The results are in!
I've taken into account, my work progress on this, the spelling errors, the time-line errors, the characters I would like to change, the way the story flows, and the many suggestions from reviewers and my friends who read this and the result is...
I'm re-doing My Other Life!
I thank all who have stuck through this this long, and I would hug you and love you forever if I knew who you were, but I don't stalk people (except my friend Jennitachi (it's really Jenny but she looks like Itachi's daughter so we call her Jennitachi! x3)) and so I will have to suffer with internet hugs and cookies!
As a courtesy, I'm keeping this one up for any who would like to read it in the future, or if you would like to compare it to the new version! n.n
So keep one metaphorical eye open to search for the first chapter of the new My Other Life. It will contain more family ties, less Yu Yu Hakusho (no matter how much I love it), more material, more yaoi, more insane people, less typos, less time-line errors, more bishounen and bishoujo (if I might say so myself (it means beautiful boys and beautiful girls)), replacement characters, more of the characters' past explained (and properly), and more of your favorite author and her new style to fix up this crap job (that was beautiful for a while until I started adding things...)!
Now, I shall sing a song from Naruto that I have memorized! (I know, pathetic, isn't it T.T) It's from near the end of the star village episodes... it's the lullaby. I'm pathetic... I don't have a life so I imagine one. T.T
Oh, and spoiler here! I can't beleive in the english version you can distinguish Deidara's gender from his voice and he still says un!
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Natsuhiboshi naze akai?
(Summer star, why are you red?)
Yuube kanashii yume wo mita.
(Last night I had a sad dream.)
Naite Hanashita.
(Crying as I talked.)
Akai me yo.
(Oh, red eyes.)
Natsuhiboshi naze mayou?
(Summer star, why are you lost?)
Kieta warashi wo sagashiteru.
(You are searching for we who disappeared.)
Dakara kanashii yume wo miru.
(That's why I have sad dreams.)
