Grand daddy of all my fanfics, a proper fanfic of mine (finally) is now over. I've spent 5 months, trying to gather more ideas since I really thought a short one wouldn't be too nice since all my stories are very short. You people gave me the impression and inspiration I needed to create my own ideas and make a good story at last. The stupid names from before had to say (those were human names) for the OCs but the new OCs I created finally have some proper names, Kreta may've sounded stupid but I couldn't find a nice name for him. Other than that, I thought of more proper MLP names and came up with many ideas to apply here in my first proper fanfic.
Thank you for all the feedback and support, I'll be making a proper Twilight and Flash story soon. I know it was maybe too long but I shared all the ideas I had for this OC of an OC character lazania story that I finally own myself. I've also improved my English at the last three chapters since I'm a foreigner to England or America etc. but I was able to fix the issues I always made before in the last three chapters.
This is my best work so far as I think, it only included one filler at the 5th chapter but I couldn't think of anything for that part. Otherwise there were many mature content in this story. Making a kid friendly story next (Twilight and Flash, a proper version) makes me happy and I'll feel better once I fully complete and share it.
In any words, chapter 1, 2 and probably 3 will come out for Twilight and Flash today, it'll be rated K+ (I guarantee that 99,9999%) but yeah, see you all on the new story soon.