YAS! Another chapter. CHpater 22 is still being written but I hope I can get it done soon. CHpater 22 could be my biggest chapter yet since we're finally reaching one of my main climaxes, and Maka's main character development. I'm really getting back into this story.


Blood streamed down Maka's face. Breathing grew harder by the second. She was sure something was internally damaged. Tears blurred her fading vision. Kid was constantly tugging her along. If she fell behind he would violently pull her along. Maka would try to get away but as time passed on her task grew harder. How long had they been walking? She asked herself this multiple times. Only a little while had she lost her voice from screaming Souls name as Kid took her away.

"Maka stop lagging, we have to hurry! He could be right behind us" Kid snapped, tugging her along. Maka only hoped Soul was behind them. Maka held a hand against where Soul kicked her. Was her side more indented than usual? Her touch sent her side up in flames of pain. Something was probably broken.

"Kid... please..." Maka slurred, the words coming out in barely a whisper.

"I'm going to kill him! I AM GOING TO KILL THAT MONSTER! Wait until your father finds-"

"NO!" Maka cried voice hoarse and throat burning. The tears streamed down her face quicker.

"I'll make sure he never sees another night! That.. That vampire!" Kid declared. Maka was shocked. How'd he know? Sure Soul had his fangs out to him but could Kid really figure it out just from that.

"Kid you can't" Maka pleaded.

"I will kill that monster before he causes more harm, no one can stop me!"

"I'll... I'll stop you! Because... Because.. BECAUSE I LOVE HIM!" Maka yelled. Kids grip loosened just enough for Maka to pull her hand away and run. She'd run back to Soul and tell him. Tell him she loved him. Explain to him her situation. Tell him everything and anything he wanted to know. Kid called her name behind her. Maka's dress caught on branches. She didn't stop running, even though her pain was unbearable. She tripped over a log, her skin splitting open and leaving blood smears all over the ground. Her ankle throbbed in pain. She got up and ran, even though it turned into a limp. As her vision started to fade so did the path. Suddenly it was under her anymore. Maka's body tipped forward. She saw raging rapids coming up quick. She screamed as wind whipped past her. Cold, angry water engulfed her. She scrambled for breath. Blood seeped into the water around her. Her limbs starting going numb. The cold waters slicing her as they rushed past her. A sharp pain shocked her head before her world went black.


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~Nya!