The founding of Brokenclan
Review Answers:
Demiboo: of course I'll continue its always nice to see new reviewers!
Swiftstar1: ok I'm going to answer both your reviews yes it's sad what happened to Robin and I thought what Bat said was funny too!.
Imjaypaw: yes well that's mostly Robins doing he makes her feel important. Well I had to find a way to explain why Chirper follows Shadow around and none of what you have said has been offensive you're doing just fine.
Ginnystar: that was the idea Shadow has epilepsy and I had no idea what Chirpers thing was called.
Silverwind1313: yes master LOL!
Chapter 24: A real clan
Brokenwings POV
" Let all cats old enough to patrol gather here beneath the pebble-pile for a clan meeting" my call echoed through the camp and I watched my clan gather Splash and Fog walked out together and sat just under the pebble-pile while Bat and Chirper led Shadow, Cloud, and Flicker to the pebble- pile where the older cats sat together along with Pine and her kits. My gaze rested on Robin who sat leaning on Haze who kept him steady patiently.
"Cats of Brokenclan, we have been together for almost three moons and it is time for us to have names like clan cats, however Robin and I have decided we would like to wait until I have my lives and Starclans blessing before we perform the ceremonys. Brokenclan will hold its first gathering in two days at the full moon in a clearing Chirper and Shadow know is near here" Splash sunk his claws into the dirt and growled.
" How can we be real warriors if we don't have real warrior names?" Splash yowled I was about to jump down from the pebble-pile but Robin got there first, he stalked unsteadily towards Splash refusing Pines offer of help and hissed in his face.
" A real warrior doesn't need to have the name of one to remain loyal to his clan and his clan leader! The word of the clan leader is the warrior code! You piece of crow-food how dare you question Brokenwing!" scared Robin may lose his temper I quickly scrambled down from the pebble pile.
" That's enough Robin, the ways of the clans are still new to this apprentice he is obviously not ready to be made a warrior and when I do perform the naming ceremonies he can be a 'paw'!" Satisfied with my punishment Robin headed back to the medicine den with Haze helping him, Splash stalked off to hunt with Fog following him.
I sighed the last thing Brokenclan needed was to fight within ourselves but it seemed unavoidable, Great Starclan what was I going to do about Splash? One of Pines kits Amber came over to me her green eyes shone with wisdom, more than a kit her age should have.
" Starclan will not allow Splash to remain a problem, he will lose what he values most" the words did not sound like they came from a kit, in fact they had the air of a prophecy about them. The strange wisdom left Ambers eyes and she ran off to find Red.
I was just turning to go to my den when I heard the commotion outside camp and Splash's terrified scream." No Fog! Help please! No! No! No!".