AUTHOR'S NOTE... Again
Maybe I didn't make it clear to you COLLISION, sorry for not knowing you were a girl at first. I do intend to change that whole thing at the beginning. I wasn't very attentive to anything at the time and had yet to take writing this stuff seriously at all. If my apology wasn't good enough, then I am sorry. I do intend to rewrite it and didn't have the intention of stealing the rest of your plot or anything like that. I took your opening like that, for which I am deeply sorry, and have no intention of waiting until you update just to take your ideas... Again. So you can feel comfortable to continue your story for your other readers who have been waiting patiently for you to do so.
I am actually rather embarassed of the story so I may just not even continue it. It is a result of bad writing and shows the bad side I have as an author, before I improved. I once again am sorry for offending you.
It would make it easier to respond to you if you were using an account I could reply to when you review my stories so that I don't have to keep adding on additions to the story like this.
Omce again, very, deeply, and completely sorry and regret wronging you in such a manner like I have. Feel free to say what you want since I do believe I deserve the insults and comments that are likely to come from you and others who read this and your reviews. Your comments don't change my views of you as a writer so feel free to insult and express your feelings and anger about my past actions. I also owe an apology to the writer community for having brought shame for what I have done.
Also, the XicorxMarron wasn't my idea, but it wasn't taken from you either. A reviewer wanted that pairing and I didn't completely agree, so I made it as a she likes him but him and her are an item situation. It wasn't to copy the pairing, I was just making a minor compromise to a suggestion.