at the two* Shut up and don´t bicker in front of the Readers. Go on with the chapter!

Me: Yeah yeah, I am coming to this, but first I need someone to do the Disclaimer.

Eros: Uh, uh me, take me!

Me: No one! Why wants no one to do it?

Eros: Please, I´ll do it, take me, I´ll do it, I am here!

Me: Ugh, fine. I have to do it myself, it seems.

*cough*cough* I don not own any of the Percy Jackson characters as well as the books PJO and HoO.

Now, that this horrible part is over, on to the actual chapter. Enjoy!


~ Chapter 21~

Hestia pov

I watched amused, as Thalia shouted at Perseus for training this son of Zeus. I wasn´t sure, what to think of this situation. On one side, I was happy that we had two children of Zeus on our side, on the other, if they couldn´t control their temper, then it will most probably come to a fight in our own forces. Ugh, I was way too worried, like always. I was surprised as Perseus laid his arm around my waste and hugged me to his body. I blushed slightly but smiled gratefully at him for bringing me out if these thoughts. He shot me a questioning look, but I shrugged it off and he understood.

We walked together, his arm still around my waist to the big house. We had to inform Chiron of our new information and maybe summon a meeting with the head councilors. Ugh, why couldn´t it be peaceful for once. It would be nice just to date Percy, marry and see what the future brings, but instead we have to fight for the future, so that why may have one. And should we lose, they´ll probably torture us and then kill us slowly, so that we will beg to fade.

"Wow, Hestia. I would´ve never guessed how dark your thoughts are. I thought they are all pink fluffy unicorns and stuff, but that you would think about torture is something new." He teased me. I blushed at this but then got a shocked expression. Could he read my thoughts?

"Yes, I can. I am the heir to Chaos, the person who created this universe. I think that mind reading isn´t that special if you compare it to the other cool shit I can do." He said, a playful smile creeping its way on his face.

"And why, if you don´t mind me asking-" here he interrupted me. "And why didn´t I tell you about this ability? Simple, I didn´t want to scare you. I also use this power really rare, ´cause I think that everyone deserves their personal space. I only read your thoughts, because you were so lost in them. Then, while you thought, you got a fearful expression and I didn´t know why. I was worried about you. It could´ve been, that Order did something to your mind and I didn´t want this to happen. So, please don´t be mad at me." He said with his best pleading look. Wow, that´s a dam (Someone get the hint? :D None? No, oh okay. I´ll just continue then…)cute look, so I couldn´t stay mad at him. Damn it, this man will be the downfall of me.

Perseus pov ~

As I saw Thalia lose, I couldn´t help but be proud of Jost. Even though he won, he still didn´t act like his former arrogant self and he didn´t say anything bad about her. Instead, he offered her his hand to get up, something I didn´t expect him to do. I also felt satisfied that she lost a fight against someone else other than me. She needed to get her ass handed; at least now and then, otherwise she would become too arrogant and we wouldn´t want this now, would we? ;)

I chuckled lightly to myself, what earned me a few questioning glances from the campers, but especially Hestia; the ways of the daughter of Zeus always amused me. In my musings, my thoughts drifted away to the one person that shifted my life a lot lately.

Hestia.

I then thought for the first time of our relationship. I mean from a little distance. I loved her –I really did- with all my heart, but I couldn´t help but think that this went way too fast, I was sure of it. I mean, we kissed on our first date- why? I felt something for her back then, but I was sure that it couldn´t have been strong enough to kiss her.

And that was when a thought struck me.

What is, if someone messed with my feelings? Ugh! If I find the one, who did this, and I swear that I will find him/her, I´ll kick this person´s ass and then hug him/her, but first the person will get it. And I may have an idea, on who was the one responsible for my messed up love life; I knew that I was going to visit this person, primordial to be exact, soon, and with soon, I mean NOW. I excused myself from Hestia, what earned me a few questioning looks and with a bright flash of light I was gone.

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I arrived at my destination with mixed feelings. If my ideas are true, then I´ll get very, very angry at the Primordial responsible for this… Therefore I stood at the entrance to a very big, pink painted house and knocked on the door. It was a little bit more forceful than I wanted it to be, because the sound could be heard over a very large distance, even a few streets away.

Back to the matter at hand. The door opened and revealed the face of one of my best friends (until now): Eros, personification of love.

"Perseus, my friend!" He shouted with fake glee as he saw me, but could clearly see the fear in his eyes. "What brings you here, my friend?" He was a very good actor and charm speaker, but I trained hard my whole live long and could easily see through his mask. "Eros, cut the crap. You know exactly why I am here and I demand answers. NOW!" I said sternly with a very cold voice. He shivered slightly under my glare, which caused a feeling of satisfaction within me.

He sighed deeply at this, head down in shame and motioned for me to come in. "Alright, I am going to tell you. You listen and make yourself a place at the couch, ´cause this may take a while." He motioned for me to take a seat on his strange sofa.

His living room was very big, but comfortable none the less. Only the colours were really not my style. Most of the furniture was a bright pink, the colour of love. It looked like a little girl lived here (An\ no offence to all those of you that like the colour pink). The walls and doors were a bright white; only confirming my thoughts.

"Soooo, now let´s talk. What did you do, and more importantly, why?" I asked with venom on my voice. He shifted nervously in his seat, clearly uncomfortable with this situation. "Ugh, he had to find this out, didn´t he?" muttered Eros under his breath. "Fine" He gave in. "You surely remember when I said that you would have to marry a sworn maiden" He began. I wasn´t sure where this was going, to be honest, I nearly forgot it because of the war and all the stress. "Yeah, I remember, but what does it have to do with you messing up my feelings?" I asked, already annoyed at his antics. He sighed (again) and continued explaining.

"I foresaw what would´ve happened, if I hadn´t brought you and Hestia together. It is rather simple. You see, I can make a normal person fall in love with whoever I want. Be it a human, demigod, god or even titan, they all fall under my realm. But Primordials, they are different. We can feel love, no doubts there, but it´s different from the love "normal" people feel. How do I explain this? Uhm. Yes, that´s it.

When a human or demigod falls in love with someone, I mean really in love and not only some kind of crush, then they usually are the rest of their life together, always by the others´ side. With the gods and titans it is a little different. They too, can feel love, but it is nothing like that of a mortal. It is more of an extreme crush thing. They love their partners/husbands/wives etc. but they can only barely stay faithful, what leads to affairs, those bringing demigods. The same is for the titans.

We Primordial love in another way. If we fall in love then it is little bit like a human love, we stay together for a very long time. What makes it different is that if we fall in love with another woman, we love this woman as much as the first one. We are able to love more than one woman with all our heart and no one would say something against a Primordial that has more than only on wife. Most of us have had more than only one love, but we would always be faithful with our heart to each other. Our "spirits" if you will, are made to love at least two other persons. If you look closely, you will see that there is no Primordial that hasn´t had less than two lovers, other than you, that is." He finished, really out of breath by now.

Wow, now I am even more confused as before. "And yet again, what has that to do with you messing up our feelings?" I asked. Slowly, I got frustrated. I am the Primordial of fucking SHREWDNESS, I should KNOW this. But nooooo, I am getting more confused every second. He looked up at me, a slightly sad look in his eyes.

"See it like this. Yes, I manipulated her and your feelings, but I had a good reason. The real reason you have to marry isn´t just because of my blessing. See, Perseus, you have much power in you, more than probably even Chaos can imagine. The problem is that power comes always with a great price. The reason I said that you´d have to marry a sworn maiden, is to stabilize your powers. Every Primordial needs eventual someone we are bound to. These persons stop the power within us to get free, because... ugh, it´s just hard to explain. Anyway, normally one loved woman would be enough for an "average" Primordial, you power instead would at least need three to four. Lucky for you, I knew that you wouldn´t want that many woman, so I searched for solutions.

First, I found none. That is until I came to the one where you´d be bound to a maiden. Her oath, then broken oath would stabilize your powers, so that you wouldn´t be a danger to the rest of the whole universe. The time I gave you, would´ve been enough if Nyx hadn´t adopted you. This gave you even more power and so I had to improve your feelings for each other."

I nodded at this, understanding where he was going with this. "But, if it is like you say, then why didn´t I destroy the universe already?" He thought about this and then shook his head. " I really don´t know Perseus. Maybe Chaos dimmed your powers or he stabilized them. Sadly, he can´t do this forever. With Gaea, Tartarus or Hydros it would most likely be possible, but seeing that you are even more powerful than Chaos, he doesn´t have enough power to hold this shield without falling into a very deep sleep." Now I understood and was even more greatfulf for Chaos. Over 26 000 years did he use his powers constantly to keep e from exploding. I would definitively have to thank him for that later.

"Uhm, Eros, I have another question though. You messed up Hestia and my feeling, but even though I would appreciate it if you could stop it, I would really like to know, if Hestia will keep loving me?" I asked hesitantly, not sure if I wanted to know his answer. Now he got a knowing smirk on his face.

"Now, there is the lovesick Percy I want to have." He said, a mischievous twinkle, that I really didn´t like, in his eyes. "Yes, she will love you. I didn´t need to make you fall in love with her or wise versa, the love was already there, I merely sped up the progress. That means, no worries, she will love you." He finished. I did the only thing that came to my mind then.

I punched him in the face. Very hard. His nose was broken and blood was dripping out of it. His left eye began to swill and got very red. I then hugged him. He was very shocked and I wished that I had a camera, because his expression would´ve been perfect blackmail.

"That was for messing with Hestia and my feelings. Even if I am grateful that I now have her, I still would suggest to you that you don´t do anything like this again, if you want your manhood intact." I whispered in his ear. His eyes got wide lie plates and had a look of pure fear and terror in them. Yeah, I should probably don´t hang out with an ex-huntress *cough*cough*Thalia*cough*cough.

"Understood?" I asked in my deep and powerful voice.

He nodded so fast, I thought his head would pop up from his shoulders. "O-of-f c-course m-my l-lord." He stuttered. I nodded satisfied and turned around.

As I walked out of the room my last words were what would fear the shit out of him. "Oh and by the way, Hestia will be very pleased to know about her actions, because I am going to speak with her about it."

There was a white, blinding flash of light then, and I was gone, leaving a terrified but pleased Eros behind.


Thanks for reading. I hope you liked it and will Review and tell what you like and didn´t like in this. Please tell me if and what mistakes I made, it really helps me. Thank you :)

Until next chapter

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