I swear by all that is holy this will be the last note for this! I have finally gotten off my lazy butt and fixed a lot of the grammar for this, but if you guys notice any more (which I'm sure you will )': please tell me. Also I am working on the sequel right now, it is taking more time then I thought because of my other story but hopefully it will be up by tonight or tomorrow :D
I also want to thank all you guys for reading/ reviewing/ everything else. You guys are completely awesome. again any spelling issues please tell me, and thank you guys :D smiles for everyone!