Hola lovelies! I am not feeling well but am buzzed on a mass amount of caffeine. I haven't eaten all week and got a piercing headache when playing baskety ball Monday. And yesterday I drank crack… XD ok! 2AM, lets do this thing.
Disclaimer: Were you dropped on your head as a child?
Dedication: OH EM FUCKING GEE! I looove all people who reviewed. You guys make my life. Keep going. And don't worry about them being tedious for me to read or anything. I spend an average of 5 hours a day on the computer and I love being distracted from my homework so please go right ahead. Analyze the whole first chapter. Find a deeper meaning of a paragraph in 17. Suggest rewriting chapter 3's fourth paragraph. Tell me to get a life! I love reading you guys's comments and I love positive feedback, constructive critism not so much but still. Feel free to write me a novel about how much u love chapter 15 much more than 20 and how I need to get a life really badly and how I have a rambling problem and how over the chapters I seem to involve into a totally different person. Anything. Anything to distract me from my horrible existence.
WHEN WE EVER GET TO A NEW SETTING….
I was too numb, shocked, couldn't find the words, were there even words? We had screwed it all up. The whole thing was spiraling downward, going to crash at the bottom. I looked from the sobbing Serenity to Aelita, what if she never woke up? What would we do? Call Jeremy? What would he be able to do? How would he react? What if we had fucked it all up too much for him to fix? I cracked my knuckles one by one, unaware of my surroundings, breath shallow.
It seemed very quiet. Serenity had stopped sobbing. She was beside Aelita, checking her pulse, mumbling to herself something about fixing this. She looked at me, face streaked with tears but eyes hard. "She's alive."
I wasn't sure how to react. I guess the thought had never occurred to me that she might not even be alive. In my mind I had just pictured her being in a coma or something.
Serenity was poking her, snapping her fingers, clapping her hands, trying to get her to wake up. She paused, putting her thumb and forefinger to her chin in thought. She reached into her pockets and took out her phone. After pressing several buttons her phone screamed in Jeremy's voice "Hey! Wake up!" I smacked my palm to my forehead.
"I don't even want to know why you have that on your phone." I said to her. She grinned and pressed the play button again.
"Hey! Wake up!" the phone repeated in Jeremy's voice. Aelita's eyelids fluttered. Serenity smiled softly as her eyes slowly opened. She started to sit up but Serenity stopped her with her hand.
"Just rest there awhile. Welcome to earth by the way."
"Is there something wrong?" Aelita asked, looking first at Serenity then at her surroundings, her eyes landing on me. She looked confused. "Why was I asleep? Did something happen during the virtualization process?"
Tears were beginning to shine in Serenity's eyes again. "What's wrong? Why are you crying?" Aelita asked, her voice wavering and starting to sound panicked.
Serenity sniffed and the tears were instantly gone. "I…I…I…"she started again and again but couldn't form words. She shook her head clear, opened her mouth to speak, but instead handed her the paper handout. Aelita's eyes scanned it. "I'm sorry." Serenity said very softly. She threw the page aside and hugged Serenity.
"Its alright honey." Serenity looked very surprised. "It'll all turn out just fine. I'm sure if we all work together we can figure out how to fix it. What matters is…" she let go of Serenity and examined her hands. "I'm here. In real life. And it's going to be great."
By now everyone was all smiles. Aelita tried to stand up but couldn't get the hang of walking. It was getting around 2:30AM so Serenity scooped her up and carried her out of the factory. We exchanged goodbyes and went our separate ways.
Hmmm. I kind of hate how I ended this. But I've rewritten it too much already and can't get it right. Au revior le lovelies. I spelled that wrong didn't I?…..
